[Report This]Date: February 13 2025 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Facades Part 2
Wow! That was a surprise twist at the end, with the implied (but hopefully not really) demise of Niko. You are right about this being your longest chapter so far, and it was well worth the wait. Thank you for writing it.
The demise of Anton, on the other hand, is something I did expect to happen for a long time. On one hand, maybe this was long overdue considering what a creep he was, but then again there probably won't be another quite like him. That's mostly a good thing, but his weird and creepy obsession with Kristen had its uses for the development of the story.
It will be interesting to see how Parker handles the running of Crest now that Kristen appointed her to be Anton's successor. But I'm curious whether the people of Crest themselves will entirely accept the idea. They won't really have much choice if Kristen forces it on them, but Parker is an outsider from a different city and presumably a different world altogether. Will the culture of Crest allow them to accept an outsider (one whom their previous legitimate ruler wanted to kill too btw) as their new queen or whatever? Obviously they live under some monarchy steeped in tradition, and not only is Parker an alien, but she also isn't royalty. She certainly isn't their legitimate royalty. But of course Kristen can brute force her on them anyway whether they like it or not. Still, I think some of the Old Guard in Crest may offer up some resistance. If you're looking for ideas for "criminals" to be rounded up for Kristen's judgement, some Old Guard "Anton Loyalists" or whatever you want to call it in Crest is a suggestion. ;)
One thing I myself will miss about Anton is his creepy collection and veneration of things like Kristen's toe nail and so on. I don't think Kristen herself ever even knew about this stuff, so I'd be curious to see how she'd have reacted to it. BTW, this kinda sorta reminds me of a weird obsession which the former Libyan dictator Muammar Gaddaffi had with former U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice, where he had weird stuff about her in his compound and when she found out about it she was creeped out about it. That's the closest sort of real life analog I'm aware of of Anton and his Kristen obsession.
As the new queen of Crest, I guess Parker will inherit Anton's creepy collection of Kristen mementos. It will be interesting because she herself sorta venerates Kristen as a goddess (just as many tinies do), even if not to the same weird extent as Anton did. Maybe she would keep this stuff around? Or maybe its too much and she would dispose of it? It would be an interesting topic should she go into a voice call with Kristen and there is some giant toe nail or hair or whatever in the background which would then have to be explained. :)
That said, Parker has endured SO much. She really truly does deserve this break of being elevated to royalty, and as you wrote, she couldn't be worse than Anton at the very least, even if she sustained some brain damage. It will be interesting to see how things play out. Maybe you could have her get into contact with Justyna again? I think it would be cool for them to reconnect, only now as one "queen" to another. When Justyna first saw her, Parker was some giant soldier girl who saved her regime from being toppled by rebels and (unfortunately) literally pissed on her people; but now this humble military giant is the queen of a "sovereign" (in quotations because none of these cities are truly sovereign under Kristen's oppressive rule) realm, not completely unlike Justyna and her command of Ostrov. It would be quite a transformation and Justyna would probably marvel at it.
I assume that micros and nanos can send transmissions to one another between the rooms, right? And if not, then maybe its something Kristen could facilitate through an inter-room video conference. Either way that would be cool and hope it happens.
As for Justyna... her pregnancy is a major plot development to say the least. While this wasn't something I was expecting, it does make perfect sense given the amount of like non-stop fucking that she and Niko were doing. Again, I hope he isn't dead even though that was strongly implied at the end... if he is dead it would be something Justyna would most likely never be able to forgive Kristen for. Obviously this is the sort of thing Justyna does NOT need to go through right now, especially with the enormous complication of being pregnant. This is going to be a very tough time for her and I hope she'll make it, but man... this is some really rough shit.
If the micros and nanos didn't have enough legit reason to hate Kristen already, then this chapter in particular gives them plenty of further reason. She was a real major bitch in this chapter. Possibly moreso than in any other chapter to date so far. Destroying an entire city just because they didn't vote the way she wanted them to was just petty and childish, you know? Its the sort of thing you'd expect a 7 year old child like Maddie to do if she were in charge, but not a 35 year old grown woman. No excuse for it, quite frankly.
And also those cities she destroyed in the nano room. Whether or not she killed Niko, she definitely did kill numerous people just by being a petty childish bitch. So yes, any hatred that tinies hold towards her is very much justified in my opinion. Especially now, because she is transforming into a cruel psychopathic bitch. Its been a huge change from where she was at the start of the story.
Justyna is absolutely right for not wanting to bring a child into "her world" (referring to Kristen). I'd imagine most tiny women in the rooms would feel similarly on the matter. The birth rates among the tinies is probably really low, while meanwhile their death rate is catastrophically high. This doesn't bode well for them surviving until Maddie can be introduced to them as an adult.
Even as a psychopath who doesn't care about the lives of the tinies at all and only cares about her daughter above anything else, I still think a case could be made that Kristen shouldn't want to get too destructive and would want to keep them going just for Maddie's sake, right? If a whole city or multiple cities get snuffed out per chapter and at the same time few tinies are being born, then there's not going to be anything left for Maddie to inherit and be a goddess over. Does Kristen want to deny that experience to her daughter? So that's one way to look at it even if she has no empathy at all whatsoever for the tinies. She should still want to preserve them for Maddie's sake, right?
