




Date: April 08 2024 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story, not a fan of farting but following for all the other stuff.
Author's Response:
Well, a lot of my commissions tend to have a fair amount of ass and fart focus, thanks to my earlier stories. This one seems pretty mild in comparison to some of my others, but I think its pretty safe to say that it'll be present throughout the story.
Hopefully you're enjoying it regardless. Either way, thanks for taking the time to read and review!!





Date: April 08 2024 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great so far! Love how, she's already accepted him as a little pet but he hasn't really realized it yet
Author's Response:
I'm not sure that either of them have quite realized the reality of their dynamic yet. Amanda loves her brother and just want to be accommodating, not realizing that accommodating for someone that size looks remarkably similar to petcare. Meanwhile Ryan is painfully conscious of it, but feels like he still has some autonomy. I forsee a moment down the road when they both come to the simultaneous realization about the reality of their new life.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review!!
Date: April 04 2024 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved their dynamic. Hope to see more of Amanda, teasing
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, plenty more in store for our dynamic duo. Thanks so much for reading!!





Date: April 03 2024 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really liking this story so far. I hope there is a little more domination with Amanda taking a bit more control. I feel like she has the potential. I love the more gentle family dynamic but with more forceful domination that might seep into the cruel.
Author's Response:
My understanding is that there will be some point in the story where Amanda might dip her toe into some more forceful domination at some point as their dynamic shifts a bit, but I don't think we'll see her becoming outright cruel.
That being said, I write at the will of the commissioner so who knows? Thanks for reading!!





Date: April 03 2024 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awww! They're so cute and wholesome! I really love their dynamic! They actually feel like siblings.
Really loving the feet scenarios too. Hope there would be more
This is going to be one of my new favorites. Keep it up, mate
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story so far! I'm confident there will plenty more feet in the future. Thanks for reading!!





Date: March 26 2024 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
awh, such a wholesome start.
while i know it's prolly gonna get more uh, smutty, i really do hope the dynamic between these two remains sweet, in one way or another, at least.
Author's Response:
Yes, its certainly going to skew lewd eventually, but based on my discussions with the commissioner, it seems to me that the dynamic between them is going to be very loving still. I'm glad you're liking it so far. Thanks for reading!!





Date: March 26 2024 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. Can't wait for more! Hopefully he ends up under his sister's ass some more haha, maybe while she's just in a thong ;)
Author's Response:
I understand from the commissioner that there will be plenty of ass interaction coming down the line. Stay tuned!