Reviewer: ichie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2024 10:51 AM Title: Emasculation

Stories like this make me wish I could time travel, so I can check out the finished product. It is so gripping. It incentivizes me everytime to continue my own unfinished stories, in hopes to publishing them here someday. It is just so strainous to find the right words. That seeing my story play out in my head, thinking and meticulously planning it through is so, so much easier, while my actual writing is crawling at a snails pace and leaves me exhausted. 

Love how vulnurable Jack is, how he is already at the breaking point, while desperately trying to disarm the situation with reason and appeal to her 'goodness'. Still hope Caitlin turns out nice, once she showed him how easily she can break him, that he is at her total mercy. 

Reviewer: Curvograph Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2024 4:32 PM Title: Emasculation

It's great to see an update after a lengthy break, always a satisfying read. I can only hope the next installment follows soon.