You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2024 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14 Getting Closer

Obviously, my hope was dashed.  :-(

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2022 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 14 Getting Closer

What better way to end the Old Year than to catch up with a latter-day classic? This action-packed chapter was well worth the wait. I just hope it's not another year before you resolve _this_ cliff-hanger!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2022 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 Reunion of sorts

So, there is an Octopussy connection, after all.  And her name is...Irina Orlova!*


*You know, that's always struck me as contradictory about Russia during the Cold War.  Especially in light of Putin's current efforts to force a return to the Bad Old Days!  If the Soviet Union was so much more sexually equal than the United States, back then, then why were Russian women not allowed to drop the suffix -a from their surnames?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2022 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 12 It's a Trap!

Chapter 13:  "The Fit Hits The Shan!"



Author's Response:

Well said!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2022 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 11 The girls take care of business

Nice to see you finally updating this; and, it was worth the wait!  :-)



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay. I tend to sidetrack myself with other things. But I also needed to aquire more things from DAZ, as I have been going back and trying to do renders of certain scenes on my DA page. But I should have everything I need. And thank you for taking an interest in the story.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2021 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 Zbigniew Krycsiwiki

Hmmm!  I'm now wondering if 007's abductor is Jennifer Burton, instead.  Because even "Love 'em-and-Leave'em" Bond certainly would've recognized Gwendolyn from what Messrs. Solo and Kuryakin would've called "The Octopussy Affair!"  

As for Jaws being rescued by an unregistered nuclear sub?  I can believe it.  Wealthy as they were, individually,  Drax and Stromberg couldn't have financed their eco-terrorist schemes on their own.  Nor even in partnership with each other!  They had to be colluding with someone just as ruthless and  misanthropic.  English translation:  Blofeld!

I know, I know.  He was dropped off in that industrial smokestack in the action-packed prologue of "For Your Eyes Only."  But, what if everyone was meant to assume just that?  What if that was just another surgically-created double?  Albeit, one simply brainwashed into _believing_ he truly was Blofeld!

I guess what I'm trying to say is:  you've succeeded in making me second-guess my earlier predictions.  You fiend, you!  ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2021 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 9 Journey into Sin City

Well, it could still be Gwendolyn from Circus Octopussy.  Remember; Octopussy, herself, told 007 how her (mostly female) crime syndicate had diversified into hotels as well as circuses.  So, who's to say that Octopussy didn't buy the Whyte House from Willard Whyte's estate after he died?*

*I leave it up to you, as the author, whether or not to incorporate the real-world death date of Jimmy Dean (singer/actor/breakfast sausage mogul).

  



Author's Response:

You bring up a really good scenario, and it’s one I never considered. I was always operating under the assumption that Willard Whyte divested from his businesses because of SPECTRE’s infiltration of the casino, oil, and satellite program. Plus add in the fact that he was kidnapped and then the targeted for death maybe made him realize that a quiet life on some tropical island was better for his health. I never considered that he passed, and the government bought it during an Estate Sale. That was a shame on me. 😧

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 8 Kidnapped

I'll say the kidnapper was Gwendolyn.  The strong woman of Circus Octopussy!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 7 Rocky Mountain High

If that helicopter was piloted by hench-MEN, then Blofeld must've had them injected with some kind of counter-measure.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 6 An unexpected ally

This just keeps getting better and better. I wonder who 007 will reunite with, next? Perhaps, Octopussy and Company at Circus Circus Hotel and Casino?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2021 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 The journey west begins, and trouble awaits

And the slow shrinkage continues.

RIP, David Hedison (the once and future Felix Leiter).

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2021 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 James Bond is called upon for an important mission

Wow, fantastic story Twjr0228! I really hope this keeps going.



Author's Response:

Thank You for the kind words!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2021 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 4 On the way to the Whyte House

Am I safe in assuming Irina Orlov is an original character?* Perhaps the not-so-good general's daughter by Frau Bunt?

*Btw: in real-world Russian, her surname would be "Orlova."

Author's Response:

Irina is an original character. I only knew the four from the classic era. General Gogol was too nice a character, Major Amasova was probably more career oriented, Colonel Klebb was implied to be a lesbian, and General Orlov, who always struck me as the type to have mistresses all over the Eastern Bloc. And I apologize for not picking up on the difference between the male and female version of the last name. An oversight on my part.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2021 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 A troubling development

My guess? He hopes to accomplish the same thing Dr. Miguelito Loveless, Sr. hoped to achieve when he shrank James West and a certain Blackfoot Indian chief's daughter during the Presidency of Ulysses S. Grant.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2021 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 A reunion, with a twist of troubling information

I'm hoping he has a reunion with the Octopussy Circus!

Author's Response:

I hadn't really thought about taking it in that direction, but I haven't fully fleshed out the story yet, so I don't know.

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2021 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 A reunion, with a twist of troubling information

Really enjoying this - I like the scene building as the plan becomes more and more clear. I think I can see (and like) where this is going but hoping for the emergence of a super villainess (Irma?) ala World Is Not Enough who claims responsibility and ultimately benefits more than all others.

Please do keep up the excellent work :)



Author's Response:

Thank You for the kind words!



Author's Response:

Thank You for the kind words!

You must login (register) to review.