But I do hope that Kristen has some empathy for the tinies in her, or at least some empathy for some of the tinies, like Justyna. Enough to pull her back from the precipice of this cruel monster she is fast becoming. Maybe this development of Justyna's pregnancy is the sort of development that save her from falling further into that abyss?
I would think it might remind her of herself when she was pregnant on that night all those years ago when the tinies were teleported into the rooms. Does Kristen really want to be a cruel monster to Justyna, this woman who she should be able to relate to in this matter because she herself was like that once?
Again, I hope that Niko survived (somehow), but if that isn't the case it would make the child in Justyna's belly all that much more important, because it would be the last thing she has left of Niko, and he didn't want her to terminate it. Yet it also makes sense to not want to bring a child into a world ruled a giant psychopath, so this definitely puts Justyna between a rock and a hard place. I'm not sure how you'll navigate through it but I'm very interested to see how this develops. Personally I hope she does keep it, and I also hope Kristen dials back on the evilness at least enough so that Justyna wouldn't regret her decision.
If you are open to suggestions, I have an idea on how you could navigate this sensitive issue without making things too controversial. I know you don't want to write about children in this story, but unfortunately many children have inevitably been subjected to all the cruel abuses that the adults have. But I have an idea how you could cut that down to a minimum or even completely eliminate it. Just have Kristen setup some safe area for children, pregnant women, and those who care for them. Just like how she divided that one city up into a city for males and females. She could do the same in order to protect children so they don't end up dying, or getting exposed to her masturbating, or whatever which children shouldn't be frankly. This safe designated area probably shouldn't even be within the rooms anyway. That way anything she or her friends do in the rooms it would be guaranteed that no children would be harmed by it. It could be inside of a locked jewelry box in her bedroom or something, and inside they would have all the amenities and not lack for anything, but most importantly is that they would be safe. As a mother herself, this is something Kristen should see as a priority. Then when those children reach adulthood, they can be taken back to their respective people in the rooms or something like that.
If you want to eliminate all interaction with children, that's how you can do it. At the same time, this would increase the birthrate of the tinies because they would feel more assured about it. In fact, women might deliberately seek to get pregnant just so they can escape to the safety and luxury of this place from that harsh world they have endured the past 7 years. And now that the security force has come into existence, it would allow this to be carried out more seamlessly. But yes this is a difficult thing to navigate, but if you want my suggestion on this, that would be it. Most people will agree that children should be protected. Even evil psychopath Kristen might be able to spare some empathy for the children in the rooms at the very least, and spare them from her shenanigans. And like I said this is also important for the long term survival of the tinies, because if they keep dying and not being born then that would be a genocide. So again, she should try to avoid that for Maddie's sake at LEAST, right?
One more thing on this topic... if Justyna does keep her child this would have some interesting possibilities when things jump ahead years into the future when Maddie becomes an adult and gets introduced to the rooms. Hopefully Justyna and Ostrov and so on manage to survive until that point, and if Justyna's child is born and survives until then too then she could retire from being the leader of Ostrov and hand the office over to her (now adult) child. It would be kinda like Kristen and Maddie, but from the opposite perspective of those who live at their feet. We see how people who were born in a normal reality struggle to cope with this situation, but seeing how those who were born and raised in that situation handle it would be interesting. I also hope Maddie and Justyna's child could become friends similarly to how Kristen and Justyna are. Or maybe "friend" isn't the right word given Kristen's cruel treatment of Justyna in this chapter... but I dunno. Let's call it a working relationship or something?
You know, its kinda funny how Maddie threw her bratty tantrum over how impatient she was to see what is in the rooms. It won't be until many years from now that she will find out how fortunate she truly is. She doesn't know it yet, but she won the proverbial jackpot by getting to become a goddess (assuming things survive until then); it would have been far more likely to ended up as one of those unlucky children born in the tiny rooms. Maddie thinks its "so unfair" she doesn't get to go into those rooms. Wait until she does get to go in there, and then she will understand who REALLY has it unfair. Hopefully she won't be as much of a bratty psychopath as her mother, but her behavior in this chapter doesn't bode well... :(
Poor Justyna's unborn child (and all the others in Ostrov and the cities). They're the ones who REALLY have it unfair, and if they throw tantrums like Maddie did, they at least have every right to feel that way in my opinion. Its a shitty situation. But I gave my suggestion on how it could be handled to make it a lot less shitty for them anyway.
