Date: July 25 2022 6:28 PM Title: Lost and found
I recently came across and read your story and I really like the beginning. But how about if Andrew and Kiyo really get together and fall in love with each other so much that Andrew can't live without Kiyo anymore and Kiyo can't live without her little sweet Andrew and they become inseparable lovers together forever. And Kiyo is dying to make Andrew her little husband forever. And both Andrew's mother and Kiyo's parents don't mind if they get together forever and Kiyo's parents love little Andrew as much as Kiyo loves him but Kiyo loves him far more. This is just a suggestion of how your beautiful story could continue and I'm already looking forward to the next chapters that could possibly be like this.
Date: June 13 2022 5:50 PM Title: A nice quiet holiday
A very interesting story. Please continue.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2022 2:57 AM Title: A nice quiet holiday
Interesting story so far. A nurturing mother and her tiny son, torn apart by a gust of wind; and the son now, for the first time, in the world on his own.
You did a nice set up of both the pregnancy and their doctor covering up his "genetic" tiny size.
Where this goes? How this goes? All possibilities abound.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was very nervous when I wrote and posted this. I had the impression that I had lost my ability to write. And I have barely any experience with writing this kind of stories. It's all been just in my mind so far.
I like to put some detail into my writing, that's why I weaved in this little background story. Let's see how it goes. New chapter out now.