I like this kind of direct style where you jump right into action, but also foreshadows a lot of possible developments – like the shooting star: maybe April wished for something, but what? She would probably answer 'uh duh, it’s a shrinking story, so I must have asked for my stupid older brother to get smaller than me’… Well, yes, that is a possibility, but hear me out. April didn’t seem to have any issues with her or Billy’s height. What she seems self aware about is her foot smell. So, what if her wish was to meet someone who isn’t, like, a total ass and like… likes her feet? (Yeah, I am trying to mimic gen Z speech… and failling, I know TT_TT).

Anyway, my point is: this would explain why she had no idea why Billy shrank, but was so inclined to conclude he had done it because he liked her feet... and also why she became so ecstatic and eager to oblige to his "pervo dream" - because it's not his, it's her wish coming true.

As much as April is an obnoxious bratty, but I like this kind of character because all the attitude is usually to hide other parts of our personality we don’t want others – especially family – picking up.

I am invested and eagerly waiting for more. Thanks for sharing your writing with us and sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.