Oh! Another thing... you know how this all started 7 years ago with that storm teleporting those cities into the rooms when Maddie was born? Well, Justyna's pregnancy has given me a really crazy idea. Bear with me here... but what if something just like that were to also happen for Justyna on the day when her child is born? What I mean to say is... what if a bunch of even smaller cities, a country or two, etc... get teleported into rooms within Justyna's palace? Like I said that would be a CRAZY idea, but wouldn't that be COOL? :) Then we could see if Justyna would fall into the same abyss of psychopathy as Kristen and her friends, OR if she'd be better than that. It would put the matter to the test. It would let her see Kristen's perspective on things. It would also (maybe) give her some much needed stress relief (?). And also something she could one day pass down to her own child.... if things manage to last. Would be really weird to have tiny cities/countries inside of rooms within another tiny city/country that in turn is inside of a giant room. Not only would these tinies have Justyna the goddess to worry about, but an even larger goddess ontop of that. I don't know... weird idea, but it would be cool in my opinion. :)
Anyway, that's my longwinded review/rant on your epic and likewise long chapter. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I hope it was worth the wait. It was a struggle to write! lol anyway, thank you for writing your review. Yeah, I think Anton served his purpose, Kristen wanted nothing to do with him and even though Kristen disapproved of his religious stuff, part of me wants to think she secretly liked the exalted attention at times after having saved Crest from Werth's invasion. Anton got what he deserved.
Parker is going to be more interesting to write from now on. She arguably could have died in Ostrov, she's been through a lot of injuries, just like me, honestly. But now she might have permanent damage that could affect how she operates from now on. I don't want to give too much away about her role as the new ruler of Crest and how she's going to handle filling that role.
Holy shit, I remember Gaddaffi having that shit about Rice, that's so true! And also true, Parker has an obsession with Kristen, but it feels more personal to her rather than the outright fanaticism Anton had.
The micros and nanos know that one another exists, but there hasn't been direct communication with them yet.
Justyna being pregnant was something I've been planning for a long time, I think Kristen's character right now doesn't want to admit how severe something like that it because it holds a mirror up to her face about what she's been doing. And I agree she needs to slow down or else there won't be any tinies left for Maddy anyway, but you saw what she said when Justyna asked if that's how she would want Maddy to rule and Kristen said yes if it made her happy. Kristen almost uses Maddy as an excuse so it will be interesting to see how that truly develops.
Kristen has empathy but is quick to twist it into what she thinks is justifiable acts, her love of the power she has is apparent. As I wrote in another reply to a review, she's a hypocrite and loves the fantasy of wanting to change and do better like a lot of people in real life get at 3am when they have the sudden motivation to eat healthy and change their lives or whatever.
As far as a safehaven city... that's actually something I've had an idea about since I first started writing this story, but for different reasons that could or might not come up later. Writing children in this matter isn't something I'm a fan of, so a lot of it is just implied so I don't feel like a piece of shit for writing that stuff. A safe city for them would make sense in this world though.
Yeah, having a child only 8 or so years younger than Maddy would be a fun development. Justyna being the closest thing to a tiny Kristen respected until she got frustrated. I think Justyna was just tyring to be protective of Niko but it backfired. Justyna was scared, a stoic person who deeply feels emotion but struggles to show it.
Haha, Justyna getting her own tiny city would be a lot of fun, but that would be so much more writing and I really want to get to Maddy's arc, but... not to say some other weird shit won't happen later that I have planned.
Thank you again for your reviews and feedback.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2025 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Facades Part 1
Hello. Long time reader, first time reviewer.
To begin, I (and am sure countless others) wish you the best in recovery. The fact you're still able to be creative within the recovery process is tremendous, and I'm sure is tougher than you'd like. Take solace in the fact that you're one of, if not the best writer on this entire website. Take whatever time needed it takes so you can continue to be you.
I've always appreciated the incredible, vivid detail you infuse into every aspect of your works. You branch into unique perspectives seldom explored, alongside the realistic brutality of macrophilia; I absolutely adore the idea of a monolithic suburban goddess wreaking havoc on a population of miniscule people, barely perceptible to the eye. Like germs or bugs, humans care for the existence of neither in their precious clean suburban homes and do everything in their power to dispose and rid of them. When played out in macrophilic scale and story, it's truly fascinating how sadistic humans truly are to things that are much smaller than us; and yet we use such mundane measures (to us) to do so.
For example, flushing them with or without waste sends specks cascading downward into the sewage filth where they belong, replaced by a refilling, clean porcelain bowl, satisfying and mindless to a giantess or giant. Occasionally the unlucky will end up in the bowl on cleaning day, as the chemically-blue bleached Clorox scrub water mixes with the waterfall of piss from above, the noxious concoction a brutal chemical burning of the miniscules in the toxic lake in the bowl screaming for their lives; the human above simply relieving themselves, maybe noticing they've turned the water a little green-er before they flush everything below into oblivion, never to think about ever again as it's disposed of. I loved the vivid description of the "torrential" flush of Ginny's specks into the public toilet drain in Chapter 20.
I personally love the idea of the tinies in your stories essentially being specks; smaller than an ant, but treated like one. Bigger than a germ, but treated like one. To be dominated. To be disposed of.
Being so small that you're within the palm ridges of a giant woman's soft, immaculate, manicured hand. Your landscape mirrors that of being a tourist within the Grand Canyon before you're dead, reduced to near ash and skeleton in a sudden moment. The woman, meanwhile, haplessly uses some foaming Purell from a stand dispenser at the grocery store. Or maybe she just pumped some foaming antibacterial hand soap while washing her hands, the minuscules lost within the lather, burning alive in the sudsy tide before being rinsed into the drain below.
