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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2021 2:42 AM Title: Resolve

Another wonderful chapter. The contrast of romantic Tae to vengeful Tae is simply perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you enjoy how her character continues to progress!

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2021 10:01 AM Title: Return

Interesting, her access to a shrinking serum and mysterious contacts who can easily track down people, as well as that last line, hints she either has a career as an assassin or is simply wealthy enough to afford feeding her desires. I say feed her desires since she clearly enjoys and gets excited at torturing a small and helpless human. She didn't have to kill Mikayla, just scare her into an apology before dropping her off at a small community. Interested to see the link on how she justifies her fury at witnessing smalls being abused or killed by regular humans with her own enjoyment of torturing shrunken victims.

The comments about how unusually tall and fit she is for a woman and her "odd" personality of caring for small humans has me forming a conspiracy theory about her origins. There exists a serum that can instantly shrink humans. What if the oppopsite is true as well, they made a formula that can grow diminished humans back? If it's an experimental or rare treatment it could explain why she ended up growing a bit too big. It would upgrade her origin from "she lost a small lover/family/friend to a cruel normal" to also personally knowing what its like to live through and suffer that as a small as well.

I wonder if what influence Eren has on her if she keeps him around to form a relationship with her. If she lets him watch her next act or is shocked to see him sneak in on her, how will they go forward? Will he just be a witness to her actions, or will he beg her not to kill his assailants, saying he's forgiven them after seeing her torture them. Pleading with her to just let them go?



Author's Response:

You're extremely observant! Definitely on to something, all I can say.

Reviewer: Pluto Pendragon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2021 3:57 AM Title: Return

Now this is a really interesting story. I'm enjoying it a lot so far! You've got plenty of mystery, and I'm definitely interested in learning more about what's going on, and what Tae's backstory is. I'm also loving her and Eren's relationship! They've got some really cute moments, and I'm excited to see how their relationship develops. Especially if/when he finds out about her secret. I hope to see more of this story soon! Take care.

-Pluto



Author's Response:

Thank you, I look forward to exploring those mysteries in future chapters!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2021 2:50 AM Title: Return

Wow, almost forgot about this one. So glad you returned to it. Big fan of the Tae and Eren dynamic.



Author's Response:

I had finished most of the chapter weeks ago but was caught up in work and other stuff. Hopefully I am able to add more as things settle down. I am glad you are liking it so far!

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 9:21 AM Title: Revenge

Interesting, will we learn a bit of history about the world? Is shrinking caused by a past virus that pharma companies were able to study and turn into an injection to shrink people that became immune to the original wave? Or perhaps the shrinking compound was developed by governments to address growing poverty levels or population control by "lottery". Regardless it seems this world has developed a few generations of "born smalls" if Eren comes from a community with families. Tae is perhaps a rich socialite since Eren remarks how large and expensive her apartment looks so maybe she can pay to get shrink injections for her personal use while authorities look the other way. Curious to see if Tae has dark desires to abuse and dominate specks but has a conflicting nuturing desire, affection, or attraction for "born smalls". Does she balance her needs by targeting normal people abusing specks, a predator that enjoys hunting predators perhaps? Or did she have someone close who was a born small or suddenly shrunk and was killed in an awful way and she still feels guilty and obliged to help specks in need? Most people don't seem to care about speck abuse or neglect in this world so I hope we see a backstory or a confession explaining why Tae chooses to act. We'll have to see if Eren can get her to open up about her past and reveal to Eren about her activities, and if he has any impact on her continuing to be a cruel and violent hunter / protective guardian.



Author's Response:

You are right on the money with those predictions, I am glad you are enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 2:46 AM Title: Revenge

So glad you continued this. Also like how you've found a new Avenue to explore the dominant side without betraying her character and your setup. Great work and look forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you also enjoy future updates!

Reviewer: Frozenbutt Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2021 11:14 PM Title: Rescue

A tiny guy named Eren, in a world of giants...



Author's Response:

Yah I'm a big fan of AoT/SnK, loving the new season so far

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2021 6:11 PM Title: Rescue

This is a phenomenal start. I'm a big fan of the knight in shining armor role reversal, especially against the cruel backdrop. Look forward to seeing how it unfolds!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you enjoy future updates as well

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