[Report This]Date: October 27 2025 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 24. The Eparchy down South.
“...Oh? Leon, honey! Just what are you doing here?” Ana had realised just where he was the moment he had landed. However she chose to play pretend so that she could feel him squirm. His acts of defiance would be met with complete dominance and control. Just as she suspected. It was these constant reminders that giantesses would often do on their tiny counterparts to remind them of the dynamic the two shared. Not of course to be mistaken for cruelty or otherwise, it was an act of love. It was how Ana had always shown her love for her itty bitty partner.
‘I wish I could just keep you in there forever. Away from all the danger in the world, and next to my heart where you’d be lulled to sleep each day and night. Tucked away in warmth where the colder Ranate winds wouldn’t get to you in the winters, and exposed out to see the world from my height. Ah, that’d be the life…’ A slight show of disappointment was worn on Ana’s face, she had to send Leon away on this mission as no giantess would dare head towards the Eparchy. Otherwise, she would keep him nestled in her bosom. His one true home and place of belonging."
Alright, that’s it, brother! I need to be isekai’d into this world after reading this — Leon’s life is the golden goose. Also, Lez is a straight-up pervert, illegally trafficking a man over the border inside her, and she wants a harem of men. My word. I don’t blame her — I’d have a harem of giantesses too. They’d probably end up squishing me one day, but oh well. I’d add Sarah — she’s sweet. I wonder how she’s doing in Lelorum?
Aside the rant, keep it up — you’re doing very well with the worldbuilding. Can’t wait for Ruby the Insane to get taken down.
Author's Response:
Woah thanks for the review!
The world does have its perks but also its horrific atrocities. It’s a mix of both lol.
More details will be revealed I suppose in the future.
Date: October 27 2025 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 24. The Eparchy down South.
Great chapter, I like the story progression.
Curious to know how the Marvialasia plot will go down. Lez says she will handle Ruby, wonder what she will do.
Also wouldn’t Ana be a bit more upset that Lez excuted a lot of people. It seems that a good chunk were killed just because they disagree with the rules and not planning a revolution.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2025 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 24. The Eparchy down South.
This chapter was amazing and the story progression was phenomenal and that last section was both shocking and interesting
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: June 15 2025 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 22. A New Crusade
Kinda surprised we really haven’t gotten any saucy fun with Ana and Leon yet. They need to “consummate” their marriage after all. And Anna seems the type to enjoy anal sex…..
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah. To be honest I’m saving it for a future chapter at some point. Whether what kind of content exactly I’m not sure, but it’ll happen.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2025 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 22. A New Crusade
Nice work, man. I'm finally glad you got to the empires. Look how shady they're being as expected of empires. And yeah, I remember the sister from the other storyline, kinda gross? She's carrying that many soldiers on her, though.
Really interested in the geopolitics and Realpolitik. And how relations with countries can switch on a dime. I'm an Empire newer Kingdom/Queendom. And now you're an Empire, and you're my borders tsk, ask, tsk now your hostile.
Author's Response:
Yeah it took a while but we’re on a new era for this story. Ana’s sister has also been introduced here formally, so she’ll be a character as well now. Allows me to focus on less romance heavy fetish stuff in the future too.
Geopolitics and political relationships between the different lands is very iffy. I wanted to show how if one country increases their power, it can have tremendous impact to the nearby countries. So far, this is just a baseline of what these countries may be about but they’ve been slightly mentioned in the past too. This arc still has a lot of different directions it can head in, but I’ve got a general plan of things I’d like to do. Hopefully I can satiate the curiosity for the geopolitical situation in the story there too haha.
Thans for the review!
[Report This]Date: April 02 2025 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
Enjoying your story so far! If I may suggest a scenario for some point in this story, maybe we can have an incident where Leon accidentally gets eaten unnoticed and has to go through the giantess’ body to get out. Can be his wife or someone else.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! A more in depth vore scene can happen later on, however I'd have to come up with an in universe explanation first haha.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2025 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 21. New Beginnings
This chapter was great maintain the string character development that has been a highlight throughout the series and interactions felt super natural and emotional
the pacing was kinda quick but overall was really good great job and can’t wait for the next arc
[Report This]Date: December 22 2024 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
Did Lez just up and suck a dude up her ass like a vacuum cleaner? And its a prison, well technically it is he can’t escape. Hey maybe he'll see that other guy coming out from her stomach.
