Date: July 18 2021 2:54 PM Title: Res Nova Part 2
Hmm, a family that posesses magic or just a family of brilliant chemists/biologists who can create anti-aging fruit and weaponize a century old shrinking virus? I'm wondering if Tae was born into the family or was adopted as a speck when they tested her and found something special in her dna. Grace seemed to imply her family knows something about how the Diminution virus began, maybe they owned the lab that developed it or just did a loot of research and had special specks like Tae.
Also Tae's claim that her familiy can't help or directly handle speck communities because American companies own them and block foreign interferance seems disingenuous now. If their family can buy attorney generals, governors, members of congress, and soon the president of the US, buying out or ruining small competitors seems like no issue. Grace's concern for Eren hints that her family may have no personal issue sheltering and helping the born specks, especially if there's useful one like Eren who can improve the efficiency of machines, since they don't acknowledge all the worthless propoganda about them. Wonder if the specks have or will have better treatment in countries the family already controls like China?
If it's Tae that's about to solo brawl with Thomas, hopefully he's injured enough to not be able to best her. She's strong and skilled but so is he. Tae might get her serum used on her if bested, remains to be seen if that happens if she has some kind of peach or blood power to reverse it when the time is right.
It's kind of funny how everyone's reaction to being told why they were shrunk is too say "but he was just a speck". Are you sure you want to make the arument that speck abuse is okay when you yourself are currently speck size?
Author's Response:
Perhaps a curious mixture of both science and magic? :) So far Sylvia probably had the best plan to get herself out of the woods, she tried to claim she was drunk and it was a mistake. Everybody else apparently did not think about how their response would be taken. As for everything else, in time the history of the world as well as it's future will all be explored later, I hope you stick around to see how it unfolds!





Date: July 18 2021 7:25 AM Title: Res Nova Part 2
Another enjoyable chapter. This town really has a problem. The hate level for specs is insane.
It is good for Claire to be thought a lesson.
I can't wait to Thomas gets his punishment.
I hate Alice very much. Too bad she can't suffer more.
I hope some get punished by living there lives as specks and get into to situations where their loved ones torture them.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback, and I hope you enjoy what comes next! :)





Date: July 18 2021 6:11 AM Title: Res Nova Part 2
Xiangling! Is that a Genshin reference I see? If so, that's great. I started playing about a month and a half ago, and it's really fun. If you play it, who's your main? Mine's Kazuha.
Anyway, this story is still fantastic! It seems like the hole of revenge and destruction is just getting deeper and deeper, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it ultimately ends up, as well as how it affects poor Eren. As another reviewer said, he's truly the only innocent one here. Still loving his adorable relationship with Tae, but I can't help but worry about what will happen when he finds out about everything. For me, their relationship is the main draw of the story, so I hope to see more of it soon! Either way, keep up the great work, and take care.
-Pluto
Author's Response:
It is indeed! Currently I main Yanfei, I just got Kazuha recently but have not had a chance to level him up yet.
Thank you for your feedback, ultimately the cost of revenge is that it will continue to spiral. Although this is a rather long story with many conflicts and arcs, Eren and Tae's relationship and how it develops is the main focus, so I hope you enjoy the twists and turns it takes!





Date: July 12 2021 8:50 PM Title: Rescue
I love the duality of this story. Gentle and nurturing, contrasted by Tae's violent urges. For now, these two stories are running parallel to each other, but it seems they may cross soon. Hopefully Eren can make it out of this with his heart intact. He's the only truly innocent one so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback!





Date: July 12 2021 7:29 PM Title: Res Nova Part 1
It hasn't been that long but I'm already starting to dislike Claire as a person. Reffering to Eren as "it" was all I needed. When it comes to Thomas I could sort of see where he's coming from since he's clueless about what his sister did to get beat up, but I doubt he'd care about it If he knew. He doesn't strike me as someone who cares about speck rights, so I am still hoping that he fails in his revenge quest and gets what's coming to him. I just want Tae and Eren to be happy. The suspense about what's going to happen next is killing me, but I'm hoping that Thomas and Claire are on the losing end.
Author's Response:
Thomas definitely sees Alice with rose-tinted glasses, so anything bad she does he would most certainly try to justify. As for his views on specks we will have to wait and see! As for if Tae and Eren get a happy ending after all this, who can tell? Thank you for the feedback!





