[Report This]Date: November 16 2024 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bit late of a review, but absolutely love the family dynamic and can't wait to see more of it honestly.
I genuinely enjoy your unaware interactions with the way they come across as believable, they flow naturally and they're not overwhelmed by milking the scenario to an endless degree.
I know it's commissioned, but I hope the commissioner wants to explore more unaware scenarios with the mom, it'd be fantastic to see the almost careless and haughty attitude of the mom resulting in Ryan being sat on or entrapped in her clothes while she's unaware.
Anyway, just wanted to say, you're still killing it as always, genuinely a good read!
Author's Response:
I think we’re going to be seeing some more of the Mom before we get too much farther along. And I can definitely imagine Ryan having some similar nightmares about his titanic mother, so hang tight and see what happens.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Author's Response:
I think we’re going to be seeing some more of the Mom before we get too much farther along. And I can definitely imagine Ryan having some similar nightmares about his titanic mother, so hang tight and see what happens.
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter enjoy this story a lot.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it! Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Would love to see Ryan get trapped on an unaware Brooke in the future!!
Author's Response:
That would be fun, wouldn't it? But where would he get stuck? That's the million dollar question. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
This is a great story. Can't wait to see where this is going to go. Hopefully the nightmare/daydreaming lets you go more X rated. Either way, looking forward to the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Yes, the nightmare visions give me a chance to push boundaries a bit more, but more characters with different thresholds for depravity can keep things interesting as well. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Another great chapter! The daydream/night mare scene was fantastic, combined with Brookes confusion. Such believable personalities and reactions. I actually feel bad for Ryan lol, hopefully his little big sis will forgive him!
Author's Response:
So glad that you liked it! The nightmare was intended to inject a bit of the cruel giantess motif that I believe I'm better at, without impacting the true nature of the characters. Gotta be able to serve the plot AND keep things horny.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: October 28 2024 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! Cant wait for more.
Any chance of more bad luck for Ryan and him ending up shrinking even smaller?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. While I cannot say for certain that there won't be any further shrinking, I'm fairly confident that Ryan is now at his permanent size. I've not heard anything from the commissioner regarding smaller sizes and personally Ryan is already on the very lowest rung of the size ladder for what I normally work with. Anything smaller of the tiny or bigger for the giantess and I just don't feel like I can sufficiently capture the interaction between them. It's just not my style.
That being said, I do have a series up on my DeviantArt page called HNTR. It contains giga/micro interaction. Personally I don't believe it's my best work, but the commissioner was always happy with them and it is at the scale your talking about. (Its futanari content though)
Either way, I hope you continue to enjoy Ryan at his current pipsqueak status. Thanks for reading!!
Date: October 28 2024 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is a good series for a drama. I wish there was more (adult) romance but sense it is mostly about the bio family that can be a little hard. I feel bad for Ryan. He was just trying to help and be with his sister and now Brooke is mad at him because of her own carelessness. I do hope she winds up apologizing. Please keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I do believe that we'll get into a bit more romance once we bring a few more characters in. Ryan does have an impending confrontation with his ex on the horizon so we'll see how that turns out. And Ryan definitely caught a raw deal with Brooke there, but like Amanda said time will heal all wounds. She'll be back to her playful teasing in no time.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: October 28 2024 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Another amazing chapter. Loved the reactions between the mom and younger sister. The boob trap was exactly what I was hoping for. Hopefully, there will be more awkward boob situations with her. I like the idea of her thinking Ryan is perving on her.
Cant wait to see how those two treat him going forward.
Author's Response:
Glad to know that you enjoyed it!! The intention was for each of the family members to be noticeably different in their interactions with their brother. One thing I really loathe in my own writing is to feel like I'm being repetitive just for the sake of hitting the fetish milestones. So the hope is that the smut chapters will feel fresh each time.
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hooray! Another sister joined in! I love Brooke already. She sounds kinda fun. I really thought for a second she's going to be actually cruel. That would be really cool too
I wonder if we're going to get another feet scenario with both Amanda and Brooke
Author's Response:
WHat's better than one giant sister? TWO giant sisters!! Glad that you're enjoying. The little daydream sequences are there to fit in some of my more outright cruel content without impacting the actual characters. Can't say for certain if we'll see some joint foot action, but anything is possible.
Thanks so much for reading!!