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Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2022 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Wonderful chapter finally getting to him getting truly used by her. Was excellent and I hope you keep going, I look forward to more if you do. Really want to see him get to experience anal at that size



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Thanks! 

Reviewer: Rolanrunn Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2022 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: Panty prisoner

Okay, so I think even if Levi was turned on by his sister, she doesn’t realize he was actually just in a bad spot when he found the shrink box.

I think regardless of her enjoyment with shrunk Levi that since she has experience being a dom for shrunken people that she would’ve made sure to check if he really wanted this.

It’s likely she thinks his panic is more of an act but when the trip is over, she’ll soon realize he was actually traumatized by all this when they finally talk. So… she’ll likely need to keep him away from their folks until she can get him to get himself together.

I would however like to see Levi get one over his sister and she’ll be the one to see how her playthings dealt with their experiences as a shrunken toy with Levi back to normal size.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for your comments! Although I know what you mean, but I won't write the reversal part.. Let's see how this story plays out :)

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2022 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 6: Panty prisoner

I'm really glad this is back! I love the teasing and everything about this chapter. It's sooo perfect! I just wish Luna brought along her brother during her run though. Still this is another one of a heck excellent chapter again, mate! Keep it up!

Can't wait for Levi to graduate as his sister's actual dildo

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: Lupe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2022 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Very fun chapter! Something tells me once she is finished using her new toy, she will have worked up quite the appetite!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Stay tuned for chapter 8 :)

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

awesome story so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Please feel free to give suggestions for the story! 

Reviewer: mirmo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2021 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

Very good story !



Author's Response:

Thanks! If you have any suggestions you know where to find me! 

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2021 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

Great chapter and story. I like how Luna is balancing out how Levi is still her brother and a tiny that is a sextoy, her sextoy. Levi is struggling with the situation as well. He doesn’t want to be here but he is secretly enjoying it.

I do wish that he will be swallowed and live through it. He is pretty tough by the shrinkbox increasing his durability. Maybe one of those stores has a gel to protect the tiny even more, and give them a flavor, like strawberries. If she does swallow him, the question will be how big she wants to eat him. Would she keep him a small crumb or would she grow him to be a couple of inches to feel him go down?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I believe the box will make him invulnerable to it from the start. I like the flavour bit though! Maybe she'll swallow him both ways. 

Reviewer: L200 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2021 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Hey, just a suggestion, but what if there was a sequel in which it is the sister's turn to be the plaything? I believe some people might also get a kick out of a male giant :P

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2021 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

Wonderful story so far. I hope one of the features of the update is an option to swallow a tiny, and have them come out the other end still alive. A full tour.



Author's Response:

Stay tuned, almost there :) 

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2021 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

This story keeps getting better and better. I'm loving it so much. I didn't expect the foot part. It was so perfect. I hope it was a bit longer tho.

I'm really looking forward for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2021 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 4: Taking things further

I was thinking that Luna could grow Levi’s dick to be bigger while he remains small. She can fun with his dick which is absurdly large for his body. She could also grow his tongue to lick her.

The other part is that she could use the shrinkbox on herself. She could minimize her breasts and place Levi on her breasts again under her bikini. Luna then returns the breasts back to normal to really have the bikini squeeze him.

Just some ideas. I really like the story.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll take them in consideration! 

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2021 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 4: Taking things further

I like the build up. Her being a little tipsy to be willing to use her brother to please her. That is taking their relationship to the next level. I wonder if Luna will leave Levi inside her for the night?

Since Luna has full control of Levi’s size, does she have control to the size of a portion of his body? That will create new scenarios for Luna to play with him.

Can’t wait for the next chapter for when they get it on

Author's Response:

Thanks! What scenario's did you have in mind? 

Reviewer: tra xanh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2021 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Great chapter! The end is really great at making me look forward to the next chapter and the slow buildup is great for character building. Kinda sad that she didn't buy herself a present from his money (connected to the app maybe?) but can understand if it's not in your vision. 

Very much looking forward to how the story continues! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I still plan to do that. Maybe with an update from the shrinkbox. 

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

This is a hot story! Love the interaction between the sister and brother. She is in control and able to live out some crazy fantasies.

Since she is in full control of his height, will she increase his height a little when her parents are not going to disturb them so she can more ways to have fun. Like growing him so she can suck his dick until he cums to show that he really belongs to her.

The watch and the app being able to communicate is interesting. It allows her to tease him more and figure out what gets him the most.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, she's in full control :)

Reviewer: Lupe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Does the shrink box only shrink and change what they experience? Or does it also transform? Like could he end up as her thong? Or even transformed into a part of her body like her breast or butt to be teased?

Just trying to see what it is capable of!

Author's Response:

That's a nice thought! That would give her even more options later on. Will think about it, if you have any ideas, let me know. You can also write me an email: yougts@gmail.com

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Really enjoying this story. Very curious to see what Luna has planned!

I know for one thing, he seems like he may be taking a trip up her butt some time soon with how much rougher she is being.

Would she view him as a snack too and let him take the long way? I can’t recall if you feature that in your stories!

No matter, looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes I plan for him to take the long way as a piece of food. But she'll use the app to make it a bit more bearable for him ;) 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

Love this chapter! It is great to see that Levi is enjoying her sister a bit too much. I like the addition of the tongue piercing to carry him in her mouth. I wonder what other sort of places she put the bead. I wonder what Luna would think when she notices Levi’s erection. Maybe play with it to make him cum.

Since she doesn’t have her usual toys to please herself, she is going to need a new set for the three weeks. Maybe a new product pops out in that store. A dildo that is customizable for whatever a person wants to do to a tiny person. An inside compartment for them to watch from the outside, check. A tip point to allow them to feel it, check. A pod with liquid to shot them inside, check. There are additional features that can be added but she can purchase those later.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: L200 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

As a side side note, how much control does Luna have over her brother's size? A tad fucked up and gross, but what if she put him in her ass, he ended way deeper than she had anticipated, panicked, shrunk him even further and got him out with a fart?

Not sure what fetishes you want to explore with this story tho.



Author's Response:

Thanks! We'll see! 

Reviewer: L200 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Mmmm... My post-horny self still wants her to get somehow caught just for the hell of it, even if it is an alternate ending, but still, great read.

As a side note, the shrinking process makes him not need to eat or anything, but it doesn't stop bodily functions, does it? I imagine him getting a bit of payback at her by shitting in her mouth or smth, dunno. 



Author's Response:

Hmm, I think the bodily functions just stops. :) An alternate ending could be an option though! 

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

So many great scenarios especially the masturbation part. Hearing his own sister's moans is probably humiliating and gross for him.

Love to read the next one, mate

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