[Report This]Date: November 30 2024 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 10: With Me
That crazy Lola and her domineering attitude towards tiny, yet, her caring and relentless drive to give them a good home! Lola shines in this chapter. I love her interactions with Lilly and their budding relationship. I think I saw Lilly warming up to Lola towards the end.
I liked how Maya risked so much to touch and worship Lola, haha. And Lola goes on to treat her like a toy. I thought it was really cute.
This chapter had a lot of mouth play! Always a plus for me. And whoa, that Candy arc is fascinating. From the unaware vore to the hint of more vore. Crazy. Also, fitting name.
Oh, another story line I saw there was Alicia taking a liking to Lola. I'm curious now if Lola would reciprocate, or if Lola is only into tinies. If Lola and Alicia were to become a couple ... uhm ... I can only imagine the FF/f scenes in the future, haha.
Author's Response:
Well, Maya tried her best... and Candy found her taste.
also, mouthplay is hot! yea!
[Report This]Date: November 30 2024 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: With Me
Been meaning to leave a review for a while, this story's a super fun read! This chapter especially.
Lola's playful manner with which she treats tinies is as fun as it is novel. Her particular brand of constant teasing/roughhousing, mixed with the genuine care she feels for them all is super engaging to read. It'll be fun to see how she acts at the hangout at Alicia's house, if Kaitlyn will make a move, etc.
Candy's part in this chapter was a welcome surprise. Very nice unaware-to-enthused-predator scenes. It'll be fun to see how the collab with Fairy goes, especially since it's been built up for a while.
Really nice story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! I also following your 'Breaking Through', always love an intriguing fantasy settings in size!
It's always a fun time for me to brainstorm anything that Lola would do to a tiny while keeping her in character...