[Report This]Date: September 20 2025 5:35 PM Title: Fall From Grace Part 4
I don't even like fatal vore, but this story was so compelling that I couldn't tear myself away from it even when I found it nauseatingly gory. I am happy that I stuck through it.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2025 4:58 PM Title: Fall From Grace Part 2
Its just great
[Report This]Date: September 20 2025 2:30 PM Title: Recollection Pt. 2
You have somehow managed to make me not hate Jisoo. I honestly wasn't sure where she was going to end up as a character.
Date: September 20 2025 2:01 PM Title: Reprogrammed: Part 2
(stifled crying)
[Report This]Date: September 20 2025 8:02 AM Title: Reduction
I am now inconsolable.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2025 6:48 AM Title: Reception
Maddie is my favorite character thus far, and if anything happens to her I will be inconsolable. The story is as gripping as ever.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2025 10:19 PM Title: Reveal Part 3
This chapter hurts to read. Thomas didn't deserve to die for wanting to save his sister, and frankly I consider Jisoo and Grace to be monsters no better than most of their victims. It seems unlikely that Jisoo will get any sort of redemption arc since the only person who could have made her reconsider, Eren, doesn't seem to feel too strongly about witnessing a double homicide.
I will keep reading because you have written everything very well even if I don't like the direction that it seems to be going.
R.I.P. Thomas
Date: September 19 2025 8:58 PM Title: Ruin
So if I am understanding this correctly everyone in the Amrita cooperation is a psychopathic sadist who kill people as easily as they breathe because they were 'ordained by heaven.' I can only hope that this story has a happy ending where the Amrita cooperation is wiped from the face the earth along with their stupid cult.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2025 5:40 PM Title: Rekindle
This whole world seems to have been expertly, perfectly designed to make me hate it and almost everyone it, but I wouldn't feel that strongly if not for the fact that the characters and world are so engaging. Author you have my compliments.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2025 1:14 PM Title: Resilience
I am loving all the different perspectives shown throughout the story, but Thomas definitely doesn't deserved any of this. I can only hope he isn't tortured to the same degree, but I doubt it.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2025 4:03 AM Title: Res Nova Part 3
When Tae escaped, I realized that I had been rooting fot Thomas to beat to survive. Good stuff.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2025 1:03 AM Title: Res Nova Part 3
When Tae escaped, I realized that I had been rooting fot Thomas to beat to survive. Good stuff.
Date: April 04 2025 6:20 PM Title: Rescue
I loved this story very much , and I was hoping you could write more stories , the characters were endearing , the story was engaging and exciting , i wish their were pictures to go along with it , I was wondering if you could use the studio Ghibli AI trend to create some illustrations for the story
[Report This]Date: November 02 2024 6:08 PM Title: Two Sisters
I love this journey so much!!!
[Report This]Date: February 25 2024 2:29 PM Title: Rescue
Oh my goodness, this story has taken up all of my attention for the past few days. One of the best I’ve ever read!!! Very very very well done!
[Report This]Date: August 27 2023 9:05 PM Title: Rescue
This is most plot heavy story I have ever read on this site, and I loved it! All of the twists and turns in the story were great!
A couple of small points
1) Eren's role was really diminished at the end. I mean I loved Jisoo throughout the whole story, but Eren was so dynamic in the beginning of the story, I was just a bit disappointed at the end that his role was even purposefully subverted because he would have wanted the diminuation? (not sure that makes a lot of sense, but maybe having him more involved would have been more true to his character.)
2) When Jisoo gained all of her powers it would have been nice to see her take some small revenges on the worst of the worst people. I know she was trying to deny she was a goddess, but come on, she totally was.
3) Jade's nanomachines were kind of forgotten, but they did touch Eren, and therefore when he was re-united with Jisoo they would have touched her. I would have been fine with Jisoo seeing them and obliterating them with her godly powers, but it wasn't even mentioned. Nor was Jade's fate particularly touched on either. Maybe it would have been fun to have Jade try to control Jisoo in God mode, but have Jisoo obliterate the nanites, and turn them against Jade.
4) Eren and Jisoo's daughter was too "tame". I would have liked to have seen her enjoy her powers a bit more. Not outright rebellion, but more like someone who wouldn't mind occasionally cheating on their diet. I keep thinking about how the daughter might be a fun short story on her own.
5) The whole thing about Jisoo not being able to regrow people seemed a little far fetched when her power grew to be absolute. I realize you wanted that for plot purposes, but maybe you should have just let it happen that way.
Despite these nits, I loved the story, really I did. The only reason I mention these things is because of how much I got into the plot. Really fun stuff! If Eren had been more active at the end I would have given this a 10 out of 10. I really viewed Jisoo and Eren as the two main protagonists of the story, and so that disappointed me a bit, but not enough to make this one of the best stories I have read here.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2023 10:01 PM Title: Epilogue
only now I finnally took time to read this absolute MASTERPIECE. not only the actual fetish stuff was well done, but it simply became an actual novel that made everyone stay for the story
congratulations on writing this story, I've read books that didn't let me so anxious and curious like this one did, I can't imagine how I'd be when having to wait for almost 2 years just to read what happens next.
only thing is I wish we were told about what happened to characters like Ruiwen (my favorite for sure, but I still liked her open ending), Xiangling, Kovit and how they dealt with Jade.
I can imagine Xiangling got arrested for Amrita's doings which she was heavily responsible for, really tought she'd be the one to actually bring Grace back to the light (specially since she was still big by the end), but I don't think Kovit deserved being arrested since he was just a driver and such?
10/10 story either way
Date: April 12 2023 6:55 AM Title: Rescue
Damn one of the best stories on this site good writing
[Report This]Date: October 12 2022 2:31 AM Title: Epilogue
If they're not careful, that ending will lead to a less-than-empty nest nine months from now. LOL!
Masterfully poignant epilogue. Thanks, again, for sharing this. :-)
[Report This]Date: October 11 2022 1:31 AM Title: Epilogue
Excellent conclusion! Can’t wait to see how things play out in future one shots and/or continuations.
In the meantime, any plans to update Act of Gods?