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Reviewer: Milla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2022 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Again, a great story, girlfood! After reading 'The Magic wand', I didn't resist to read this one as I saw it showing up in the list. And, once more, I'm pleased that I got to read it!

This one had the hint of romantic vore I LOVE to read! You have such a perfect descriptive ability and vast vocabulary, I'd like to write that way (English isn't my native language, so...).

And that idea about a restaurant with willing men being eaten? Maybe you can read my stories, 'A date with Emily' and 'Last Dinner', and get to know the 'Moon Shine': they serve men there too... but in this case, it's a secret only women know, so no talking about in the open, ok? lol

Thanks for such a great story!



Author's Response:

Milla, thank you for your thoughtful and kind review. It is great to hear what people enjoy reading. I try to tailor my writing to what people seem to like so your feedback is not only welcome, it will be considered when writing future stories. 

There was the hint of romance here, or perhaps a friendship with romantic possibilities. But I think both Liko and Trissa were happy with how things concluded. It seems that each person was fond of the other in more ways than one.

Since you like romance AND have already read, "The Magic Wand," may I suggest that story's immediate sequel, "A Stranger in Felarya." It has plenty of vore, but also plenty of romance. I do think you'll enjoy it. That story can only be found on deviant art right now, but in a few days, I will post it on giantessworld specifically for you. Please tell me what you think of it.

Another Forbidden Dish story that has hints of romance is "Against My Fate," which I will be posting on giantessworld later today.  

Your compliments regarding my writing are truly humbling. Despite recognizing that I having much to learn, I like to think that my that my writing has shown some measure of improvement since first beginning on this website over a decade ago. And please accept my compliments in return. Though English is not your native language you certainly seem able to write it well. And you can be sure that I will read your stories sometime in the next week or so. Thank you for recommending them. I am looking forward to it. 

Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2022 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

So last time I read a story from you, I think it was… Martha? Martha was the ‘pretend to be kind’ woman who only preyed upon men who changed their minds. It’s been a while. But you’ve always had a real gift for delivery and for capturing the really predatory and sultry aspects of this whole thing, and the forbidden dish saga was something I relied on while I was abroad and it’s always been great. This one in particular, I loved, because willing is my absolute favorite scenario, and you did a really good job as I would expect in setting a truly enthusiastic prey apart from the others even for a woman who only partakes in the willing. You still managed to subtly address the whole “dark secret” often disregarded or simply unspoken about the restaurant; namely, shrinking is a one way act. I tried to embody that a bit in my first story on here and I tend to think it was a little influenced by you. You’re your own person until the moment you let them shrink you, then it’s final. Very darkly erotic. 

I’ve often wondered what’s really stopping someone from leaving with a tiny alive in their belly and extracting them later. Has to happen sometime right? But you seem focused on the finality of the act and I always respected that and knew what I was getting into. 

Just discovered you on DA. Any other willing vore stories? Kinda my jam. Fatal or not. 

Anyway. Great execution all the way through. 10/10 as always. Only got stopped up one one typo. “Award moment” Vs awkward. You’re such a good writer I wondered if I was just missing something. Lol. 

Good to see your work. 



Author's Response:

Xiao-renzhe, thank you for taking the time to write such a thoughtful and detailed review. It means more than you realize, my friend.

As you pointed out, so many of the patrons and staff at the Forbidden Dish are cruel or drunk with power. There are comparatively fewer stories of kind, friendly women engaged in consensual vore with eager, tiny people. Recognizing this delinquency in the narrative of the Forbidden Dish universe, I chose to write this story. There's something delightful about the concept of having a polite, civilized discussion with someone who is about to eat you, or whom you are about to eat. I was glad that Like and Trissa both had such a chance. 

"Award moment," ought to have been "Awkward moment." It was a typo. I really need to get some writing software rather than try to proofread these things myself. Thank you for pointing it out. I shall fix it. And it's interesting to hear that you read the Forbidden Dish saga while abroad. I am glad that the Dish was there for you when you needed it and that you enjoyed it so much. 

As it happens, I do have some more willing Forbidden Dish stories. Check out "Steampunk Dish," or "Against My Fate." Both are on DA right now. I was going to wait until next weekend to post it here on giantess world, but I'll put one of them up this weekend so you can find it more easily. It's the least I can do after such a kind review. Thanks again and I hope you like the next stories. :-)  


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