[Report This]Date: October 31 2024 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 9 - using them for her own pleasure
Good story, but a little difficult to read.
Note: you are allowed to have more than one sentence to each paragraph.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback.
Apologies, the reason for that is the formatting difference from word document font size 10 or 11 and transferring to this website which has small text. It makes sense on word or pdf. If you check out my site you will see the difference as all my stories are formatted and in pdf.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2024 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! I love how she got them both to have sex with each other in front of her and then she picked them up and inserted both of them!
I vote A, B and D.
I would love to see her shrinking them to different sizes and doing different stuff to each of them, really rub it in their faces and dominating them, showing them that they've got absolutely no hopeAuthor's Response:
Hey, thanks for your feedback, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the vote. I think you will be pleasantly surprised because it was my plan to have them shrunken down to different sizes! Oh don't worry, Ferne is definitely the vindictive type, she will definitely make them feel like they've got no hope!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2024 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
A please
Author's Response:
thanks for the vote!
[Report This]Date: June 07 2023 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, can't wait to see what happens next. It's got micro on the description of the story, are you going to add in some micro as well as small sized 3/6inch content?
I get the feeling that Holly is going to be disappointed when she finds out what has happened to Tom and Mary.... :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and feedback. Glad you liked this. I'm posting more of it on my Patreon, I've finished the story now, it does include micro size and shrunken person worn as jewellery etc. Yes, there is also 3 inch content as well.