I just caught up on this story, and I've really gotten into it, particularly the back half of what you've posted so far!

First off, both your ideas for Luna's interactions with Levi and their execution have been incredible throughout the story! From the tongue ring early on to the eyelash incident and all that followed, I've been floored by the little details you've incorporated from both Levi and Luna's respective perspectives, like Luna making sure to eat those candies that Levi always hated so much when he was stuck in her tongue ring or the way Levi will never be able to look at his mom's beloved salads again because Luna stuffed him in a grape and threw him in one. And the descriptions of these scenes are awesome! They're always so vivid and take the time to convey the scene in a really enthralling way.

But it's the deeper story that's really drawn me in. Full disclosure, I typically consider myself more of a gentle guy, although I can enjoy some of the darker and more destructive stuff as well. But I've never been much for stories where a giantess is cruel just for cruelty's sake.

This is why Luna intrigues me so much! She's been pretty damn cruel to Levi so far, but she doesn't think she's been cruel to him at all, really.. She's used to doing this sort of thing, albeit with willing (well, at least before they shrink) participants who actually have lists telling her what's okay and not okay for her to do to them (although it sounds like she still finds a way to push those limits, which is as hilarious as it is hot). Levi is her first unwilling one and doesn't have a list (because he's unwilling, of course), so she hasn't even stopped to consider that her brother might not handle these actions as well as even those complaining tinies who are pissed that they were stuffed in her shoe for a 10K run.

All she knows is that he shrank himself, so he has to be interested in this sort of thing (which we obviously know is true at this point). So there's this weird mixture of loving to tease her brother and sort of wanting to help initiate him in the ways of feeling helpless that drives her actions throughout the story. To her, it's a loving thing; she gives him shit because she loves him, but she also feels like she's helping him, in a way.

That's not to say that Luna is selfless. Not at all. She's getting so much more out of this than she does with the average tiny. Some of that is because dominating her brother just feels different; it means more and gives her a stronger reaction. I also think the fact that Levi doesn't come with any restrictions is appealing to her as well. She can do whatever she wants with him and not feel like she's violating any sort of agreement (because as messed up as Luna can be, she's not a bad person and she would never knowingly torture one of her tinies, even if she does like to toe the line a bit).

And while she has no idea about the psychological damage she's doing to Levi (let alone the damage to their relationship as siblings), we do see her feeling guiltier and guiltier the longer she keeps him tiny. I thought it was actually pretty touching when Luna saw people Levi's age just enjoying their summer break and really starting to wonder if she was taking things too far with him. Taking away his holiday bothered her on some level, so I have to think if she truly knew what she was putting him through, she'd be horrified!

But she doesn't know. As Levi says throughout the story, this is all just a game to her. She sees how his body reacts to what she's doing, and that causes her to misinterpret his anger and pleading as mere embarrassment at how much he's enjoying all this. At least in my mind, she truly believes that she's just helping Levi get over some of his hang-ups and getting him to embrace a different side of himself. And if she gets off on his helplessness and the power she has over him? Well, sometimes a good deed is its own reward, as they say!

She's wrong, of course, which is one of the most interesting parts about this story. It makes for something of a deep allegory for how some people respond to rape. Levi has told Luna no throughout all of this. He's screamed at her. He's begged her. He's tried to make her see his side of things. But she sees that he's hard, and, in her mind, that makes everything okay. She doesn't understand that his natural bodily reaction is something he can't help. That it's making the situation worse instead of better for him. That it only adds to his shame instead of hinting that she's getting closer to a breakthrough with him. This is something that a lot of rape victims experience, and it understandably really fucks them up! I don't know if it was your intention to draw on this, but your work conveys such a tragic reality so beautifully here.

Now, as with any allegory, I'm not saying it should be taken too literally. I'm not trying to directly compare Luna to a rapist. Like I said before, she truly believes that Levi is down for all this stuff, and she really does care about him. Her mentality is different than that of a rapist, so the metaphor is imperfect for sure! So I'm not trying to hate on her. I just thought that you captured that particular feeling on Levi's end of things so perfectly that I had to mention it.