My word. I think being crushed is better. Rather than being devoured and decomposing someone's belly. That's even worse. That's the worst one out of the three. When this eventually gets out this isn’t going to end well.
But its still pretty good, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Yeah, the fates of everyone here is in a rough spot. Well everyone except for Ruby.
For now, the plot point seeds have been planted. We’ll have to see where it goes from here.
Date: December 21 2024 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
Wow, the irony here is that everything Lez is being forced to do would be reprehensible to Queen Ana. I am sure that Ana would put a stop to it, and probably replace Ruby with someone else herself. Too bad Lez doesn't know Ana better. You would think Ana would have chosen someone in such an important role to be someone she knew better.
Author's Response:
Absolutely that Ana wouldn’t be pleased to hear about this. We’ll have to see how it goes in universe though as the chapters progress. The Marvialasian plot line will be less of a focus and more of a background thing I reckon going forward.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2024 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
I am super happy for the AV. Thank you.
Author's Response:
It was due time for new fetish content anyway, so yeah glad you enjoyed
[Report This]Date: December 20 2024 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
Great chapter and insight into Lez and her semi new life in Marv and its people and the aftermath of the war. The new characters were great and the smut scenes were great too!
overall great work
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: July 19 2024 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 18. The Failed Port
Wow that was actually kinda sad. Its seeming to me racial segregation might be needed to avoid such horrific deaths for humans whether friend or kin which will naturally vendettas against giants like Sarah. Who appears to be a great woman but that is immediately overshadowed when her being is a threat to your existence.
Yikes.
Author's Response:
It’s a sad sight to see for the town. Without proper planning or aid given in terms of infrastructure and rules, this is the picture of what a town ran by giantesses without regard for humans may look like. In this case, it doesn’t matter how nice Sarah is, her existence is a threat to the humans simply due to her overwhelming size and power.
As such, welcoming more humans to here would be a disaster in the current state. At least that’s what I wanted to convey. Egulba is better with infrastructure for humans but it’s still somewhat problematic. So, a mixed size society and the problems it faces is really the issues Ana has to try to solve in her reign.
Date: June 04 2024 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 17. Without and With Love.
Very nice! How abut maybe anal vore in a future chapter?
Author's Response:
Perhaps in a future chapter. It’d depend on where the story goes and who would be involved. Though some new tags are definitely in order, so yeah good to consider.
Regardless, thanks for the review!
Date: May 24 2024 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 16. End of an Era.
So I guess the one big question I have is why did Ana give the prince to Lisa? Isn't that really a kind of reward for Lisa? I thought Lisa was being punished, and now she gets her own boy toy?
To me it would have made more sense to give him to the giantess who had been captured under his rule for a long time.
Author's Response:
Really? Personally I’d disagree there to some extent. Giving the Prince to the tormented giantess as if to fuel some sort of revenge lust isn’t really what the story was going for from my perspective. If that was the case it’d have to beg the question of why Lisa is being punished at all then. She’d simply be savouring her revenge against the Marvialasians in that framework. Hence, for me personally it didn’t really make sense to have the captured giantess get the prince. (Also more importantly, said captured giantess would have more important things to he doing at present anyway.)
As for a more in universe reason. Simply put, the prince needs to be punished. Lisa is someone under house arrest and other restrictions, making her and the Prince easy to monitor. And easy assurance that he is actually going to get punished. As for it being a reward for Lisa, you could momentarily call it that. Personally I view it more like the more like the Prince joining in on her sentence. Lisa’s punishments extend more so towards her position of power and her reputation which both have been stripped away from her. As well as removing innocent humans away from her grasp. All of which has happened, leaving people like the Prince left to her whims. In a sense you could say she got off easily, which I believe Ana also states within the chapter. It’s true, she does. All because she stems from a position of power.
Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2024 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 16. End of an Era.
Yet another fine chapter and end of the Marvialasia Arc. Hope to learn about this Josh the Giant Slayer, man sounds like a formidable beast. I immediately think of a spellcasting Guts for some reason.
And since its an empire now, I suppose we can call it the "Federal Empire of Ranate" because Marvialasia is able to be autonomous to a degree. I'm sure the other empires will be happy that another empire has formed. Totally no Great War will happen, naaaaaw.
And the Lisa-Marco duo, you bastard, didn’t think of that one. Won’t they have fun? Well Lisa sure will~
But i'm up to seeing how that goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Yeah, there’ll be some conflict coming up with how the new political climate will be shaping up with a new empire being formed. More on that in the future though as I’d like to take some more time on exploring Leon and Ana, as well as various other characters and settings. Things I think would be important to talk about before moving on to the next arc.
Which yes, that involves Lisa-Marco. Wonder what they’ll get up to… or what Lisa will get up to.
Thanks again for the review. Appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: April 07 2024 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
I like It
Author's Response:
Happy to hear!
Date: April 06 2024 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
So I looked at your self analysis of part IV and I have to agree that Josh needed more work. What I would have liked to see was Josh thinking about his training as he became helpless after the weapon hit him. It would have been nice to know more about the why's and details of how Josh came to be. As it was, he was just kind of out there from left field.
Personally I would have liked to have seen a more direct punishment for the prince, maybe have the captured giantess released and let her do what she wants to him for her own retribution.
I did find one grammatical error
The past tense of cast, is also just cast, not casted.
jiggled as it casted / jiggled as it cast
Author's Response:
Josh is more or less a small tease for the future. I didn’t want to reveal anything too big about him or his organisation just yet. Before I started this batch of chapters, I didn’t want to even include him in the story but I decided it would be better to have a tease about this organisation. That there is a force out there that currently is way stronger than the giantesses.
As for the Prince, his punishment and what it will be is going to be revealed in the next chapter. I’ve already planned it out somewhat (I’ve had it planned for a little bit actually.) So look forward for that.
I’ll try to sort out the few grammatical errors when I get the time. Thanks for letting me know about them.
Date: April 01 2024 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 14. An Avoidable Conflict III
Part III was very interesting. Liked it!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it. Hopefully you’ll like the last part of this series of chapters dedicated to the conflict as well!
Date: March 25 2024 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
What an incredible story! Thank you so much for sharing it. Your narrative has undoubtedly left a profound mark on my writing journey.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Glad to hear you’ve liked the story so far!
Date: March 24 2024 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 13. An Avoidable Conflict II
So yeah, I did like this chapter a bit more. Even seeing Ana and Leon at the beginning of the chapter helped a bit. Maybe the other squad just put me off more.
Author's Response:
By other squad I’m assuming you mean platoon 3? If so, yeah. That’s fair enough. They’re made to be more rebellious and less prone to Ana’s ideology and way of thinking. More so representing the already present ideology of Ranate's culture that existed before. This chapter didn’t feature them, and Instead depicted platoon 1 and 2, which lack characters that are overly cruel. It’s understandable in disliking the platoon 3 members in that way. Though I will say, the next chapter will feature them heavily.
Also, glad to hear you liked the Ana and Leon scene at the start. After these batch of chapters we should go back to the two! So that’ll hopefully be exciting.
Author's Response:
By other squad I’m assuming you mean platoon 3? If so, yeah. That’s fair enough. They’re made to be more rebellious and less prone to Ana’s ideology and way of thinking. More so representing the already present ideology of Ranate's culture that existed before. This chapter didn’t feature them, and Instead depicted platoon 1 and 2, which lack characters that are overly cruel. It’s understandable in disliking the platoon 3 members in that way. Though I will say, the next chapter will feature them heavily.
Also, glad to hear you liked the Ana and Leon scene at the start. After these batch of chapters we should go back to the two! So that’ll hopefully be exciting.