Reviewer: BB9909 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2024 1:45 AM Title: Decisions

another nice chapter i love it 

for me personally I like the idea of Sam still being treated unintentionally like a child or a tiny puppy. I think the irritating baby treatment and never being taken seriously despite all her effort to get the giant grownups attention is what makes this journey fun. think about the old movie the incredible shrinking women , when Pat was tiny she was screaming and jumping all the time to get people attention but they just never take her seriously because of her small size. 

I would like to see Sam meeting other people and see how the dynamics will be when people talk to her like as if she is a baby, it would be interesting to see her get angry and try to attack someone's nose or toe with her tiny punches and how people think she looks adorable trying to be all brave and tough. maybe having a time out would also be appropriate for her new stats 

you probably would like to consider verity of elements to add to the story such as , real pets, teens and old friends maybe some babysitting by some kid Sam used to babysit when she was normal.

overall great story , looking forward for more 

Author's Response: Oh don't worry, I don't think Clara will ever see her pet as a full on person, its more just realising she might take a bit more time to adapt to her new life, Clara being a more authoritative owner who is still compassionate towards her charge feels the ideal ground given her teaching background and the fact she's already raised a kid.

Sam being more intentionally violent is a bit more difficult for her, she's more of a verbal fighter she's actually quite a wuss when it comes to that - not a great trait finding yourself tiny though as she's basically terrified of her own shadow now.

I'm aiming to keep this, or at least what is the first part of Anniversary contained to Sam, Clara and Henry, it is there alone time together this weekend as they begin bringing the new pet under the fold but I do have several strands/ideas for a second part that'll incorporate other characters - Sweetie however is a bit more of an indoor pet for Clara I should stress.

Thank you again for your kind review!