As for Levi himself, like Luna, he's also dealing with a huge internal struggle. Part of him does like being tiny, but being his sister's toy is a horrifying prospect for him and could even be ruining it to the point that he'll never be able to properly enjoy this with a girl he wants to be tiny for. There's also the fact that Luna's teasing doesn't feel like teasing when he's so small. It feels terrifying and unrelenting. He doesn't know how much she actually cares about him (he even thinks her sincere attempt to check on him by shrinking down was just another fun mind game she was playing with him), so even if he wanted to enjoy this (which, again, he doesn't at all), he'd be too afraid of what she'd do to him next to do so. He thinks she's trying to break him, despite the fact that we know she's trying to make sure that she's not (while still having her fun, of course!).

Not to mention that there are plenty of things that she's doing to him that he wouldn't enjoy with anyone, like being swallowed, for example. To her, him going on the full tour was a series of accidents that she feels bad about (I like that it was noted that she didn't want to do that to him back when he was in her salad), but to him, it was a nightmare! And she could have ended it at any time but chose not to. She didn't have to suck on him at the bowling alley. She didn't have to taunt him before nailing that strike. She didn't have to try to blackmail him into getting access to his socials before letting him out. And, once she woke up and realized it was too late to spare him the humiliation of being shitted out, she didn't have to go about her day like nothing was wrong. She could have tried to make things easier for him, but she didn't, which is a common trend in the story.

So it only makes sense that Levi thinks Luna doesn't give a shit about him (look at me with that fine punwork!). To him, she's torturing him because she gets off on it. His suffering is fun for her. That sense of betrayal has to make up for all the pain the shrinkbox keeps him from going through!

So seeing all of this weighed against his desires when it comes to his size makes for a really intense internal conflict, and the complexity of all this makes him so interesting as a character. And Luna not realizing that he's going through all this and just assuming that he's like all of her other tiny toys leaves me with that empty, sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach, a sign of how invested I've become in these two. Well done!

Glancing through a chunk of the reviews for this story so far, I'm glad to see that there are several other readers also wanting a good outcome for Levi. I'm really pulling him, and I, too, hope he can find some semblance of a happy ending. Of course, I also happened to notice that you asked a few of these reviewers for ideas of what that might look like, so, if you haven't already figured out how to end the story yet (some of those reviews were a couple years old), I do have some thoughts on this.

I saw some people calling for outright revenge on Luna, but that wouldn't feel right to me. She's done terrible things to Levi, but she really is unaware of it all, and, again, I think she's a good person overall, her bratty personality notwithstanding. So, to me, any happy ending here would have to involve her either coming to understand what she's done to her brother and trying to fix it or facing the consequences of her actions.

By consequences, I don't mean that she suffer the same fate. It may not quite be a "happy" ending, but there would be an odd sense of satisfaction in seeing her finally realize how much she's fucked things up once she grows back Levi. Something as simple as her teasing him the day after growing him back at home, expecting him to get annoyed or angry with her or maybe even throw the teasing back her way, only for him to look away and hurry back to his room without a word could work to that end. Luna loves her brother and expects things to go back to normal after this, so to see her realize that her brother will never see her the same way again would be devastating to her, and it would probably be the worst form of "comeuppance" she could suffer.

But, like I said, that's not exactly happy, now is it? No, I think to achieve that, Luna has to figure out what Levi is actually going through before the end of the holiday. Maybe he finally says something that gets through to her, something as simple as him telling her flatly, "No, you don't," after she tells him that she really does love him.

Or maybe one day she starts fucking with him and realizes that he's not responding at all: no screaming, no begging, not even an erection. He's just limp and lifeless, and after shrinking down again to check on him, all she finds is a thousand-yard stare waiting for her.

It could even come from her almost losing Levi or him somehow ending up at the mercy of someone much crueler than her (and on purpose, even!) somehow. Hell, what happened with the eyelash, shot, and chewing gum could qualify, with Luna realizing how close she came to truly losing her brother once she's sobered up (although it might take a worse incident, too, so I'm not necessarily suggesting that move in this direction right away if you do decide to read/listen to any of this). A major event like this could be a wake-up call for her and cause her to start thinking about how to fix what she's done.

