Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2024 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Inclines

Another great chapter! I'm glad it came much quicker than the wait the last one took, but take however much time is necessary and convenient for you with your schedule.

I don't know how much this matters to anyone else, but I really do appreciate the lore and details about Ostrov which Justyna provided during the conversation. This sort of world building matters because it adds depth and makes Ostrov a real place with a real history and culture, which actually matters, instead of just some disposable colony of ants or something like that, which is typically the case when it comes to most stories of this kind (though there aren't many anyway). With these sorts of details, the country comes to life as a REAL place with a REAL history and full of REAL people. And now it is completely at the mercy of Kristen, Ginny, and whoever. It makes whatever they do MUCH more impactful, you know?

Loved the part where Kristen dumps the 17 micros into her ass, and they sought refuge in her anus but she likely killed them all with a fart. Haha! :) Really makes me wonder about the fate of poor Luka and the thousands of other nanos lost deep inside the vast cavern of Ginny's rectum, how long they might manage to hold out there, and what Ginny herself thinks about them being inside of her.

Good to see Rasha return to the story. Both she and Janelle are the only ones aside from Kristen and Ginny who have seen the tiny cities/country, but as far as they are aware its just some "art project" or something. That said, depending on what Rasha managed to see and hear during her eavesdropping through the fence, she might now be aware that there is something weird going on, even if she can't figure out precisely what. Will be interesting to see whatever conversation she has with Janelle on the topic of what they think is in those rooms, since its something they've both actually seen.

Realistically speaking, if something like this ever did really happen I'm not sure what Janelle actually could do in this situation, if she found out there were all these tiny people for real in Kristen's house and that many of them have been murdered by her. Would any government in our world recognize these tiny people as human and the laws applying to them? They're not citizens of any recognized country or even of this world. I don't know if there could be a basis for Janelle to arrest Kristen on any of this. Realistically, all the tiny people would probably end up in some Area 51 government research facility and not necessarily have any better fate than being left in Kristen's house where they were.

The line you wrote about Kristen thinking about the Academy recruits maybe maintaining security in Ostrov is interesting. Considering just how much destruction Parker alone was able to cause and how the rebels were unable to stop her despite hitting her with everything they've got, its probably massively overkill to have even more than just ONE micro in the nano room to crush uprisings... unless of course the nanos manage to get nuclear weapons or something.

That said, I think realistically speaking when the nanos hit Parker in the previous chapter with planes full of explosives and it almost killed her, I think it probably would have REALLY killed her. Because if the Micros are skyscraper-sized to the Nanos, and if even planes without explosives were enough to destroy the WTC on 9/11, then I think it should have been enough to have killed Parker. That's just my thoughts though.

Anyway, having a security team of Micros in the Nano room is a cool idea, but it also creates the potential for a LOT of havoc... but that's part of why its such a cool idea I guess. :)

But its going to make the poor Nanos even that much more unhappy, and they're going to feel like (and actually be) much more tyrannized than they previously were up to that point. It gives Kristen (and Ginny or whoever) a much greater ability to impose their will on the nanos and make them do whatever they want. Being so small meant that Kristen couldn't see what they were doing or not doing, so they kinda had a lot of freedom in that sense, but with these micro enforcers as her eyes and ears, those days of that freedom are probably numbered. :)

Of course, its going to probably make Justyna even more frustrated too. Assuming that these micro enforcers are subordinate to her and actually respect her authority like Parker (mostly) did then things might be kinda okay, but that's a very big IF. But even assuming that they do, Justyna knows full well that she's really just Kristen's puppet. She might be the prime minister and reside in a royal palace, but its just a gilded cage, and her conversation with Kristen in this chapter made that abundantly clear. I'm sure that would become even MORE true when there's these micro "helpers" watching over things and enforcing Kristen's will and so on. Even if they're nominally subordinate to Justyna, its clear their real mistress is Kristen, ultimately.