Date: July 12 2021 5:23 PM Title: Res Nova Part 1
I just gotta say, this is a great story so far! I can't wait for further installments. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy future chapters as well!
Date: July 12 2021 4:47 PM Title: Res Nova Part 1
Claire's probably realizing that not only is she working off the record, but she's inadvertenly kicked a hornets nest owned by an influential billionaire (trillionaire?), and making Thomas if not herself as well "disappearing" a real possibility. I think part of what will seal Thomas's fate is his reaction to Tae letting Eren give his testimony of what Alice and her friend were doing to him to that night and how Tae saved his life and if his response is "so what you're just a speck"? Claire's already earned a red card for calling him an it and could very well be killed in front of Thomas depending on how thorough Grace wants to clean out the problem characters. I wonder if/when Tae reveals she shrank and killed Alice to Thomas, it would be the last chance for a "she's still alive and I'm drawing her death out" twist. Also how much of her underworld she exposes Eren to. Will she have him tell Thomas what he went through while still shielding him from the truth of what she did afterwards and what her sister is going to do to Thomas and Claire?
My plot crafting has me suspecting Grace will be the one dealing with him instead of Tae. I think she's going to threaten the cop into forgeting everything and that she was never with Thomas. Then she may tell Tae she's going to deal with him since he did come a split second within slugging her in the head. I suspect that the female bodyguard who curbstomped him will be tasked with shrinking and/or killing him but Thomas may pull off killing the bodyguard and her accomplices instead and having an escapade to get to Tae and Eren again for revenge-bugaloo after learning Alice is dead.
Author's Response:
With the inflation already established a trillionaire is definitely a safer bet. Claire and Thomas both have their own problems in Tae's book, that's for sure. The female bodyguard you mentioned does have a role, let's see how that develops! : )





Date: July 12 2021 4:59 AM Title: Res Nova Part 1
I hope Tom and Claire get tortured. I'm going enjoy that.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hopefully you get what you wish for!





Date: June 30 2021 5:25 AM Title: Realization
Great story. I want more revenge. These kind of people must be punished.
Author's Response:
I am glad to hear you are enjoying it!
Date: June 29 2021 1:28 AM Title: Realization
So Tae was born a speck, called it: http://gph.is/2lBjtGE . We finally confirm that correlation about Eren noticing how tall and athletic she is for a human and the comments about how fit Eren is since only fit specks have a chance of surviving in the dangerous world. It's interesting if Tae-yeon is Tae's biological sister instead of a friend like-a-sister. Since Grace called her Ji-soo earlier, is that a general title for a family member or Tae's real name and she just strangely goes by her friend Yeon's name? It hasn't been stated yet if regular humans occasionally concieve speck babies. It would lower the bar again on the morality of the society if parents are abandoning speck infants and dumping them upon the impoverished speck communities if not requesting their doctors to kill them outright. Since Tae has a unique biological trait, the Xirang, she could either be the biological sister of Tae-yeon or she was simply a friend kind enough to care for Tae until she one day grew.
This kind of hints that Tae may be involved in the Amrita corps ability to produce weaponized shrink serum since apparently the general public has long been immune to the original outbreak a century ago. The company may have been researching the virus in speck test subjects and Tae happened to be the one in a million who had unique genetic code allowing the virus to be extracted and edited. If specks can come from normal people she may have been hidden in disdain as a mistake of the extended Amrita branch families before being used in the latest experiments and accepted back into the family as a normal human. For such a valuable assest I wonder how closely they monitor and protect her since she seemly has a great amount of independence and gooes around kidnapping and killing people of her own accord.
I'm realy curious what Tae did to make Yeon hate her and call her a monster, considering she loved and cared for Tae when she was a speck. I've got my suspicions about preying and tormenting her fellow specks when she got big, believing it was just the natural order of things. In spite of Yeon's affections she may have just gleefully decided it was her turn to feel in control over others. Or if she was given syringes of the weaponized shrink serum after being either adopted or recognized as a member of the Chen's extended family once she became normal sized. She does have the wicked streak of enjoying torturing and killing people, perhaps it's always been regular humans she suffered at the hands of or witnessed killing her fellow specks. She may have been caught in the act by Yeon or showed her one of her victims and gleefully invited her to join her, only for Yeon to be horrified and outraged. In the darkest timeline, what if she used a syringe on Yeon in a fit of rage and killed her?
P.S. That's some hella inflation when $43.55/hr is just slightly above minimum wage and insultingly low for a college graduate, from MIT no less if it's still equivalent to present day MIT. Fingers crossed this future society actually mandates that minimum wage to actually match what the living wage is. I wonder if Madeliene thinks he's just that desperate for work or if the gears start turning when she notices other awkward moments with Eren in the coming weeks.
Author's Response:
You called it!
I won't say too much and risk giving anything away, but I can clarify that 'Ji-soo' is Tae's real name, however you wish to interpret that. As for who this 'Tae-yeon' person is, you will have to wait and see :).
Honestly calculating the inflation ended up becoming an educated guess for how 2107 would look, assuming a few world changing events that have not yet been discussed by any of the characters impacted the economy. Buuut I can assure you many of those events and changes in the economy will be hinted at in future chapters!