I vividly remember a part in Chapter 18 of "Grove View Apartments" where the mom washes her hands, some specks helplessly being rinsed from her manicured hands with the suds and spiraling down the sink drain. I hadn't read anything like that before, and it's one of my favorite scenarios ever now in macrophilia. I would do literally anything for an inclusion of that scenario on a grander scale as part of a future chapter of this story; not necessarily while someone is washing the dishes, but maybe some of the specks end up on one of the womens' hands and experience hell as they are exterminated as a giantess washes her hands with some foaming hand soap in a kitchen sink, bathroom sink or public restroom sink. The terror striking them as the monolithic plastic foaming hand soap dispenser in the public restroom casts a shadow over the palm before 2-3 pumps shoot downward a frothy deluge of antibacterial foaming hell, a mountain of foaming death in the palm, suffocating all who end up in the lather in a painful death as they're rinsed, their last view as they swirl into the oblivion of the sudsy drainpipe an indifferent goddess above. The gurgle as they die the death of a germ, foaming soap suds churning around them, possibly in a floral scent as their grave is a restroom sink drain grate or a kitchen sink drain lined with an InSinkerator logo, cascading into darkness as the french-manicured goddess above now rinses the Bath and Body Works hand soap lather from her hands down into the stainless steel kitchen sink below, tinies who are somehow still alive clawing for resistance against the slick steel as the frothy tide swirls into the pit of the drain.
Maybe that's just the fate some tinies on the marble countertop met after being swatted during dinner prep. Or possibly they've been jettisoned out and down onto the hands of a goddess after a successful handjob within the expulsion of a climax, their reward for surviving the churning innards of a giant cock a meeting with the master bathroom vanity sink where they're sent on a one-way ticket to sudsy oblivion as they witness the almighty plastic pump spurt mountains of liquid antibacterial Hell onto them before they're lathered, scalded chemically and rinsed into the drain satisfyingly by a giant domestic goddess.
Hopefully any of the above serves as possible inspiration for part of a future chapter. Your writing has certainly inspired my vivid enjoyment of macrophilia, and I thank you endlessly for the greater perspective of the world around us. It's a beautiful and cruel world!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to make an account and leave a review! Thank you for the well wishes.
Detail is something I pride myself in, I rack my brain trying to think of ways to describe a scene and it honestly drives me crazy if I can't get it right, so thank you and to all of those who appreciate the fine details I try to convey.
I like to give people just enough of their own imagination and implications so that they can craft their own ideas of what happened to, like with flushing micros down the toilet, imagine how terrifying that would be for them.
Oh yeah, Isabella in Grove View. I think I could explore some hand exploration in a future chapter, especially with the nano characters of Ostrov, one of Kristen's wrinkles would be like a grand canyon to them, could be fun to write.
Date: January 08 2025 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Facades Part 1
I hope you're better now from your accident and I'm glad you're back in the story, I loved the chapter I finally know why there were so few Ginny followers and when Kristen finds out she could punish all of Crest. I didn't think there would be survivors from Climax City although their existence was brilliantly resolved. I hope there are more stories about those who are wandering around the other cities. I loved Rasha's triumphant return. She will surely contribute a lot to the story, although I don't know how you'll do it. Hehe.
On the other hand, I wanted to know if you're going to cover stories about the children in the cities about what they think or the difficulties they live in the situation they're in, or how their parents explain to them when they ask them why she's huge or if she hates them or something like that. Will there also be a "Goddess Day" or ceremony to commemorate the day they communicated with her or does it only celebrate the city of Crest? but these are just questions you're the writer and your story is excellent as is.
Author's Response:
Still going to be a very long time of recovery unfortunately but thank you. Yeah, I was waiting for the Ginny followers thing for a while, we will see how if at all Kristen finds out, could be exciting. I would love to explore some more random stories in another upcoming interlude. I try not to write about children victims, it def makes it harder to do so and I don't want to be flagged for anything. I think it would be cool to explore how a parent handles it, we'll see.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2024 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Facades Part 1
First of all, I just want to say that I'm sorry about your accident. Life comes at you fast, and things can just happen like that without warning. On the bright side, at least it isn't as bad as what it could have been (whatever happened). I don't know how bad things are for you, but the fact that you're alive is at least some step above what it could have otherwise been. I don't know what else to say but take care of yourself and please try to avoid further mishaps.
As for this chapter, there have been a lot of very interesting developments and twists.So I'm glad you are still able to keep writing in spite of what happened.
As for the toilet stuff, that was unexpected. I know you've said in the past you didn't like writing it and I understand that it is controversial for many people, and it is disgusting, but at the same time that's also what appeals about it (to some). What Kristen did to those captured fugitives aboard that plane inside her toilet was very gross, unladylike, degrading, and unpleasant... but it is also what they deserved for being would be (or in some cases actual) murderers, thieves, rapists, and the like. I'm sure not every single inhabitant of Climax was a criminal, but enough of them were to the point that Janelle's over the top actions in the previous chapter kinda makes some sort of sense and somewhat justified despite how extreme that it was. Yet, Janelle didn't finish off all of them, and some really bad apples escaped and were wreaking havoc (or trying to) to other various cities. So what better way of dealing with these bad apples than for Kristen to drop some of her own "bad apples" ontop of them? And again, that sort of content disgusts a lot of people, but that's entirely the point. Its supposed to be a punishment, right? Personally, I don't mind to see similar content again in future chapters when and where it might fit the narrative, depending on how things unfold.
