[Report This]Date: October 21 2025 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
Beautiful, really loving the vibes Russ and Ruby have, i sense something in Ruby...as for Candy, damn that was cold. Can't wait to see what's in store for lily and shayna... lovely chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2025 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
Excellent story
Author's Response:
thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 10 2025 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
Awesome !!!!! Ruby was perfect this chapter especially during the bath scene heheh
candy is doing gods work of being the V(ore) girl of the story lol
Kaitlyn has a choice to make it seems
Olivia and Lily trying to get Shayna back in school absolutely love that
overall get stuff
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Glad you're having fun!
Ruby is my ideal athletic giantess, want her to rough me up and every tinies too.
Candy just can't help it...
Kaitlyn def needs to find something to solve every obstacle she had in mind...
Lily's part was surprisingly challenging to write since there's a lot on the line between her and Shayna and I wanna get it right for them
once again, thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 10 2025 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 15: Second Chance
How dare you post a chapter right as I sit down to read!! xD
Jokes aside, this chapter was great. It's nice to see Lola and her tinies finally putting together that city for real. Allen and Sophia's banter about it was fun too lol.
Yesss more Candy! I love how she fits into the story, as one of the only unrepentantly cruel characters. It'll be interesting to see if she ever gets caught, and what Lola and friends would think of her. Plus where she might end up going with Fairy.
Speaking of cruel, do I sense a spark of jealousy in Kaitlyn? The way you described her feelings almost made it sound like she'll have to 'do something' about Lola's tinies >:)
I'll be interesting to see if she takes those two she found to Lola, or keeps them for herself. Eager to see where that goes.
Ruby and Russel continue to be fun. I'm a bit of a sucker for tinies that manage to overpower bigs - in some manner of speaking, anyway. And the cheater's punishment was a great touch. (Also, poor Jennifer. Girl can't catch a break xD)
Shayna's motivation proves interesting. And believable, too. I'd probably be upset too if I was in a similar circumstance, but was overlooked just cause I wasn't a tiny. And pure-hearted Lily was a treat, too.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey! My timing is perfect then! XD
The paradise must be done! Lola only wants what's best for her tinies!
Candy... addiction is such a slippery slope, isn't it?
Kaitlyn for sure needs to find a way, how would she do that presented by such circumstances?
Like in many things, strong muscle isn't enough; it's all about the strong heart that could conquer many things... and Jennifer's just too weak XD
writing Lily's stuff, despite her character being much lighter, proved to be surprisingly quite challenging for me because of her complicated mind inside and outside. I just hope I could do her character justice.
thank you very much! glad you're having fun reading this mess of a size! XD