[Report This]Date: November 25 2024 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Would've preferred step-family, but it's a commission and it's still fantastic. I love the foreshadowing of Natalie's looming crotch as she crouches down. I'm definitely looking forward to the next entry.
Author's Response:
Glad you're able to enjoy it considering. Certainly seems like Natalie's threats cast a pretty heavy shadow over Ryan. Stay tuned to see how everything pans out.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 20 2024 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
I reread the chapter while I think it's a great story I think the first time I read the story it didn't click in my head about them drinking whine even the mother which mostly explains why his younger sister and mother are acting a little extra aggressive than I expected. I don't know why I skipped over that detail. Anyway I love the story hopefully we get some mischief with the older sisters neighbor.
Author's Response:
Brooke I think is just a bit less aware of how serious the situation is for her brother. Naively, she still sees him the same way she did when he was big, only now she's got infinitely more leverage on him and might need to be reigned in a bit. (But you've gotta remember that this is just smut at the end of the day. Sometimes the giantess had to just fart on a tiny guys.)
Natalie, while definitely under the influence of alcohol, is far from a saint in this story. You can only blame so much on the booze, and at some point you've gotta take responsibility for the way you speak and act. Flat out, Natalie is a bigot with some inherent prejudices against shrunken people. Now she has to deal with the fact that someone she loves is tiny and that's causing some serious tension beneath the surface. We'll have to wait and see whether she chooses to reevaluate or double down.
And I'm definitely looking for both Hailey and Sarah to make a return at some point, but it may be some time before we see that happening. But definitely some more, non-family members coming in the near future.
All in all, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story and I'm grateful for any feedback that the community has to share. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 20 2024 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Feel like this chapter isn't getting enough love imo lol. Plot is moving forward monumentally and the new gts are performing wonderfully.
Brooke being playful to the point of Ryan's mental detriment makes perfect sense. She's too playful, which as already established, and she's new to this situation. She can't fathom his mental state unlike Amanda.
Natalie is trying to make up for not having her son believe in her but is still so pissed, and is just a bigot lol, that she can't help but belittle. Even doing the parent thing where she compares her children to make one feel worse. Despite this, she still wanted to get him some kind of help. A bitch, a real bitch, but I like the character so far.
I really like the "Trapped" description btw. Did a good job showing his feelings. It really does feel like he shouldn't have came huh. Not to mention staying here would really suck ass, no Brooke.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
So glad that you enjoyed. There's definitely some tension between Ryan and everyone in his family. Some more so than others, but he's still adjusting to his new reality so he's bound to find a comfortable space to occupy as things move forward. The question is, who's going to be left inside his circle once he finally establishes some firm boundaries. Natalie is a bit of a long shot, and Brooke might be too, though not nearly as much as her mother. But I'd also say that Amanda's done some overstepping too. Knowing the truth about the nature of their mother and still making the unanimous decision to keep Ryan away from the safety of their own homw overnight. Admittedly a pretty dick move.
Time will tell where our characters end up. And I hope that you continue to enjoy the ride. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is a great chapter that really raises the stakes. I hope amanda is able to save him from this situation, the clinic sounds bad enough but having to come back to this home, with his RP prejudiced mom and Incorrigibly playful younger sister, I just hope he can make it back to Amanda’s apartment with her in one piece. I’m beginning to agree with him that the motorcycle was not worth it lol. Great content in this one as well, particularly liked the table scene. Can’t wait for more
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I definitely agree that staying with Amanda is best case scenario for Ryan, but how well will his sister do in a confrontation with their overbearing mother? Hopefully we'll find out next time!
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oooohhh, this is interesting. In some ways, seeing Nat's bigotry towards tinies is satisfying and justifys Ryan's worries. I'm looking forward to her dominating attitude, though I wonder how much the alcohol is influencing her.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
I definitely think the alcohol has something to do with it, but there’s certainly an underlying level of disdain in there. But at the end of the day, this is her only son that we’re talking about, so how cold can she really stay?
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
And we are back to more abuse. Lovely...
Wish more people stuck to their tags, instead of swinging it around.
Author's Response:
So, similar to what I said last time you left a whining review, just because there’s conflict between characters, doesn’t mean that it’s torture or abuse. But seeing this made me take a look at your profile and go through all of the reviews that you’ve left.
You seem like a miserable little crybaby fuck who does nothing but bitch and complain if a story is nothing but cotton candy and rainbows. I hope that one day someone writes you the dry, bland care bear bullshit story that you’re looking for, but I can promise you that it won’t be me. Feel free to stop reading my stories, because your opinion is of no value to me, or frankly, anyone else.