But adding a bunch of micros into the dynamic also adds the potential that their could be some infighting among them. They could team up with some remants of the nano rebels (not that the nano rebels really bring much to the table themselves) and do a bit of rebelling themselves? Who knows. :)

Oh! Here's a couple interesting ideas I just thought of for you to consider:

How about Kristen expands on her experiment idea a bit further by having a new additional city be founded in the Micro room, only this city is made up of a large group of Nano settlers from Ostrov? I think it could be a cool idea with much potential to have this new Nano city join the other cities in that room, with their own mayor and whatever, and then they could also become part of the politics that goes on with stuff in that room... only they're nanos and a thousand times smaller. :) Think about it, like... their tiny city which is the size of just a skyscraper of one of the micro cities (or something) but they get their own place and their own voice and get to vote or whatever goes on with stuff there. The micro security team could make they are safe from micros invading and doing destruction (hopefully). They could also participate with whatever activities Kristen decides to make the cities do, just in their own nano way. :)

I'm not sure if they should still be considered to be part of Ostrov despite them being in the Micro room and far away from the rest of Ostrov, or if they just get spun off into their own independent thing. In the former case they would still see Justyna as their Prime Minister with whatever (limited) authority she has); or in the later their mayor would be their main authority (below Kristen, of course).

Alternatively, the other idea is the same thing, but just reversed. Have a bunch of colonists from the Micro room migrate into the Nano room, and then have them found a new Micro city there. Hopefully (for the Nanos) this new city would be in some uninhabited or perhaps already destroyed part of Ostrov where it wouldn't be any harm to the people of Ostrov. Again, this idea would have some cool potential for various interactions, I think. It could also be the place where the Micro security teams reside when they're not doing their security team stuff, as well as their families, and whoever else would need or want to be there.

Again, this Micro city in the Nano room could either be its own quasi-independent thing (subordinate only to Kristen herself), or they might be considered new citizens of Ostrov, and then Justyna would then become their (nominal) leader. I think it would be a really cool idea and would love to see how that would play out. :)

Another way to look at it is these could kinda be like sort of embassies between the two rooms if it went both ways. The nano city would speak for Justyna in interactions with the Micros, and vice versa. They could do cultural exchanges, perhaps some trade deals between the rooms, who knows. :)

If you decide to do this it would be a great topic for discussion the next time Justyna and Kristen have a conversation. Justyna might propose the idea, since maybe she needs the micro assistance for rebuilding/security, or maybe Kristen decides its "how its going to be" and Justyna has no choice in the matter. Woul be interesting to see how she reacts to having this massive (in size at least, if not also in numbers) of migrants imposed on poor tiny Ostrov. But it wouldn't be SO bad if these migrants are made citizens of Ostrov and (at least nominally) subordinate to her. At least they already speak the same language (for some reason) but they might need to adjust to the different culture, or something.

Anyway, I think I've rambled on for far too long. Sorry about that. Whether you liked my ideas or not, I look forward to your next chapter! :)

Author's Response:

I do appreciate the fact that you like the little additions of lore and details with world building.  I'll try to incorporate maybe a little more of that here and there when it makes more sense to do so. 

Rasha and Janelle I think will have more roles to play in the further development of this story, I'm still trying to sort out what I really want to do with them and if it will make sense to me to where I am happy to write it.  Especially with Janelle, like you said, in real life this would be treated quite differently.

I don't want to think too far ahead with the nano and micro interactions, but I go through a lot of deleting and rewriting my thoughts and ideas on the future of that. 

Reviewer: MeGo99 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2024 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Inclines

Nice chapter I was waiting for it forever, could you please put more religion stuff about Kristen like temples and religious symbols, priest stuff like that maybe make her order micro to built some and teach it her religion at schools

Thank you for your amazing story.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, more religious stuff has been planned in my notes for a long time, it's coming also thank you!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2024 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Inclines

Omg yes this has to be top 10 best chapter it had heart, emotion, character development, story development, and best of all Kristen nice booty action at the pool lol also no worries about the wait dude we all have our free and busy schedules so no big deal overall this was a great chapter 

ps - I definitely enjoy the “gassy explosion lol I know it’s not your thing but I appreciate that addition and even though it might be a one time thing I am happy with that part lol *cough* hopefully *cough* there more *cough* oh boy something in my throat 

Anyway great chapter and can’t wait to see more of this and future stories 

Author's Response:

Thank you, I love that you appreciate all the emotion and development.  The booty action being a big bonus, literally.  Thank you for your patience as well. 

