[Report This]Date: November 05 2024 4:03 AM Title: Warmth
Outstanding chapter. I'm glad to see some complexities coming out with Henry. Gentle, yet not opposed to letting the little chick play with his dong. That description you gave about Sam hugging his member for that emotional connection she misses, was endearing. Even if it was his dick, haha. You planted a good visual in my head, lmao. Must be so hard for Sam to get abandoned by her family, that she seeks connection with a stranger's dick. Good stuff. Definitely the highlight of the chapter for me.
I small criticism ... There were times when you swapped perspectives in the narration and told it 1st person from Sam's POV before switching back to 3rd. This wasn't intentional, right?
This is one of few stories I look forward to reading. Finally, I can read some giant male action. And the fact this is turning more into a story, rather than a quick smut read, has me excited for every chapter.
Also, that's so cool you read my story! Thanks for your comment about that!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review again! you really encouraged me to make Henry take a more active role in the story and its really helped to give Clara someone to bounce off of more naturally, Sam's in a bit spiral but she'll get out of it eventually hopefully!
Apologises for the perspective changes, I sometimes lose track myself and I shall try and go back and amend when I get the time.
I'm hoping there's a bit for everyone in this re: plot and smut, rather than straight to the action (though it will come of course!)
Date: November 04 2024 2:12 AM Title: Warmth
Great chapter, I love how things are going in this story. I was thinking it would be awesome if you would share a photo to a specific character from a movie so we can have a closer reference to the characters in the story
also I loved the attitude and the atmosphere at the start of this chapter where Sam was in her cage eating and remembering this brilliant line of her lovely teacher pets are not allowed in the dinner table i also liked how the teacher is not threaten by her with her husband at all she really see her like a small monkey who can speak she is her tiny little pet no more especially when she refer to her self as the real women and Sam is just like a child the most amazing thing about all that is that her teacher really love her.
i wonder if you can ad a small tiny finger monkey as their real pet and it live inside a glassy habitat with tall glassy walls for the tiny pets pov but for normal humane it is just a small cage, its maybe in their home and maybe the giants talk to the tiny monkey and Same the same way as if they really cant see deference between the tow of them and the teacher put Sam inside the habitat with the tiny finger size monkey to get to know each other but Sam scream and freak out and trying to jump to get out of the glassy cage to escape the giant now taller than her minister monkey but the walls are just too high for her to reach and escape while her teachers face looming over in the sky like a sun looking at her thinking how cut the pets look playing down there in their small world. just an idea popped in my head
its also nice to see Sam trying so hard to be talked to like a normal human but all she gets all the time is just the baby talk
Author's Response: All the giants here do know deep down she's still a person, but its simply uncomfortable to admit it out loud but the entire appeal of owning shrinkees is the control over a human, they just don't call them human of course, its purely come about as a cultural thing in this world, and given her size she has less mobility/freedom then a traditional pet so she's in her own category to them - a more apt term would be a slave really but that doesn't have the best connotations to a regular person, pet however? its cute! friendly, implies they are well cared for and looked after.
Its why I'm not interested in bringing any feral animals in, any comparison there is purely how Sam is being subtly degraded and dehumanised.
Henry is probably the most uncomfortable with the arrangement but even he see's the fun out of it and how even Sweetie doesn't entirely hate some aspects of her new life so he sees it more as teething problems with the tiny, but Clara? she's perfectly fine with it, its simply normal - Sam is stuck in this and has no choice but to make the best out of it however she can really.
Still the relationship between owners and pet is brand new here, there wouldn't have been much interaction in the week before the anniversary to help let her settle in but now they've really started getting involved with the tiny - hopefully for Sam's sake they can reach a balance that works for them.
Thank you again for your review! hopefully more soon.