Reviews For Sister's Mercy
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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2025 11:41 PM Title: Movie Night

April really is a generous soul.

Best sister since Carly had to teach Jack how to be a better brother.



Author's Response:

Thanks! That's quite a compliment because I'm sure we all wish we had a little, sorry, BIG sister like Carly.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2025 9:00 PM Title: Movie Night

I honestly really like April. She's not extremely malicious, just bratty and having her fun, unfortunately at Billy's expense. I still wonder if it's actually her controlling Billy's shrinking, or if she just thinks she does. She hasn't really shown to control it at will yet.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you like her because I'm very happy with how she turned out - I tried adding a bunch of details to the way she acts (like all the Gen-Z lingo!) to try and flesh her out as much as I could in less words.

We'll see about the shrinking haha. Perhaps if I was planning a longer story I'd have included more mystery around her newfound ability, however this will only be a 10-part series.

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