Though as bad as that toilet stuff was, I think even that pales in comparison to the horrors Cameron discovered. It was unexpected, but I guess it shouldn't have surprised me given how crazy Anton and his cult are and have been throughout the story, but only know when their city is being explored at their own level do we finally see the sheer scope of the madness. Kristen does not see it though, and nor does Ginny (or any of the other giants). I'm curious how they would react if they do manage to find out. Snuffing out entire cities is shocking enough, but the giants are becoming accustomed to it, but this prolonged and systematic torture of "heretics" by Anton's cult is something else. Kristen might have a hard time accepting that, even though it is being done by a cult which worships her as a literal goddess. Obviously Ginny wouldn't be happy about it since the victims are those who worship her. I wonder if this sort of religious conflict among the micros might even cause some conflict between the giant women themselves as they vie for the worship of their respective followers. However, Kristen would be at a marked advantage since the cities are all within her house... Unless Ginny were somehow able to build up her own civilization of followers to rival them or something, but sadly the worshipers she transplants into her own home don't seem to last long enough for that to gain any traction, and even if they did it might take a really long time to grow them up there. That could be handled by the leap forward in time though, when that comes, but again it would require Ginny to be much more conservative in her handling of the tinies than she has so far been. :)
I liked the part where Kristen mused about turning Ostrov "into a shoe closet" and having them attend to her footwear in much the same way as Braithe has been doing. There's really no practical reason to put them to work cleaning her shoes, and as you wrote it would take them a ridiculously long amount of time to do it. The only reason for it is just the pure power trip of it. Ostrov being a large and powerful country on its former respective world just adds to that. Having a (former) Great Power relegated to your own personal shoe-shiners would be a massive ego boost for any woman.
That sort of thing is also a pretty good way of delivering the sort of content a lot of readers (myself included) would like to see, but without being TOO destructive to the poor nanos, who unfortunately suffer to a much larger scale whenever the giants do anything. But putting them to work servicing shoes (and/or other items) is a good way to humiliate and degrade them without being too overtly violent about it. I'm sure some would still die though, but also true with any sort of interaction. :) But at least the destruction wouldn't be TOO unmanageable this way.
Kristen might feel that she's been far too lenient and lax with Ostrov in comparison to her handling of the cities, so she might decide these "slackers" need to start doing more to pull their own weight, since they are living under her roof, after all. So far Kristen's friendship with Justyna has shielded them from a lot of what they might otherwise have to deal with, and that's great, but I wonder if even Justyna's friendship has its limits or if that might eventually wear out or even end at some point. Anything is possible, but you're the author so I don't know. :)
One thing from the previous chapter which I wonder about is when Kristen was brazen enough to do her yoga session naked in Ostrov's room and subjected the nanos (perhaps unwittingly) to her scent. Even Justyna herself got a good whiff of it. Up until that point she had only ever seen, and heard (and felt the vibrations caused by) Kristen, but now breathing in her scent connects her in a more I guess you could call it "intimate" sort of way with this woman whom many consider to be a Goddess. And I'm sure Justyna is a heterosexual woman, but the same was probably also true of Parker who now reveres Kristen as a goddess. Maybe that experience of breathing in Kristen's pheromones might trigger a not quite the same, but a similar sort of transformation with Justyna? One which might significantly alter the dynamics of the relationship between these two women. The old Justyna would never in a million years accept the enslavement and shoe closetization of her beloved homeland by Kristen; but after being "Parkerized" by the experience of breathing in Kristen's musky pheromones? Well, who knows. But either way, she (and the rest of Ostrov, thanks to Kristen's naked Yoga session) now know what their "goddess" smells like, and that connects them to her much more intimately now....perhaps.
Also, I want to add hearkening back to an older chapter where Ginny had some of her micro "volunteers" on her bicycle seat as she hovered her butt over them, it would be awesome if she did that same exact thing with a city from Ostrov or something. :) Once the giant women figure out some means to move the nanos around without just instantly destroying them, it would be great to have some nano "volunteers" on the seat of Ginny's workout bike. That might give Ginny a better motivation to not plop her butt down like she did with the micros in that chapter, because its not simply hundreds or thousands of lives at stake, but an entire city. Hopefully the motivation works and she doesn't plop her butt down, but even if they are spared this destruction they will nonetheless get intimately familiar with Ginny's exotic Asian pheromones (which are completely unknown on their world), much like how they did with Kristen's scent in the last chapter.
