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Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2024 7:14 PM Title: Vegetarian Baking

Glad to see you back in action! I love the idea that vore is vegetarian (it's at least low-carbon, right?). The thing that I enjoy about your writing is the effort that you go to in descriptions. You put the work in setting the scene and that pays off.

Reviewer: Fizzisop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2024 9:16 AM Title: Vegetarian Baking

Love to see a new story from you, amazing as always! Love the casual descriptions of such a terrifying scenario, the use of the word 'crispy' was fantastic. I've always thought that more detailed and complicated cooking scenarios with tinies was very underrated since vore almost always focuses on just the eating/swallowing part. 

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2024 8:56 AM Title: Vegetarian Baking

Very good chapter. Made my day to see this new chapter. Your writing is as good as ever, very descriptive details and the POV of the shrinky pulls readers right in. Nice little tale of the naughty baker. You probably don't want to invest the time, but you could actually do little spin-offs of this story for the people Eva shrinks down. (ie - Eva's Baking Recruits)

Reviewer: Gunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2024 8:05 PM Title: Vegetarian Baking

Hey good to see you back! Was certainly a nice surprise seeing this update, almost on time for Christmas too.

New chapter was great, it's makes it funny when there's some cognitive dissonance that makes them think there's nothing wrong with what they're doing.

Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2024 7:53 PM Title: Vegetarian Baking

I'm glad you're back.

I'd be interested in commissioning a story from you. If you're interested, you can message me on Eka's portal under the same username.

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