Date: October 21 2024 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
You paint such a vivid picture, it's outstanding. Loved loved loved him falling asleep on Amanda's ass cheek, hot yet sweet lol
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Glad that you've enjoyed it so far! Next chapter should be going up very soon.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: September 19 2024 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a tease of a chapter haha, can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying so far. Hope you enjoy the new chapter as well!
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2024 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
This is pretty good so far. Would love to see portions of the story from Amanda’s perspective.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story. I don't think we'll be seeing much from Amanda's perspective. I don't want to rule it out, but for the most part its a story about Ryan's experiences. But ultimately that sort of call would be up to the commissioner. Hope you continue reading anyways!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2024 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Genuinely a very enjoyable chapter again. I really enjoy your writing style and seeing how you depict the characters, Pu capture the playfulness of the scene really well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I do think these characters are very fun to write about. Thanks so much for reading!!