




Date: July 30 2025 9:00 PM Title: I Want to Try It
Sorry I didn't review back when I read the first two chapters, but I loved those when you originally published them and I love this one too! Marin has so much potential as a giantess with her demeanor, I hope you do another chapter with her again someday with her and Gojo officially getting together with the possibilities that opens up for them. Maybe for season 3...
Anyway, for this new chapter, Shinju is great as well. Shy characters going overboard with the power of having a tiny is another great trope. And full tour is my favorite kind of vore, so I was glad to see it go in that direction. Though, with how last chapter ended, Sajuna definitely seems like she wants to play the giantess sometimes to, and even though she is into this dynamic with her sister, I could still see her convincing Marin to give her a chance to be the big one for some payback with the ways Shinju went overboard.
I've talked a bunch about the characters, but I also just have to note that I love your writing in general. It all flows quite naturally and you manage to not make the characters feel out of character even in such extreme situations. Always happy to see that kind of thing on this site.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate getting to hear what my readers think of what I've written and where I could potentially take things in the future :D
Marin definitely does need some one-on-one time with Gojo, but I do plan on doing some stuff with her encouraging Shinju to come out of her shell a bit more first, both directly and indirectly. Like that sleepover they promised to do ;P
Having Sajuna be the giantess with Shinju would also be fun, but I can't see her being able to bring herself to do anything to Shinju like Shinju did to her. But it would be fun to let her get her hands on Gojo if I could make it work. Marin is super possessive of Gojo, so it would take a big justification to get her to share him, even if it were Juju-sama asking lol
And thank you for the compliment about how I handle characters. I'm always worried I might be making characters act a bit too out of character without the proper justifications for it in my stories. I understand that with fan fictions, the author is free to present the characters however they want, but for me, I like the characters how they are presented in the source material, so I want to keep them as in character as I can and develop them naturally. Not to discredit people who give characters wildly different personalities in their stories, that can be fun too, but if I'm going to do something like that, I want there to be a reason in my stories for it.
I do have quite a few notes for stories after this one, at least four or five more stories worth, so we'll see if I ever get time to work on those. Until then, I hope you find other stories I'll publish as enjoyable as this one!





Date: September 16 2022 1:23 PM Title: Getting Too Into Character
Honestly it's a tragedy that this story has not been reviewed. Incredible work getting into the characters for this one--Marin reads like a dream, from capturing her expressiveness to her mannerisms to her personality. Certainly helps that I enjoy her intensely, so amazing choice there--but there was so much that you did to fully bring her to life in this story. It's also always amazing to see a story that highlights some more minor characters from any series, and seeing Shinju as a giantess felt like an amazing choice.
Should you decide to make a sequel to cover what might be happening all night, I for one would read it immediately.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! There are no favorites among your children... but I loved this story so much. The anime and manga captured me and drew me in with Marin and her so extravagant yet down-to-earth personality, so I was really nervous to capture that in this as well. Also, Shinju as a giantess, playfully messing with her sister, it just felt right and I had to run with it :D
I do have a sequel planned for this story, though I initially wanted to wait to write it to celebrate a second season of the anime but now I'm getting impatient for it lol