Date: August 28 2025 6:36 AM Title: Small First Steps
I was just wondering if you were going to continue this story
Date: February 10 2025 2:23 AM Title: Small First Steps
by the way this is something I just saw on deviantart and well I thought of this story. With sweetie being a swimmer. The art was a about a tiny pet swimming in scuba gear in an fish tank/ aquarium. So just an idea for you. Cant wait to see this stroy come back, if is does.
Date: December 13 2024 6:38 PM Title: Small First Steps
So. Idea , I don’t know how long your time skip will be, but can sweetie examine the fact she was up her owners ass and left there for awhile. That is one of the most demeaning spots to put your pet ( and so fracking hot) in my opinion, like even being under her foot wouldn’t be as demeaning, she at least would get acknowledged there but up her ass, she could completely forget about her until sweetie starts moving
Author's Response: Whenever I get back to the trio I reckon it'll likely be set a few days after the journey home.
Sam will certainly have to get used to her more demeaning existence certainly!
Date: December 08 2024 8:38 PM Title: Small First Steps
Hi! I really liked your Anniversary Present story, and I consider it one of the best I've read in this genre. Tell me, if you are not planning to continue this particular story in the near future but want to write a new one, could we discuss what it will be about? I am also ready to offer my own version of the plot of the story and even sponsor its writing on a commercial basis. You are indeed one of the best authors I have read and I will not regret spending money if it means that you will write a story that I would like to see.
If you are interested, please write to me by e-mail: c22438148@gmail.com
Author's Response:
Hello! I am planning to do a part two for Anniversary down the line but I've wanted to try a few other stories in the meantime, I'm more than happy to hear any ideas of course, can't really consider commerical writing at present due to personal life factors.
I'd rather not contact by email, if you are on the GTSWorld Discord I'd be happy to be contacted on there under TheSuperDuper
Glad you enjoyed the story, its all new territory me :)
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 5:28 PM Title: Small First Steps
Love this story, and hope both Sam/Sweetie and Clara can come to a true understanding between owner and pet.
I like that Clara is starting to understand she can't just discard her previous history with Sweetie, since she was a mean girl student of hers that she has history with, and that she personally knows her parents. It's important to guide her new pet through this terrifying new time, and not neglect her like she had for the first week, making the young teen feel truly lost and scared.
I also hope Sam comes to a real concrete understanding that, fair or not, she's not an independent being with a future of her own choosing anymore, she needs to find peace, and I hope, happiness where she can find it with the circumstances dealt to her, and hopefully keep a friendly relationship with her lovely owners, regardless of how often they 'use' her.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I'm rooting for the pair of them like you, Clara and Sweetie both deserve to find that happiness, its just a case of taking time understandably for both to comfortably settle into their new roles.
Date: November 15 2024 12:55 AM Title: Small First Steps
So I had is thought I do like scenes where the pet has to be regersteres with the gov and maybe chipped and colored (just to help seal the deal for the tiny) would that be a scene typing would be interested in.
Also I love the playfulness Clara has, also I love the hints you made with toys and I can’t wait to read them.
I like what you have written but I do think you need an editor or to give your sentences a few passes. Just a friendly suggestion.
I can’t wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: Sam is already chipped, I didn't want to re-tread too much ground from Tiny Vet there, whilst despite having a few difference in its structure is mostly set within the same sorta world as Anniversary Present.
I'm happy you like Clara, I'm trying to go for someone who never really intended to own a shrinkee who is slowly starting to embrace it with all the fun along the way.
Yeah my grammar/editing is quite lacking, I do apologise there - I try to do as much clean up as I can but its always been a struggle for me.
I'll be back onto this shortly, I'm currently trying out another story idea as a mini-break.
All the best!
Date: November 11 2024 8:12 PM Title: Small First Steps
By the way I know You don’t have it in your categories but would you be opposed to a sex scene with a little nastier elements (water sports or other nasty elements) I do understand though if that’s not your thing and I could live without.
Author's Response: Not really my cup of tea sorry, I guess at most it might be mild bad odour elements but it'll be fairly tame.
