[Report This]Date: February 08 2026 12:29 AM Title: Conducive
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon
Date: December 31 2022 11:42 PM Title: Conducive
Thanks kindly for the thoughtful analysis. I'm glad you enjoyed the flow of the text. I read the stories aloud to hopefully catch overuse or repetition of words. I'm also fond of tossing in a fancy bit of vocab here and there, something I'll be ragging on in a tale coming out later this year. :)
[Report This]Date: December 30 2022 8:34 AM Title: Conducive
Amazing. This is absolutely spectacular. The description is vivid and paints a disgustingly accurate picture.
The male protagonist who wants the destruction of the city also ends up paying heavily for his wishes. It’s a nice element that makes this story distinct and unique. The extra sense of suffering from his perspective, and how we the audience may even feel like he deserves it allows us to find this story to be sensual.
The vocabulary is extraordinary too, full of a plethora of words that avoid repetition, that would have otherwise drawn the reader out. It’s incredible.
Of course this is a one shot story, so the narrative is fairly standard, but the little elements of what’s there help it immensely stand out. It’s a great read overall, I have no complaints with this property.