Date: June 28 2021 1:42 PM Title: Rime
I'm nearly all caught up with this story, and it has quickly become one of my favorite stories on this site. The politics and world building are simply fantastic. The world is very believable for a story with tiny people. The cast, although small, has enamoured me. I really love the lead characters and their relationship (and people say you can't write a strong female protagonist and make them likeable). I'm really enjoy seeing their interactions with each other because they are incredibly wholesome, however, their individual segments are just as amazing because they really let you catch a glimpse of this semi dystopian future. This story gives me some Dexter vibes as well as some slight Batman vibes. I've fallen head over heels for this story so congrats on the incredible writing! I'll be looking forward to the most recently released chapter as well as future chapters. Godspeed!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback! It can definitely be a challenge to write a convincing female protagonist, especially as a male author so I am thrilled to hear that. I hope you enjoy future updates as well!
Date: June 16 2021 9:22 AM Title: Rime
It is interesting how the general population thinks specks get billions in aid, when in reality they live in slums and are given scraps. Oddly enough I could see the small group of speck rights activists and the much larger specks are pests groups both coming together to cause a huge outrage if someone funded several news channels and documentary film makers to investigate and expose the living conditions of specks and how a handful of companies are pocketing the billions in funding. "Where are your tax dollars going? Tonight our investigative reporter Tom Johnson reports to us from the field from NYC's sub-borough 1, one of NYC's 5 diminshed human communities. The Werner Company holds a $40M annual contract from the city to exclusively manage and develop the cities 5 DH sub-boroughs. But what does the company do with this fnding? What we found may shock you." New channels covering multiple speck slums in cities across the country over a few weeks followed up by some famous filmmaker making a Netflix series about how the contract companies and the politicians they bribe are pocketing all the money could easily cause a public fervor from both speck supporter and hate groups for opposite reasons.
They could be setting themselves up against the world's largest conglomerate. Grace could use Eren becoming an innovative engineer at his new job as a model example to the Amrita board about specks being an untapped workforce. If she convinces the board about their use and how the conglomerate could monopolize the communities since no one else is currently using specks as a reliable workforce, the company can use the opportunity to swoop in and place the majority of the speck population under their protective wing with the promise of safer communities and living conditions. They just need to flex a bit of that wealth an influence to clear the corrupt competitors out of the way. Opportunity for a potential epilogue or a timeskip.
Author's Response:
I can read that news report in the voice of an anchorman! That Netflix series would be a hit with all sides too.
Odds are there will be a timeskip at some point in the plot; this is definitely meant to be a long story with numerous arcs and plotlines. Of course that may change, but right now in terms of what i envision we are not at the half-way point, so there is absolutely time to develop more big events. I hope I can keep everybody interested for the long haul!





Date: June 06 2021 11:10 PM Title: Rescue
A very unique story that I'm glad to have read so far, it's quite rare that we get a story that mixes gentleness and cruelty like this, or that lets us enjoy the sweet bliss of well-deserved revenge. Looking forward to where you take this in the future, wherever that may be, and I'll be eagerly awaiting future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I hope the direction the story begins to take from now is to your liking.
Date: June 06 2021 3:43 PM Title: Reticence
Interesting, so Tae is a family member of a large Chinese family owned mega-corporation. Maybe something like a branch family or adoption since she doesn't have the army of assistants lingering around her like Grace. Curious what her role was, it seems to hint she dealt with some of the shadier parts of the company, since she has access to weaponized shots of the diminishment virus, is a proficient fighter, and has contacts that can track down or even kidnap people for her. The last mystery for her is whatever tragedy happened in her past. She keeps calling herself a monster and had an instant reaction to Alice calling her one, she either killed a friend/family in a fit of rage or is guilt ridden for failing to protect them from someone else.
Curious if Thomas is going to be able to walk away from his probably inevitable encounter with Tae. He's protective enough of Alice, and I don't think Tae is going to bring her back up to torment her further, so if he brawls with Tae when he learns she's already dead I wonder who will end up shrunken and what actions Grace takes in the worst scenario. It would be interesting to see if he hesitates and talks things out if Eren confesses to him what the girls did to him the night at the bar. If he has any measure of sympathy for specks I can see Tae letting him go.
Finally Eren's job interview. I have a suspicion. I think Madeleine Lacroix is possibly either a speck friendly scientist/engineer or maybe secretly a speck herself. I think speck friendly scientist is the more likely, I sort of get a feeling from a character from the Titan Empire series who found humans adorable and loved working with them as what her personality could be like towards specks. I imagine at some point if she's speck friendly she reveals she realized he was a speck weeks ago but didn't see a problem with it. Or alternatively if I read her wrong and she's a "specks are pests" supremacist who learns Eren's a speck when someone outs him and she then fires him.
One last topic I'm curious if Grace Chen learns of how bad the specks in Norwich's situation is from Eren and if she does anything about it. A billionaire would lose pennies setting up a new and safe community for hundreds of specks. It would be an interesting twist if it was revealed her family conglomerate manages to shelter and care for specks by employing them as an innovative workforce.
Author's Response:
I greatly appreciate these very thoughtful and insightful reviews, they are a joy to read as the story progresses and the mystery unfolds. There is a lot of mystery left for Tae, at least that is the plan as more is revealed with each chapter and new questions replace old ones! We will have to wait and see what happens with Thomas and how future encounters with him happen, but you are as always onto something!