The gassy explosion was a last minute addition, almost didn't put it in lol.  Could be a multi-time thing, we'll see. 

Reviewer: DragonSnu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2024 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

Love the chapter, can’t wait for the next one! I hope we can see more micros or nanos interacting with the giant environment around them. As an example I keep thinking of micros/nanos getting scattered inside of a purse. Seeing a massive driver’s license and realizing that the pic that towers over them is so, so much smaller than the person holding this purse. Might try writing something myself for that but feel free to let it inspire you too. I’m curious about your longer term plans, like how soon many of these side characters will interact with the micros/nanos? I really love them already! Will any of them get in a relationship? 

Author's Response: More micros and nanos interacting with the giant environment around them is something I do plan on writing, but I want it to make sense with the context of the scene, I will work on it.  Some of these side characters will have big parts to play, so I know it's coming.  As far as relationships, if I can make it work and it feels real then I will keep trying to do so, like Justyna and Niko.

Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2024 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

It's been so long since I have been active but I finished reading this and really enjoyed it!

I didn't realize that Kristen's city collection had cities of different sizes (Nano and Micro) until reading this chapter. Great job of really showing the different levels of insignificance through the perspectives of both Parker when she pissed all into the lake and flooded the nano village and then Kristen hovering her toe over Parker.    

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.  Haha yeah, we got two different sizes!  Apprecaite the kind words about my descriptions.  Yeah, the flooded nano village was really fun to write.  Hope you continue to enjoy. 

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

Finally some interactions between Micros and Nanos! Great! Hopefully this is just the beginning and wasn't just a one-off. :)

I loved the part where Parker threatened to shit on the Prime Minister. I know this is a controversial opinion, but I wouldn't have minded if she actually did follow through on that threat. It would have been very funny at the very least. Also would have been a good way to have eliminated one of the rebel strongholds.

The devastation she caused by pissing in that dried up lake-bed and it overflowing was a very degrading way to go for all those who died from that though. Too bad they were innocent though, that also could have been a humiliating way to take out one of the rebel bases. Just simply crushing them is one thing, but pissing/shitting on them just degrades them even further and it sends a sort of message. It serves as a reminder to any future would-be rebels to reconsider their resistance, I guess.

That said, one thing that really gets me is how dried up the landscape is. I guess it makes sense because Ostrov hasn't seen rain in literally years, but its not something that's ever been touched upon before in any story I'm familiar with. It never comes up as an issue because in the rare cases where a story does feature a shrunken country or whatever, it doesn't tend to last very long, or the story ends before it goes into the point where the land dries up and dies like a desert like this. Its kinda sad tbh, but I guess its the realistic outcome.

The destruction of the town aside, Parker pissing on the land couldn't have done more harm to it than how it already was in that desertified condition. But despite the trees and stuff being dead, I imagine there's a lot of seeds and stuff laying around just waiting for rain to come, so Parker pissing on there might have brought some green back to the land, at least temporarily. So she may have actually helped the land in that sense. You could revisit this in a future chapter, about how Parker brought like back to the land where she pissed, or something. If they start to view her as some sort of goddess (albeit a lesser one than Kristen, obviously) then it could tie in with that, and this land might be considered some sort of holy ground, or something. I dunno.

I kinda wonder a little bit about the Flora and Fauna of Ostrov and if its just like that on our world, or if its exotic to ours or something. But even if its the same, it seems to me like they might want to preserve it as much as they can despite this drought causing everything to die off. I wonder if they couldn't find some way to extract the humidity from the air in the room they're in and somehow use that for irrigation or something?

