[Report This]Date: September 05 2023 2:36 AM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit
This is a cute little story, I like the premise and the whole secret tiny aspect brings another level of intimacy to the whole thing. Afterlife as a sprite doesn't sound too terrible if you ask me!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm a sucker for hiding tinies in clothes, and it certainly adds a fun wrinkle to the story. Hopefully the actual afterlife can be so nice!
[Report This]Date: September 05 2023 1:53 AM Title: Ch 1. Requiem
I missed that you uploaded multiple chapters, so I deleted my initial review and am reframing it.
You started us off with a cliffhanger chapter. How delightfully cruel of you.
Congrats on another strong start. You've got me hooked, and I'll be continuing this when I can eke out some more "free" time.
The premise is interesting. I'm definitely getting "The Good Place" vibes, which I count as a good thing. I'm curious to see how Renton's new size impacts the story. I tend to find that below 4-6 inches, a tiny's direct influence on the outcome of a story quickly dwindles as their lack of size translates to a lack of agency. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how our deserving returnee gets along with his titanic saint of a wife.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Sorry my slow upload speed got the best of you lol
I tend to fear starting a story with a cliffhanger because I don't want my audience to think I'm pulling a fast one on them, but I don't mind it so much when the next chapter's already up.
I've only seen the first episode of "The Good Place" a couple years ago, but I even that little bit definitely had its influence on this story. The afterlife is something that will forever intrigue me as I feel it sort represents our ideals as people, like what is paradise to us and how would we want to spend eternity. For a size fetishist, shrunken with a bunch of hot giant angels is probably pretty paradisaical.