Date: July 11 2021 7:56 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
So far this is a pretty interesting read. I like the premise.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the premise, its not too far off from other stories you find on this site, but I hope to make it memorable anyway!
Date: June 06 2021 12:10 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Hope to see this story soon with a new chap. One of the best stories I have read so far.
Author's Response:
;) (several months later, but whatever lol)
Date: May 28 2021 1:25 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Hey this is the first time I've ever put in a review. This is one of the best stories I've ever read. It's been a month since a update but I'll be waiting till the next one releases. The hype is real.
Author's Response:
I am honored to be your first review, and here is a reward for your patience: a new chapter! I hope you enjoy the story going forward!
Date: May 05 2021 8:30 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Okay, I think this is one of the best stories so far what I read here
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it! Sorry about taking so long to respond, but I hope a new chapter will placate you!
Date: April 30 2021 7:17 AM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
This story is fantastic! Great writing, compelling characters, and interesting world building details. I'm enjoying the budding relationship between these two. Lena's personality is very appealing. I'd probably have a crush on her too if I was in Ryan's situation.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and don't worry, I have a crush on Lena too lol. Hope you enjoy their ever (if slowly) evolving relationship!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2021 10:31 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
One of the best stories I've read, definitely added to favorites! Great dynamics between the characters, I'm hooked and we haven't even heard too much lewdness; I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Glad to have it in your favorites, thank you! Sorry about the wait!
Date: April 28 2021 9:11 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
I've never left a review before but been using this website for over 10 years. I just wanted to say this is one of the best stories I've read on here! I can't wait to read more! Thank you so much for writing it!
Author's Response:
I am honored to be your first review, and ashamed I left you hanging for so long. I hope you enjoy chapter 5!
Date: April 28 2021 9:07 AM Title: CH1. Evicted
Few typos here and there but magnificent chapter as always. Excited to see how the story evolves ^_^
Author's Response:
Part of my plan is to go over previous chapters with a comb for grammar and typos. I doubt I'll get it all, but heres hoping!
[Report This]Date: April 27 2021 10:51 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Loved this so much amazinf rythm to the story keep it up I will be waiting excitidly but petiently
Author's Response:
The wait is over, only to begin anew! I hope you like it, thank you for your patience!
[Report This]Date: April 27 2021 12:11 PM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
Amazing chapter with equally good pacing. I'm glad it picked up a bit in the end though. It reads as a bit of a transition chapter for them, in a good way of course, very natural!
Author's Response:
Glad you like the pacing, hope you like Chapter 5!
[Report This]Date: April 27 2021 9:37 AM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
Another great chapter, an enjoyable read, though I have to say I'm really glad things between them are starting to pick up pace, towards the end at least. I'm not sure how many more awkward looks and embarassed glances I could take!
Also appreciate the grumbly-stomach forshadowing...
Author's Response:
The awkward idiots continue their romp, grumbly tummy and all!
Date: April 27 2021 9:25 AM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
WOW !!!
Amazing story.
Such gems are very rarely seen here.
Please continue this story. I am curious what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Appreciate the review, wanted to wait till I updated before responding.
Sorry for the wait!
Date: April 27 2021 12:36 AM Title: CH1. Evicted
This is one the best stories I have ever read on here keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you, I plan to! Hope you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2021 1:48 PM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
I had a recomendation to read this story, and glad I did!
I'm really enjoying this whole setup, its really sweet and makes me look forward to the more lewd stuff that may occur even more.
I'm happy knowing you'll keep it soft between them (No accidently digesting her new friend!).
You've done well making their behaviour feel realistic, with natural conversations and reactions, while also giving just enough details to make the world feel like a proper place, but not getting bogged down in too much unnecessary details.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you decided to follow their recomendation, glad you liked it! I say the buildup is more than half the battle in a story like this one, so theres more of that to come in the future. I'm glad you like the balancing I've managed so far, hope I'll be able to keep you satisfied with the amount of detail!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2021 11:22 AM Title: CH1. Evicted
This is probably the best thing I have ever read. 11/10
Author's Response:
VERY high praise, thank you for the impossible review!
[Report This]Date: April 18 2021 10:42 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Loved all of these so much read all 3 chapters back to back sad to have to wait but really well done and a very relaxing and pleasant read keep it up so excited for more
Author's Response:
It's great to know I was able to hold your attention across three chapters, hope you're still excited!
[Report This]Date: April 16 2021 8:54 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Love the simple slice of life feel this has. Good world building and two enjyable characters. I look forward to reading more of of your wonderful works.
Author's Response:
Slice of life is a great word for this, I'm glad you're enjoying these two and the world they're in!
A bit ahead of this story, but I do intend to write more after it. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: April 15 2021 4:34 PM Title: CH1. Evicted
Man, I love this story so far. The world building is really nice as well. I love the both of them have different backgrounds but yet can come together for their common interests. Both of them having a budding crush on the other and yet not wanting to gamble what the other might think of it is also a nice plot point I didn't think I need to read.
Personally, I would say don't feel the need to jump into romantic if you think you can expand them more as individual characters. I hope we meet the rest of the group soon as well.
Author's Response:
They say opposites attract, and its what interests they share which binds them. Something like that anyway lol. I love a good relationship where they're both to cautious for their own good, makes some suspense!
And don't worry, we'll get to that sort of stuff when we get there :) As for the group, we'll see.
Date: April 15 2021 3:03 AM Title: CH1. Evicted
It's an unfortunate rarity to have a story like this with deep world building and realistic characters, dialogue and emotion. Ryan is walking a bit of a line of petulance but it's clearly situational. Hopefully between Lena's wiles and some opportunities to pull his own "weight", his better nature can emerge.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like the sory's content so far. I'm not sure what parts you're seeing petulance in Ryan, but I hope you hold out for him!
[Report This]Date: April 15 2021 1:00 AM Title: CH3. Teased and Confused
I'm happy to say that this chapter was a joy to read! I love the protagonists and can't wait for them to open up about their feelings. The way they act around each other is too adorable! I'll be looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you've enjoyed like it! I tend to lean into fluffy relationships, so I'm glad to see thats being liked!