Date: June 06 2021 2:52 PM Title: Reticence
Holy hell this chapter was good. The way you write Alice's perspective almost makes you feel sorry for her. Almost...
Looking forward to seeing Eren and Tae's relationship develop. The gender role reversal sue to size and power has me hooked. Though I am interested in seeing how Eren reacts to her extra curriculars. Somehow, I don't think he'll be a big fan.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It was very interesting to write from Alice's point of view, I am happy I conveyed her reaction in a satisfying way.
We will see how Eren and Tae develop together, hopefully you enjoy the direction it goes!





Date: June 06 2021 1:54 PM Title: Rescue
This story is FANTASTIC. Turnabout and revenge are old tropes but you're managing to knock it out of the park in such a creative way while giving us small little tidbits of Tae's past throughout the story to show us why she feels how she does and how she's able to do what she's doing. All of the size interactions have been super hot and it's been delicious seeing these former bigs getting their comeuppance once they're small. The bartender getting thrown in the toilet was so disgusting and hot. It's hard to say whether or not the punishment fits the crime, but that's part of why Tae is an interesting character, because she's not perfect so we have to flinch at the thought of "does this bartender deserve to get pissed on and flushed just because she looked the other way when Eren was getting tortured?"
I haven't written anything in a while so take my critique with a grain of salt due to how rusty I am, but this last chapter seemed a little confusing with the way you laid it out. I feel like it would have flowed better if you started with Tae going to the airport to get Grace and then once Tae got the text on Sylvia's phone, jumping forward in time to Alice being captured.
It's a small thing but I think it would make it less confusing as to the timeframe.
Also, the scene with Sylvia getting captured and shrunk was so incredibly well-done with Sylvia slowly starting to realize that something wasn't right until the terror at what was happening washed over her. That slow-burn really let us appreciate her fall from grace, so it was disappointing to not get a similar scene with Alice. It felt a little bit rushed to me. I was actually hoping to see a scene where Grace worked with Tae to get that job done!
Either way I'm loving this story and can't wait to see where else you take it. Cheers and thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
I greatly appreciate your response!
I definitely agree that revenge can be overdone in fiction, I am elated to hear that I am keeping the tale original, and of course sprinkling in the size scenes which does beg the question if Tae is going too far or not with her actions, and the mystery why she cares so much.
Regardless of how much you write I think that's really good criticism which after reviewing the chapter I wholeheartedly agree with. Since I know where the story/chapter is going I can forget that the reader doesn't have all the information I do or my thought process which can make it confusing. Since time/flashbacks will happen at certain points in future chapters I wanted to introduce the concept, but think I missed the mark here.
Between Alice and Sylvia, I had not thought to include Alice's capture since Tae and Grace were not the ones to do it (at least directly), and thought the scene would be too similar to Sylvia's capture but would lack any surprise factor since by that point the reader would be aware of what was happening, whereas with Sylvia she and the reader learn what is going on at the same time. However I concur, it would have been really cool to see how that went and perhaps it will be explained more later! I definitely appreciate how much thought you put into the review and will make efforts to prove how the reader is able to interpret the passage of time in the story!





Date: June 06 2021 10:12 AM Title: Reticence
Superb revenge story. I love it very much.
Hope we see more soon.
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying it so far!
Date: May 28 2021 4:22 AM Title: Rescue
very interesting. curious that if the tiny girl in the photo is tae herself
Author's Response:
¯_(ツ)_/¯





Date: May 28 2021 2:07 AM Title: Retribution
Uh oh, poor Alice. Although the revenge aspect is awesome, will we be seeing more of Eren and Tae's romance?
Author's Response:
Some chapters will be more focused on their relationship than others and how it develops! Thank you for the feedback, Alice is in a heap of trouble.
Date: May 22 2021 12:58 PM Title: Resolve
another awesome chapter cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Plenty more to look forward too!