And that's the big question, really: If Luna does realize the truth and wants to fix things, how exactly would she go about doing that? This could be the gentle enthusiast in me talking, so please disregard if that's not your thing, but spending the back end of her holiday trying to rehab her brother, maybe trying to find ways to help him enjoy the size difference without tormenting him would be kind of cool. Seeing her brattiness scaled down (but not completely gone, of course) and actually taking what Levi wants into consideration (although growing a broken or damaged Levi would be a bad idea for several reasons) would show real growth on her part.

Or Luna could try to make things up to Levi by giving him to Jenny. Now, maybe you want Jenny there as something that's always out of reach for Levi, and there's certainly an appeal to that as well. But personally, I'm hoping she does become involved with Levi at some point in the story. And it could be interesting seeing how Jenny handles Levi in his current state, both physically and mentally. She may try to do some things he's traumatized over and have to scale back a bit, or maybe something like spending hours in her shoe may be just what he needs to get over what Luna did to him.

Of course, Jenny could also find Levi on her own somehow or a guilty Luna could confess everything to her. Maybe Luna would volunteer to shrink down herself (this time in front of an actual giant) and go through some of the same stuff she put Levi through, either to understand how he's feeling or to try to prove that what she did wasn't really that bad (and learning otherwise pretty quickly). Sure, it'd be different because she's at least agreeing to let Jenny do these things to her, but that might make it worse; if this stuff is so horrible to her willingly going through it, how bad was it for Levi having it forced on him?

Then again, maybe Luna doesn't volunteer at all. Maybe a pissed off or horrified Jenny gets ahold of Luna's shrinkbox and shrinks her (she has to have a profile in there since she shrank herself, right?). Maybe the best scenario would be Jenny tormenting Luna for what she did while pampering a tiny Levi at the same time. There's actually a lot of ways you could go with that. How far would Jenny go? How would Levi feel about Luna going through all of that? At what point would Luna realize how Levi felt going through the same thing? Or would Luna end up liking it on this end of things, too?

Hopefully, even if none of these thoughts sound quite right to you, they at least in some small way help inspire an idea in you (assuming you're still considering a happy ending of some sort). I'm mostly of the opinion that any positive ending for Levi should involve Jenny somehow, but that's just me.

Anyway, that's enough rambling from me. This is an awesome story, and I'm eager to see where you go with it from here!

I'm really happy this story came back with lots of great new ideas! Thank you, great job !

Like the previous comment, I really preferred the other version. Not only because now all the paragraphs are displayed weird but I also enjoyed the smoothing options.

I really liked the previous version. My problem with this version is that it's broken.   All the paragraphs are displayed weird and the empty blank space at the bottom of the page

I just discovered the story. Bring a tongue ring is an incredible thought, at the whim of a young woman's powerful tongue and mouth. Great writing skills!

The story was very good in the first chapters, but the further it is going, it feels like ideas are just being recycled. It honestly got me to just skip parts, because i already kind of knew what was going to happen. It kind of feels like that holiday has been going on for months. 

This part is just my personal taste/opinion and can be ignored :)// i really hope Levi gets a nice ending. i have nothing against domination i like it even, but the story is turning into just cruelty for him even if he's beginning to like it. The story is evolving into something where i cannot imagine he'll grow back ever, even if he does he's going to be completely broken. And if that happens, how is he going to face his family? Logically he'd not be able to look at them properly, besides most likely looking like a soulless human being by then. I'd be cool to see some kind of revenge actually, something where she'll understand what she did to him. 

But you write your story and whatever you have in mind! I'm just some random guy on the internet!

Glad your writing again, one of my favorite authors. Love the unaware scenarios and the smoothing is the perfect vessel for that type of content. Hope to see some more feet related content. Smoothed into nail polish maybe?

A+++ writing 

You're a creative artist and a cunning intelligence, and  I appreciate you sharing your work with us!

Alright, completed chpts 6-10. Can’t read any further as I’m beyond bored. The first 4 - 4.5 chapters were pretty good and intriguing, but after that, it’s just been all about humiliation and torture. I don’t mind a bit of that, but paragraph after paragraph becomes torturous to me...and then I get bored. Rate 8.5 out of 10 for the first 5 chapters, 3 of 10 thereafter, but I’ll be generous and rate a 7 of 10 overall.

What another great chapter and so long really get into it. Can't wait for the next one and the evening of fun they about to have