Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2024 3:16 PM Title: A Rude Awakening

Another writer rewrote this badguy story, too. their version was excellent, and deleted.

i like this one! love the attention on linda's butt. that maternal big butt. a young woman who naturally has a very large and round butt, then matures and it's so big a young man could wrap his arms around it and his fingers don't even make her hips. and now he's 1 inch tall. hell yes. so i hope the attention on linda's butt means that something butt is going to happen to him.

the other rewrite never quite got there, OR got to the flatulent visiting aunt. hope this one does!

Author's Response:

I've read that think he lost the plot a little bit, but it was decent. Linda stuff is coming I promise.