[Report This]Date: August 03 2022 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
This story is great! I love the tons of detail describing everything the micros/nanos see and feel from their perspective. I hope we get to see some butt stuff, hopefully with Ostrov?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I always feel like I struggle with writing tiny pov and so that comment means a lot, and I can guarantee you that there will be plenty of butt stuff coming in the future.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2022 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Harsh Reality
So great to see you back! I just discovered this story and it is off to a great start. I love when she begrudgingly apologizes to one of her little cities, even saying herself that it looked bad. And then when stepping through Snowfield in one of the other chapters, man, I absolutely love your writing style. Even when she realized what she had done in one of the flashbacks of chapter 5, it was so well written and fun to read. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Carnage. I appreciate your feedback a lot. You coming from writing such exciting stories that I have enjoyed. I can't wait to return from the flashback section!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2022 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
One of the best stories I've read in a while! The reference images are something that I'll always appreciate!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I might add more later on for other characters, but there always could be an ownership issue.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2022 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Storms
Very good description of the cosmic storm, if something like Osrtov disappeared I imagine that the reactions would be like this
Entire nations shrunken under the rule of cruel women is my biggest fantasy of all so I'm eager to see how she communicates and becomes her goddess, who imposes on them, etc.
Author's Response:
Hopefully I can nail it
[Report This]Date: May 22 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Absolutely amazingly well done in this latest chapter! I can’t wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: May 10 2022 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Shattered
interesting, interesting
knowing Kristen's past is fantastic to understand why she acts like a goddess with the micros...so many frustrations in her life need to be channeled somewhere
Author's Response:
Oh, absolutely, I feel like it gives her somewhat of an excuse, going through all that and then having to raise a kid by herself while millions of people are relying on you for help. Can't be easy.
Date: April 23 2022 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
So excited to see this continued. Also really curious to see where you take it. I really like the addition of the micro country, I think lots of fun possibilities can arise from having different sizes present, whether a shrink ray is used or they're just already that size. Great stuff!!
Author's Response:
Nah, I'd say more like they were already that size, just mixed up in a cosmic accident and ended up in Kristen's room that small.
Date: April 10 2022 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
The stories of an average woman who secretly have a micro civilization in her home and use it to be goddesses are irresistible to me. Also your choice of photos for kristen helped my imagination a lot
Personally I would like a continuation and if possible an origin story for Queenstown and the rest of the cities (Kristen moved into the house of a mad scientist who worked on that project? she stole technology from someone else? etc)
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment, yeah, more cities will have backstories in the upcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2022 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Suburban Goddess
A terrific concept. I have a yet to posted story along the same line, "Brenda's Basement", only not of micro cities but of a woman with tinies captive in her subterranean basement. The depth of the opening to the basement being to high to escape her dwelling.
Will be interesting how this story with such micro tinies plays out. Really like the toe nail polish aspect.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I love nail polish, so there might be more scenes with more detail about that.
Date: April 09 2022 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Well done! Haven't read a story like this that I've enjoyed in a long while. Reminds me of the quality of effort put into Cities in the Cellar and a few others. Really looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Cities in the Cellar is a classic in my opinion and one of the stories that motivated me to pick up writing in the first place.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2022 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Suburban Goddess
Good so far, can’t wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you! hopefully in a good direction.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Suburban Goddess
I'm curious to see where this might go, I really have liked your previous stories and I'm a sucker for milfs
personnally I'm a big fan of a big bush over trimmed but that's just my prefrence,
a nano is the bush is worth thousands in the hand :P
Author's Response: Haha thank you, I wouldn't count bush out of this story as she gets older, or from other characters.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Love it! Please continue
Author's Response:
Looks like I will! Thank you.