Oh and after a long hiatus, Rasha is now finally back. :) I see some comments hoping for destruction with her feet. I too am fine with that, but I hope it doesn't just immediately happen in a very contrived way. Especially since her first and so far only encounter with Ostrov has ALREADY snuffed out so many, plus what Janelle had just done in the last chapter. I think it would just be too much of the same if it jumps straight to that again. I'm glad she is back but I just hope things don't get too extreme in a hurry. Eventually? Sure but why not take some time with it? I dunno.
Oh, and here's one final thing to think about. I'm not sure what your plans with Rasha are, but I'd just like to quickly point out that Yoga (like what Kristen did naked over Ostrov) originates from her ancestral homeland. So maybe she could teach Kristen (and the nanos ;) a thing or two when it comes to that.
Anyway, I apologize for this long-winded review but I'm glad you're back. If you need to take another long break until the next chapter I'm sure everyone will understand given the circumstances, so do whatever you need to and make sure to take care of yourself first and foremost. Your work is appreciated, but your health needs to come first. Get well.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and yes, life comes fast, especially unpredictable events. I'll be recovering for a very long time still and traces of a normal life seem to dwindle.
I'm not the biggest fan of toilet stuff apart from maybe watersports, I just wanted to try to write something new and maybe to give the audience something different, I guess whether they liked it or not lol, but that kinda matches Kristen's character of doing whatever she thinks is just. Hypocritical of her given she has done sexual things and violent things without consent, but she is the goddess, right, so it fits the high and mighty mentality.
I've been waiting a long time to show Crest for what it really was and why Kristen doesn't really communicate with this character who has kinda just been there, he is wired and creepy and I think Kristen knows that but just doesnt care because she could just end him if she wanted to.
I have a lot of ideas for Rasha and all my characters going forward, I want to work toward a balance of having them all make sense for their roles, hopefully I can deliver, just need time. we shall see!
Kristen has been very relaxed with Ostrov compared to the cities, maybe on a bigger scale, but she has absolutely ravaged entire cities with simple pokes of her finger and things like that. They truly are so helpless, but I really am saving an Ostrov arc for later with maybe Maddy as an adult even so she can see the true power, so I don't want to waste their entire country just yet.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2024 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Facades Part 1
Intense! Another great chapter, and looking forward to how Rasha interacts with the micros, and especially the nanos. I can't tell how she would feel about all of this. Maybe she'll be more gentle in her interactions than the rest? I wonder how her toe ring will come into play
Author's Response: Intense is what I like, it would be nice to write more gentle here and there.
Date: December 12 2024 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Now we gotta see a POV of her putting an Ostrov city in her panties
Author's Response: That sounds like a pretty good idea...
[Report This]Date: December 11 2024 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
So sorry to hear about your accident - I hope that all goes well with your recovery.
This latest chapter was excellent! Hoping there will be a scene where a city or two have quite an encounter with Rasha's feet.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, the recovery is slow and I appreciate all of the well wishes.
Rasha will have more interactions with her feet and the tiny people, it is coming.
Date: December 10 2024 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
I hope they were not talking about Janell when they said, "fuck that big bitch." I can only imagine her temper and shes a cop. If she rampaged nothing would stand in her way. The micros and tinys need to understand shes the biggest threat they face. She could wipe them out and sleep like a baby. Maybe Kristen could make Janell incharge of day to day events. They would defiantly obey the police woman without question or hesitation. Or she would simply make a foot print out of their city or country, with her mid calf lace up combat boots for police women with steel toe.
I would not mind seeing Rasha putting some more footprints. I think she would feel extremely empowered. The survivor's of the millions that she killed will never forget her. They will forever call her the Great Destroyer. Many still sit on the edge of her footprint in reembrace.
Author's Response: I guess it could be implied they were also talking about Janelle, but I tried to imply it toward Kristen in that context. Janelle doesn't really have much of a temper in my opinion, I've tried to write her as a very calm, friendly, protective character but that doesn't mean she won't enjoy having power. We will see what happens.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2024 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Facades Part 1
I didn't know you had an accident. I hope everything will be fine for you. Although we don't know each other well, you bring me a lot of happiness with your different story i always enjoy reading. Take care of yourself, even if we have to wait a long time for your story.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was very unfortunate and still causes a lot of pain to this day. I am slowly getting better though. Thank you for the kind words, I enjoy making people happy with this sotry and I hope to continue with other stories and future chapters.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2024 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Facades Part 1
Welcome back! I'm happy you're recovering, nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's good to be back.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2024 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Facades Part 1
Omg you had an accident I pray for your recovery and wellbeing.
your Glorious return came in from the heavens themselves because this chapter was awesome !!!!!
the moment I saw toilet and gore in the tags I was super curious about what would happen and what I read was …chef’s kiss!! Perfect and to top it off the ass and gas scene was by far the favorite part besides the bathroom scene lol overall perfect!!!!
the Rasha part was interesting and the impact of the previous chapter was a good transition to what happened here and really shows how Kristen is handling running a little empire granted not perfectly lol but damn she makes it look easy sometimes.
the Parker, Anton and Carmon part was intense but super interesting and wow the conclusion of this part will be massive.
overall great chapter as always glad you are okay and recovering!
