[Report This]Date: February 15 2024 9:15 AM Title: The Bigger They Are, The Harder I Fall
Thank you for this nice new chapter!
I'm pleased to see the story development is going strong, keep up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. This chapter and the next are going to be important plot wise, so I'll do my best to stay strong. 💪
Date: February 15 2024 3:03 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Personally, I hope that the pacing of the story will increase some more so we can read more about characters growing over the years while Nate stays the same.
I really like Hannah and I want her to grow even faster!
Like, maybe Hannah starts growing like crazy once she hits puberty, so her parents send her to a special clinic for about a year to be studied. However, the doctors do not find any abnormalities and once she comes home Nate is shocked to find that his sister has become the tallest in the family at over 7 feet tall!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Chapters 4 and 5 were supposed to be just one but the basketball/Kerry storyline grew too big. So the pace should be more like 6 months per chapter. But I am getting pretty close to the grand reveal, and things might speed up after that.
Date: January 03 2024 7:26 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
So I just read all three stories. I just see a good young man's wife being destroyed by jealous little sister. I like to think that she tries to fix some of it. But I don't see things turn out well for him. Looks to me like things are going to go down a dark hole for him. it'd be one thing puberty did maybe let them grow in other areas become swimmer fit. and maybe his genital getting bigger so he can satisfy taller girls. I don't know if I'll keep reading this I'm type of guy that likes a happy ending. don't get me wrong I like to see the trials that people have to go through to get to a happy ending but.
But hey this is your story you write the story you want to write you can't make everyone happy.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. The end of chapter 3 and the first part of chapter 4 is a pretty low point for the protag. I do plan on a happy ending but I understand if it's not enough/taking too long for you.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 5:38 PM Title: Coach can we get a Sub(stitution)?
Great story so far, hope you'll continue it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm committed to this story. The updates might not be fast now that we've gotten through my backlog, but they will keep coming.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 6:51 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Love it. definitely will keep my eye out for updates
Author's Response:
Thanks! I have one more chapter in my backlog that will be posted on Jan. 2nd. After that updates will slow down, but they will keep coming.
Date: December 20 2023 1:38 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
I read all three chapters on your AO3. And man, I really like your story! Chapter 2 is my absolute favorite right now, and that ending still give me shivers. This first attempt of yours is incredible in my opinion! Don't lose ispiration 'cause this is really intriguing. The couple Hannah and Jess are my favorites hands down. Please keep it up! It's been awhile since i read something like this, and i missed it so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the kind words. Wow! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'll keep writing the best story I can. New chapters won't come very quickly, but I promise I won't stop until the story is done.