[Report This]Date: May 06 2025 5:52 AM Title: Rachael vs Army pt1
Wow that chapter was amazing dude and glade you back at it and dang this chapter was loooooooong …… I love it
just to be clear non of the soldiers were “permanently harmed” in the game right lol
now I’m a simple man and I don’t asked for much just give a me a booty or ass scene and I’m perfectly fine hahah
you could also have were Rachel has the soldiers in her belly as a sorta fun cage for the game for being caught ( kinda like cops and robbers) but of course that don’t get digested honestly it could be water in her stomach and it’s like a indoor water park lol
overall great job and can’t wait to see part 2
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!. And correct, none of the soldiers were "permanently harmed" during the game. Exposure to Rachael's fluids and intimate places sends mortals into a pleasure frenzy and any mortal that dies in her presence goes straight to (her) heaven. Where they get surrounded by very excited giant angels. For the booty scenes, I got you bro ;) look forward to more fun coming up. Also, thanks for the suggestions. We'll actually be seeing Rachael stomach play in a future chapter and there will be quite the twist :)
[Report This]Date: February 20 2025 5:54 AM Title: Rachael's Faithful
Sorry for the late review. I enjoyed this chapter, but I was very surprised at how the nuns were treating people. Rachel seems so kind and loving, and so does Jacob. So to see the nuns torturing people just wasn't what I was expecting. The ability for nuns to shrink people too was quite surprising.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
The nuns' actions can be a bit jarring given the image their cult presents but they are a bunch of zealous perverts who are very obsessed with their goddess. So outsiders coming in with bad intentions towards that goddess can trigger their "dark" side, or at least the perverted side without the restraint. The ability for nuns to shrink people comes from the "Holy Powder" made from Rachael's holy milk, ie. powdered milk, but the higher ranks do have some abilities of their own, which we may see more of later. As for Jacob being kind, oh boy, just wait and see. He's just as much a pervert as the rest but I haven't quite given him the spotlight just yet. :)
[Report This]Date: February 11 2025 2:11 PM Title: Rachael's Faithful
Wow that was so good!!!!!! Loved everything about it from the Nuns and there missions and Lin and the volleyball game.
a very solid series and this new chapter just made it even better.
I’m interested in seeing how this battle will play out and what Rachel will do.
i think it would be hella interesting to add like a sorta lex luthor to the series as a kinda rival to the goddess and her angles/nuns - like a brilliant man or women plans to ruin the goddess are foiled at every turn by the goddess ( basically Superman) but also has a new idea or plan or invention to destroy the goddess using their brains rather than their muscles
I think something like that would make for an interesting dynamic but overall great job
[Report This]Date: January 29 2025 11:19 PM Title: Rachael goes to the Beach
Really good so far! I like the afterlife you developed, and I would enjoy seeing more of the couple and Mariel.
Can Rachael shrink to human size? Traveling among the humans in disguise might be a way for her to learn more about them. Her confusion about the inferiority of human bodies is a great element.
I also want to see more of her using her goddess powers to change people! Growing women, improving physiques, etc.
How did Rachael and Jacob meet? And why hasn’t he been more direct with her about the impact of her actions?
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it! The couple and Mariel might return in future chapters as cameos. The whole "human couple lives with a very affectionate angel" plot has potential.
For Rachael's size, 500 feet is the smallest she can do plus she's surrounded by perverted cultists who are her primary 'teachers' on humans so her understanding of humans is a bit skewed. Using her goddess power to mess with humans' bodies is something I have in the pipeline. It was touched upon in a earlier chapter when she was granting requests to her followers but we will be seeing more of it coming up.
And as for Rachael and Jacob's backstory, he was one of her many lovers across the ages but actually had a serious conversation with her about relationships and things went from there. Might devote a chapter to expanding on that.
When it comes to Rachael's actions in human world and their impact, Jacob is part of the Goddess Cult, the zealous perverts who love Rachael, and he certainly enjoys his giant wife doing giant things in human cities. The only reason he stepped up that one time was because the scale of destruction was massive and one other reason we'll be seeing in a future chapter. Stay tuned!