Date: November 08 2024 2:51 AM Title: Small First Steps
So i have an idea, so you made sweetie a swimmer, why not have her swim, it would be good for her ( pets need to excercise after all). Also I hope they get her a better room then that pet carriet, doesnt sound very good for her. Personally I am for treating shrinky pets as not animals, they get a actuall place with a bed and a desk and some thing like books or something depending on the shrinky, especially if there good. Sweetie has been reall goood, she needs a reward I think.
I hope Cara comes to really care for sweetie, right now she is a new thing, and she isnt acting like she got an actual pet, and also that no pets at the table thing needs to go, sweetie may be a pet but she isnt an animal she can be easily taught how to behave at the table, ( i know the boudaries thing but come on thats to demeaning in my opinion).
Just my thoughts.
Author's Response: Thoughts are always appreciated! Don't worry the swimming thing will eventually come into play!
As for the table rules, well Clara is still a bit more old fashioned on her view of shrinkees, its just how she was raised there's a disconnect there for her that's socially engrained, she doesn't quite realise how demeaning it can be, its not a lived experience for her after all she's just trying to look after a newly shrunk pet in her eyes.
I've no doubt Clara really does care for her, its just a learning curve for both them at the moment.
Thank you again for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 8:26 PM Title: Small First Steps
When you put out the first chapter I thought the story would be only a couple chapters total, but you really have the opportunity to make this lengthy if you so choose. I love stories about how characters adapt to the dynamic of a shrinkie where society sees them as less than human. Not just the shrunken character, but the others as well and you are certainly presenting your 3 main characters viewpoints very well.
I guess I'll just have to wait and see if you circle around to Sam's parents again (would be interesting to see what they think after Sam has been a pet for several months). Part of me hopes she ends up where she originally thought she was going after having become a better person, but perhaps she will be truly happy with her owners. Seems she will need someone her own size at some point though.
Keep it up, and thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm still unsure just how far I want to go with this story, I worry being too ambitious and leaving it unfinished and it wouldn't be fair on the readers
Atm I do have some solid ideas how I'd be taking a 'Part 2' set a few weeks maybe months later to this story and you've already caught onto those hooks a bit, basically I feel like the end of the weekend holiday would be a good place to end 'Part 1' of the story and then build on from there.
I'm not quite sure how I'd handle Sam reuniting with her parents, its definitely something on my mind but its like the disconnect between human and shrinkee I do worry the logic/mentality can feel a bit forced so its more throwing that further down the road.
However I do want a bit more of Sam's past life to come into play, if she does start getting comfortable with her owners having reminders can damage her progression is some good fuel for the fire.
I do enjoy the violent shrinky stories of course, but here I'm trying to address the scales a bit here, I think in the end Sam will hopefully find peace, but who knows what that'll be, I don't! haha - I tend to write from a character reaction driving the plot a bit there, so we'll see where Sam, Clara and Henry lead us.
Again thank you for the review and happy to hear anymore thoughts in the future! I'm looking forward to more Shrinkie Haven.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 3:39 AM Title: Small First Steps
Awesome story, please do continue.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll try the best I can *salutes*
Date: November 02 2024 1:39 AM Title: Small First Steps
So this is an interesting story, i like it and hopte there is more.
So you are quickly moving up my favorite aurthor list on this site. I adore the pet/owner dichotomy, but there really isnt enought actuall pet stories. So i am really liking your stories.
For an idea I would like a chapter dealing with sweeties (nice name) life after the owners get back to normal life, does she accompany them to work is she worn, is she put in certain ares while they work. Also maybe an epilogue chapter dealing with months or years later, how she has adapted to being a pet, living sex toy.
Author's Response:
You are too kind!
I've got a good idea for a sequel story to Anniversary don't you worry! will probably be set a few months after, but I'm looking forward to writing more Sweetie and her loving owners, Sweetie still has a lot to adjust too of course, she's scared and confused and unsure which path to follow.
Of course, she's a pet, its just a case of how long she'll try and struggle against it, Clara just think its cute the struggles as she has no real choice either way and you don't deal with annoying brats in a school for years without a thick skin and patience.
As for more regular use in clothing, shoes etc - I think they are a bit more careful then a lot others would be with pet shrinkees, they don't want to hurt her but I think once she settles more into this life that safety net will whittle away, after all sometimes all you need during a stressful day is a little shrinkee trapped on you!
Author's Response:
You are too kind!
