[Report This]Date: September 16 2024 1:28 PM Title: A Nimiety of Feet
I almost lost this update! Hate when that happens!
Well, the cat is out of the bag. Or is it? Melanie and Alex are very harsh with each other, aren’t they? But this harshness, dare I say, seems to steam from deep desires for connections. Does she realize that? Does she know to be desperate enough to embarass herself in public while not stoping even once to check… to do what she did with the cashier, a complete stranger and take her mind off the “lump” between her toes. The same lump “Normally she would have flicked it somewhere to be forgotten but something compelled Melanie to look”.
What compelled her? Did she had reason to think Alex could be there? Did she imagined Alex down at her dirty sole? Yes...
Am I saying Melanie wasn’t unaware of her brother? On a conscious level Melanie seems to be unaware of many things regarding her and her brother. Everything is fun and games, just “messing around with Alex giving him much-needed social interaction”. It’s not like she wanted him to
compliment her toes or anything in the second chapter, right? Just… fun and games, like always.
I love when a story makes my imagination run wild. The devil… (or maybe Alex in Melanie’s case) is in the details ;)
Another great chapter! As always, thanks for writing and sharing with us!
PS.: I will check out the originas story. Thanks for the recommendation. There's just so many things to do and so many stories I want to read at the same time T_T
PS. 2: You say the original story is “miles better”, but I don’t know mate. Your story and main characters are pretty good themselves. Gold material here.
Date: September 15 2024 2:44 AM Title: A Nimiety of Feet
that was one of the best stories I`ve ever reed so far. not only it has a reasonable circumstances like the the tiny dude has to live in a hamster cage but also the fact that the younger sister is now treating her older brother as a baby pet is amazing. I love that there are no evil giantesses so far cuze that has ben repeated over and over and kindde become old news. hope to see his friend Tim as a giant and Alix being forced by some unaware circumstance to be at his friend`s Tim feet while he make out with his giantess girlfriend or something. not that Tim being evil no he still love him but just treating Alex as a little kid instead of a grownup now Alex is under 1 inch tall. also it would be interesting to see how will Alex be treated if there is kids around him among the teens and the adults including giant men. the uncomfortable touches and smells and all the nasty things that arent noticeable by the normal people but so clear for someone his size.
if you have a page on Divineart.com I will follow you there too.
good luck
[Report This]Date: September 14 2024 2:41 AM Title: A Nimiety of Feet
This is just absolutely epic, mate! Sadly, the unaware stuff is about to end. But glad she finally noticed her brother. Cant wait what will happen next. I hope this series mainly focuses on Melanie more. She's perfect!