P.S - I know you did a ASS and gas scene which was fucking amazing and hope to see more of that later in the next parts and chapters but if you do a mouth scene with tinies in any of the girls mouth (probably Kristen ) and she lets out a burp on them inside her mouth or just burps on the tinies I’ll forever love you lol
again great stuff and work, prayers for your full recovery and good health and can’t wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had an accident a few months ago and have been in slow recovery. I have gone into more detail on Giantesscity about what the accident was.
And thank you for the kind rewards. Toilet is a rare tag that I do like to write, but honestly, I don't like to write much gas stuff because it isn't my thing so I don't know how much of it will be in the future except on rare occasions where it makes sense to add it, like this chapter.
I do like to write different things that I'm not used to, but I think it would be really cool to do a detailed mouth scene in the near future.
Date: October 31 2024 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Heating Up
I had started reading this story at the same time you published it in 2022, but since I use deviantart more than this page, my account was already starting to have cobwebs haha. The good thing is that I'm already up to date with the chapters, in fact I only remembered Kristen and her daughter so I love the amount of characters you added
Maybe I missed something but wasn't Kristen originally blonde in the photos you uploaded? Because now both versions - young and current - are brunettes, anyway for me that's better since I find dark/brown hair more attractive than blonde : )
You've already been told in other reviews how the giantess being "exotic" increases the excitement and I completely agree. It also gives good arguments to those who think of joining the rebels: we know from history how "foreign enemies" have served to unite different people under a common goal, it would not be the entirety of Ostrov since humans never act as a single block, I suppose that the rebels would see these people as "traitors".
And the logic of the "foreign enemy" also applies to Ginny, although in this case she is more playing than fighting a real war (she would finish them in seconds)
By the way, have you thought about doing a "what if" of this series in the future? For example, a global power from the world of Ostrov realized what happened and considers Kristen's universe as an existential threat so they decide to attack first: now they are the ones who have made cities/countries disappear.
I don't know if your audience would like it to be Kristen's nation that was stolen, we have become too fond of her (?) for her to end up as a microbe in an alternative history. It would be better to create a new character.
And do fetishes exist in the world Ostrov comes from? I suppose so, so by statistics perhaps there are people with our same fetish of giantess.
For them it would be doubly humiliating since they always imagined themselves as powerful people and now they must live a new reality being microscopic slaves of a "true giantess"
"frustrated giantess" are something uncommon in stories and it is a shame, since it adds complexity to the characters.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review! Yes, to answer your question, Kristen was blonde when she was younger, but her hair got darker as she ages and even dyes it a deep dark blonde in one of the latest chapters.
Yeah, I actually do have plans for a what if series after I'm done with this story but could be along way away. Glad you brought that up.
I haven't explored if a fetish would exist in their worlds prior, but it would be likely, I just haven't really thought about writing it that way.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2024 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
Get better soon, buddy! Take all the time you need to heal up and prioritize your health. We'll be here when you're ready, so no rush!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's getting better much now a few months later.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2024 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Above the Law
I wasn't expecting the scent aspects, but I was really impressed by how you pulled it off. I was happy to see how Kristen could interact with any Nano through her phone. It's crazy thinking about what possibilities there are now that Kristen and her friends can now see what the nano's can see and how that might affect the way they interact and experience. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes and I hope to explore this more in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2024 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
I hardly ever leave comments or reviews but I just gotta say I am absolutely loving the direction I feel this is heading. I adore forced tiny/giant relationships like the one being set up. It reminds me of one of my all time favorites 'Cities in the Cellar' which I don't even feel like was fleshed out as much as I'd like but was still amazing. Keep up the great work. This has quickly become my favorite ongoing story here. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to make the review and I encourage you to leave more! Thank you for the kind words. Cities in the Cellar was one of my favorite stories of all time and was one of the stories that motivated me to write myself. Thank you, and I hope you keep reading.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2024 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Above the Law
Yep, this was definitely a long chapter, and those are the best ones in my opinion! I understand its a lot of work but its definitely appreciated, not just by me but also from the other reviews I see. But don't feel like you need to hurry or anything. Just go at whatever pace works best for you.
I wanted to see in the Table of Contents just exactly how long this chapter was exactly in comparison to the others, because it shows a word count there, but for some reason this chapter is glitched out... at least for me. But yep I can tell it is very long.
So there's only about 20 or so cities in the micro room? Well, one less now thanks to Janelle's sweaty sock. :) Its good that Kristen and Ginny are starting to realize the tiny people are a finite resource and they can't be too destructive if they want to keep this going over the long term. That's the downside of bringing more people into the secret, because it means more destruction. And also not the greatest idea to give a new inductee cart blanche to do something destructive like that, because clearly some people will go overboard with it. I know the city wasn't being used for anything, but there's always some potential new use idea that could come up. Like, Kristen could use them in her experiments or something. I dunno.
Personality wise, Janelle kinda seems similar to Leslie in that over the top destructiveness. Part of me kinda hoped Leslie would return at some point, but I guess Janelle kinda feels that same sort of niche. Also, Leslie seemed more indifferent to them than anything. Janelle enjoys destroying them, but Leslie just did it to get them out of the way. Its not entirely the same thing.