I've got a good idea for a sequel story to Anniversary don't you worry! will probably be set a few months after, but I'm looking forward to writing more Sweetie and her loving owners, Sweetie still has a lot to adjust too of course, she's scared and confused and unsure which path to follow.
Of course, she's a pet, its just a case of how long she'll try and struggle against it, Clara just think its cute the struggles as she has no real choice either way and you don't deal with annoying brats in a school for years without a thick skin and patience.
As for more regular use in clothing, shoes etc - I think they are a bit more careful then a lot others would be with pet shrinkees, they don't want to hurt her but I think once she settles more into this life that safety net will whittle away, after all sometimes all you need during a stressful day is a little shrinkee trapped on you!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2024 1:05 PM Title: Small First Steps
A great story indeed.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: October 30 2024 6:33 PM Title: Small First Steps
I really think this story is amazing! I love your writing style, the way you describing the characters and how they are like. I especially like how Clara and her husband are kind and caring toward Sam, even though Sam cant see it cuz she is so small. It’s interesting how Sam’s situation isn’t about cruelty but just the huge difference in their sizes and perspectives. Clara is being loving and maternal but she sees Sam just as a smart version of some kind of mouse, sometime over loving is kinnda annoying like when a person keep talking to you in a baby voice cuz they love you a lot and then you
I’d love to see Clara’s daughter in this story if there is part 2.
It would also be great if future stories could include daughters and sons, whether they’re teens and show how they’d interact with a tiny person like Sam. just to see how younger characters might handle and treat the tiny differently.
also hope you would make part 2 of the tiny friend vet clinic
Thank you for creating such a unique and warm story. I look forward to seeing more
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Its certainly a perspective I've wanted to see more of in size fiction, what ownership of a person actually entails with well meaning individuals whilst still having its natural rough edges.
A smart mouse is a perfect description of how this society views those that shrink, of course it has its cruel edges but those are far from the norm - they genuinely want to care for them, they just aren't quite.. people anymore, it can be hard for them to take them seriously when their voices sound like squeaks and they can be so utterly fragile, that unintentional degrading comes mainly from a duty of care.
If it goes further I'm sure the kids will turn up - finding out your parents suddenly have a pet that's younger then even them might not go down well.
I think what doesn't help for Sam is her owner is a teacher, so its natural to talk down to those younger than her, its not something she can really switch off, she didn't want a student she knew as a pet, she just wanted a pet and thought she'd be helping two close friends at the same time I thought was a neat change from the 'teacher/student' size change stories (as much as I still love the more traditional ones!).
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 1:56 PM Title: Small First Steps
Not really a writer, and you came out with this banger of a story? You wrote it so well, and it flowed wonderfully from scene to the next.I hope to see more from you, because this is some high-quality stuff.
So, giant couples stories are my favorite. And here, not only did you write about giant couples, but there was an SW! A bratty SW being used as a sex toy by an older couple! Amazing! I love this premise so much, my eyes were glued reading it from beginning to end. The couple tying the girl to the giant member was so great—I can't believe how underutilized it is. And it worked so well here. I don't know if you plan on adding more to this story, but I think anything you come up with will be awesome. M/f interactions are near non-existent on this site, so if you write any scene from that front, that'd be cool!
Author's Response:
Arghhh! thank you so much!
I have to say going for that was partially inspired by your Liam character, I've never really considered couples before (its not my go to) but you really warmed me up to the possibilities, I'm a massive fan of Downsizing and this idea well it just got stuck in my head and it grew life from there.
This actually began life by accident, and was meant to be a smaller story branching off from another story I was developing but it got away from my attention a bit (bit more traditional F/M), I'm up for the occasional cruel giantess story but I do feel there's a bit of a blindspot to the more unintentionally cruel? or at least disinterested in their status/plight, the idea of just tinies as pets feels enough fuel enough there then having to physically hurt them and then contrasting that to just how normal the regular people are then making them the typical hot psychopath.
Basically make it feel natural so Clara and Henry are just.. regular people, a couple who adore each other, making them feel hopefully grounded (as far as you can in this genre) and build from there, I've a massive soft spot for the domineering older character type typically having someone who's a bit more naïve to the world, so they'll never quite take the younger seriously.
I know this story will likely go under the radar, not quite the usual reader's taste I feel but your review means the world to me so thank you again! I look forward to your future work massively.