Date: January 21 2025 6:41 AM Title: Rachael goes to the Beach
It's so good to see you writing again. I really enjoyed this chapter. Rachel is slowly becoming more aware of humans, and I like that growth in her character. I also like that she has a husband to end-of-day with him, talking about her adventures.
I really liked this chapter.
I would like to get in touch with you on discord if you use it. I tried to send you a message via contact but I don't know if that is working or not.
If you could, please leave me a review of chapter 21 of my story. It is my personal favorite so far because It Was Me and I worked on the "Tom & Sunniva" segment together.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2025 3:16 AM Title: Rachael goes to the Beach
First off hell yeah to beach chapter!!!! Was absolutely amazing and it’s great seeing Rachel being carful not to hurt people in her travels personally I love seeing giant characters learning and growing from ….lets say errors lol but absolutely love this chapter
now I’m honestly curious to see if Rachel tries to get into sports now ….like say football, baseball, and so on after seeing the volleyball game plus makes her seeing a whole stadium full of people will probably get her horney lol bet she would get a whole team named after her lol
another idea would be maybe her going to the movies seeing the unlimited imagination of humanity in film making
now smut wise I can’t lie and say I don’t want to see more butt action, and possibly soft vore but that’s what I personally would like to see.
overall great job and can’t wait to see more
Author's Response:
Thank you! And yeah, it's nice seeing characters learn from their...experiences. In Rachael's case, while she never intends any harm, she is very big and not quite aware of her surroundings. it's easier in a wide open area like a beach but in a city with narrow streets and packed buildings, well...
And thanks for the suggestions! They're all good ideas. Rachael wanting to try sports and playing with humans or getting ideas from human movies, well that can lead to all kinds of shenanigans. And as for the smut, well, just wait and see :)
[Report This]Date: January 09 2025 1:17 AM Title: Rachael Returns
LOL. Wasn't expecting a response this quickly! You had this one sitting in a word processor somewhere, didn't you?
Anyway, glad to see you posting again. I will keep writing if you do!
Author's Response:
Lol, yeah, it was sitting in there for a while. But part of my resolution for this year is to be more proactive so I'll be churning out updates sooner rather than later. Also, I want to say, big fan of your work. I love the concept of your story and the setting you've established and the various characters, especially how lewd the giantesses are but also how protective and loving they are of their tiny men. Albeit how they express those traits varies, and we see the results.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2025 1:14 AM Title: Rachael Returns
Wow this story continues to amaze me with the characters and overall story like even thought it’s a bit of a lighthearted story ( well lighthearted that it’s not overly dramatic and serious lol) it’s still very interesting great work and don’t worry about rushing to get the next chapter out take you time
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you like it! Yeah my intentions with this story was something fun and lewd. A giant, friendly goddess not quite aware of her surroundings interacting with the tiny world around her.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2025 3:17 AM Title: Welcome Ceremony
You should get back to this story. I used to love reading it when it was coming out!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thank you! Sorry for the long wait! I have several more chapters planned so please look forward to it!
Date: September 18 2024 2:06 PM Title: Rachael's Morning
I'm really enjoying this story! The settings are pretty unique and made it a very interesting read!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try to reveal things bit by bit with each chapter and a good setting means good material for storytelling.
Date: September 16 2024 3:05 AM Title: Rachael Visits a City pt.2
I'm so happy you brought this one back!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your patience! I'll try to upload more frequently so it doesn't feel like I've forgotten this story.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2024 4:34 PM Title: Welcome Ceremony
I read the first chapters, and only skimmed through the others, but i really like setups/scenarios that are based on misunderstandings or skewed perceptions of a situation. Usually goddess stories have excessively murderous ones, so that's a nice change
I also love how she is altruistic in her pleasure, albeit in her own way ;)
I will look forward to the next chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The idea was to have a sweet but naive/dumb goddess surrounded by perverts who teach her wrong and shenanigans ensue when she goes elsewhere. Plus she's got a lewd streak as big as she is.