Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Lulu's Turn

Very nice story, though too bad we have not heard of his continual life as Yuna's nylons.  That would be an interesting next chapter.

I have to admit, not being a player of Final Fantasy X, I had to look up Lulu.  Seeing as how she wears nylons within her open front dress / coat is pretty hot.  Who wouldn't want to be those nylons?

Which makes one ask, why didn't he enjoy being her nylons?

I notice you never mention his name, unless I missed it {could be, I had a few shots.  HICCUP!}.  I myself do this in my stories to afford the affect that anybody could be the tiny / object in question, and not somebody specifically named exempli gratia "John Doe".

On a personal note, I would like to point out I have a similar portal  styled story called "Conjured Portals"  about three girls {April, Megan, Katie} using a book of magic to open portals into the lives of others to use them in various ways.  So if you read "Conjured Portals" in the future you should rest assured it was written in parallel to your story and not as a knock off. 

Nicely done, but too bad Lula dismisses her nylons so quickly.