Anyway, I guess Janelle kinda had a point about that city being crime-ridden and mostly no good. As a cop, I guess it gives her a good understanding of that sort of thing. I kinda want to say that she had the right sort of attitude for dealing with the rebels in Ostrov a few chapters back, but at her size it would have been massively overkill. Parker was able to handle it with much more finesse, so yeah.
As for the academy and the micros setting up a police force, I definitely think that Janelle being a cop herself should be involved in that. She could use her real world experience to give them advice and direct things. I dunno. Since Kristen and Ginny have their respective cities of dedicated worshipers, maybe the city with the police force could be the ones dedicated to Janelle or something? Kristen could have them answer to Janelle directly or something, and she could direct them on how to enforce law and order so that other cities don't end up like Climax did.
Another thing is that maybe she could take some of the Micro cops and use them herself in her own line of work or something? Micro cops could be useful in the big world to help solve big people crimes, and stuff like that. Janelle could send them in to eavesdrop or look for evidence or stuff like that in ways that a normal sized person wouldn't be able to or would need a warrant or something, but with their help Janelle could do things "off the books", so to speak.
Author's Response:
No beating around the bust with this long chapter indeed and yeah, it's a lot of work. Yeah there's a little over 20 cities, and I think Kristen is starting to understand how finite that rally is. We'll see how Kristen tries to adapt to that as she has gotten so used to using the tiny people to make herself feel better about herself and her life. Leslie could still pop in during a visit or something, there's still a lot of planned story left. Maybe they all don't get along, we'll see. Janelle having the point about the crime-ridden city is why it fit so well and I hope people will enjoy where that type of thinking and interaction goes, especially with the little police force.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2024 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Above the Law
Yeeeeeeeeeeesss Ass and odor chapter is what I have been waiting for let’s goooo!!!!! Didn’t expect Elliot and Kristen to be on a date can’t wait to see more interaction with them. Janelle was awesome in this chapter simply destroying a city and being calculated to which made it more interesting!!!
Ginny be herself was nice and now we have three goddess !!! Justyan was great too trying to calm and deal with Kristin deadly situations but stays strong and composed
overall 10/10 chapter - things I would personally like to see I’ll say now is probably vore and continue with the odor and smell stuff but I’ll leave to you and story wise I already want to see more of Elliot and maybe more Janelle so far again great chapter
Author's Response:
Hahaha yes, more of an odor chapter. Yeah, I didn't want to attach the emotion to Janelle in her decision, I wanted to set it up like her character would make sense given her past and ideologies with what she has seen in her life to do something like crush the least desirable city in the entire room and act like it was a favor. 10/10 chapter is a really nice compliment, thank you so much. I do want to add vore, I just need to make it make sense instead of forcing it, but I do have ideas in the coming chapters for some serious, crazy vore stuff.
Date: August 30 2024 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Above the Law
This is one of the most incredible chapters you've written, the interaction between the characters is fluid and credible regarding their motivations and personalities, honestly I expected Janelle to be a character that was introduced to balance the others of a gigantic nature since they are completely oriented to make both the micros and nanos suffer by unleashing their frustrations on them, she would be balanced, a voice of reason (I still think you should give her that more gentle and reasonable attribute with the people in the room) you run the risk that the motivations and personalities and their plots wear out, the male character Eliot, a great addition, will generate moral conflicts in Kristen, I hope for a more intimate and fluid interaction between them, some scene where she interacts with him on a video call in another place outside of the rooms so that she is sincere and explores her gentle side with him outside of the pressure and scrutiny that she is seen by both micros and nano people, the most with confidence to give herself courage by not interacting with her and getting scared of herself in a massive way, I hope you write That conversation, when Prince Anton finds out about Kristen's new favorite will be epic, consider the option that the little micros and nanos could interact with Janelle and Ginny in the same way as with Kristen through video calls and messages. The only bad thing I find is having to wait so long between chapters. Your story is incredible to read, it is very good.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for this review. I was hoping people would at least like the fluidity of characters and there wasn't too much going on. Everyone gets their tropes met and the dynamic characters have internal struggles and thoughts. As far as Janelle being the balance, no, I have other characters that will come later to be the balance and this voice of reason. There will be gentle characters to fill that absence when I feel the time is right. Elliot will be fun to write because he is internally so afraid. Yeah, I do want to give Anton a conversation. He's been going mad in the background while Kristen basically ignores him because she thinks he's too weird. I know my biggest complaint is the waiting period but I really hope each delivery is worth it while I go through my own life and problems.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2024 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Above the Law
One, if not the best chapter so far. and that's mean a lot considering how good is you're work.
Author's Response: And that compliment means a lot! Thank you so much for that, it's really kind. I did put a lot of effort into this chapter and trying to balance story and action.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2024 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom
This story is incredible so far! So much to say about it but one thing I'm hoping to see is a perspective from one of the tiny cities having to deal with Rasha's feet while she is unaware of who they are.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Rasha is gonna come back pretty soon here, the next chapter actually. I have few fun things planned for her! Thank you for the compliment!