I know that when they asked for Kristen's help with the water, it turned out to be a huge disaster. But I think now that you have micro-nano interaction happening, its something that maybe micros like Parker could help them out with? They're still huge af and can easily cause some accidental destruction, but obviously far less than Kristen, so maybe they could help with distribution of water (and food) across Ostrov? Like Kristen, could place it somewhere in the center of the room and then the Micros could help spread it around. I don't know how it works where the nanos were doing it by themselves, but obviously with micros helping them things would be much easier.

And just like how Micros like Parker can destroy Nano cities, they could also help out with the rebuilding too. Like that city which Kristen squished with her toe at the end of the chapter. It seems like an entire nano city is roughly equal in size and materials to a Micro skyscraper, or something like that. So Micros could help the Nanos rebuild that city pretty easily. They could also rebuild the cities to be much more durable too. As it is, Kristen or Ginny can pluck up a Micro skyscraper, train, plane, or whatever and interact with it like Kristen did with Parker chapters back. But the Nano cities are much more fragile and just crumble to dust with the slightest touch. But with Micros helping to rebuild these nano cities, they could be at least as durable ad the Micros' own stuff, and that way if Kristen or Ginny wanted to, they could then pluck up an entire nano city just like they could with a Micro skyscraper, to do whatever fun stuff they'd like with it. :)

The Nanos built their cities to be sprawling, but with Micros rebuilding them in a way similar to their skyscrapers, the newly rebuilt Nano cities could be much more vertical. They could even be hybrid things where its half-nano city but also half micro-skyscraper combined into one thing, and nanos and micros could co-habitate or something. I dunno, but there's certainly a lot of potential there.

I think pretty much ANYTHING that both Micros and Nanos build from the time they ended up in Kristen's rooms is probably built much more durably than how it was built on their own worlds, because now it HAS to be. No one in normal circumstances builds something around the idea that some miles-tall giant could decide to pluck it up from the ground on a whim, or that there'd be violent tremors caused by that giant moving around. But this is the reality these tiny people now face. The Nanos are at a disadvantage though, because they're much smaller and its harder for them to build stuff to a "pluckable" standard of durability, but with the help of the Micros, they could. :)

Author's Response:

Hello Nation.  I'm pretty sure I have some future ideas of how the nanos and micros can interact in the future as I don't want it to be a one off either, but I really have to think about how I want it to line up with the story. 

I wanted Parker to know how careless she had been while be so oblivious to her own power she had over the nanos, then really show her how insignificant she was in the shadow of Kristen.

Micro nano action could be symbiotic or predatory, I guess we will have to see.  

Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

No matter what kind of content you create it always promises to be interesting. ;)
I always keep a look out for your name to pop up for that reason.

First, woowoo! Redhead giantess! Go Parker!

With that out the way, phenomenal storytelling as per usual. Descriptions, imagery, everything, as good as it's always been. Keep up the good work! ;P

I'm quite interested to see how this experiment of Kristen's progresses. I'm also very interested to see what becomes of Justyna. Poor girl's been through some really tough times as of late. All in all, great chapter, looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I at least try to go for interesting at the bare minimum. 

Go Parker indeed, I hope to establish her as a recurring character in some capacity that fits the drama, maybe in the nano room again, I don't know quite yet.  Thank you so much for the compliments.  We'll see how the experiments go and how Justyna reacts to everything. 

Reviewer: MeGo99 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2024 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Periwinkle

Thank you for this amazing chapter, please don't delay on us lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, I try not to!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Interlude III

I love this story so much good job can't wait to read the next chapter with i hope some stinky foot interaction

Author's Response:

Thank you!  There will be some smells later on, I promise!

Reviewer: Tuin Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2024 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

Eager to see Madelyn join the fray.

Wondering how she will react to the tinies or nanos even.

Author's Response:

This is still a ways away form happening as I don't write underage content.