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Reviewer: pantherdx5 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2025 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

There's a lot of good in the story the boss is a great character, and some of the other women are becoming so. The witch wanting this man is less believable than him growing women larger.  The doctor is alright haven't seen enough of her yet to see how interesting she is. The setup and scenes are generally fun and enjoyable so let me be clear before I move onto the bad, I do like this story.

Aurora is depicted as existing only for the main character since she is obsessed with him through the whole story, yes watching him all day and coming when called makes her the weakest character after the main character. She could have gone on plenty of dates with way better people than the MC. She should truly just want to teach him a lesson, not want to date him or be with him. But she hasn't been in the story enough so hopefully she is shown as more in the future. 

My biggest gripe is the main character is just incredibly stupid, I don't know how he functions in society and holds down what seems to be at least an average job. Every time he speaks I think he's a grade schooler that's the level of dialogue he uses. I get it's to portray him being constantly nervous but he doesn't have basic understanding of anything in life it seems like, I assume he has a learning disability. It makes Aurora look bad trying to go after him like she is, he's not worth dating, messing with I guess, but she would just find it sad after a while since it's like kicking a helpless puppy, and no you don't want to date a helpless puppy. I truly don't want them to end up together, even if he becomes a nice guy he's still an annoying idiot. I guess it's the porn world so just calling a woman pretty means they are perfect for each other and that's all he has to do, when I feel like he can barely tie his shoes. Let them part as friends at the end and she learns her own lesson and gains her own self esteem. Fixing his height fixation doesn't also fix the host of other issues he has. 



Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks for such a big comment!


Aurora's like a very distant character, yes, but she's also the main reason for the whole plot. And no worries, she'll have a better development later on ;D


Sorry if he seems too dumb, it's just... I think it makes it easier for him to fall in the same mistake if he's unaware of what he's saying. However, I didn't mean to make him seem so slow. That's my bad, and I hope I can fix that as the story goes on. 


Thanks for the feedback! I'd love to know what you think on the upcoming chapters!

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2025 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 15

A great chapter. 

I know you probably got umpteen dozen chapters already planned and written out. But I think he needs a protector. like someone that's a little overprotective. Maybe someone who's loyal to the boss. But maybe likes him



Author's Response:

A protector? Hmmm... an overprotective lady? I don't know if I can add this, however, the idea sounds good! So I'll think about it!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2025 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

Thank for the update. I wonder if he makes a comment about his size. Will it change it? Or is it just women that it can do it? 



Author's Response:

I believe I left a comment in one of the early chapters, or maybe I just thought about it LOL. But no, he can't. Else, he could be able to change his size back to his full height, and that wouldn't be fun for the story XD

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2025 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update. Looking forward to see where this story is going to end up. 

I hope he doesn't get to much smaller. Don't get me wrong I don't mind a story with a short person. But when the person gets to small I have a hard time with them saving any hard / heavy contact with out getting crushed. Just my thoughts on it.

Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Yeah, crushing becomes a major fear when shrinking the main character too far. Although, I don't know where this story might stop in terms of size...


But I'll keep it up ;D

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 06 2025 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love the chapter thank you 



Author's Response:

Amazing! I´m happy to hear that! Hope you like the new chapter this month! Coming really soon ;D

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2025 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 10

Not bad. Can he make just parts of a woman bigger? And we know that women make him smaller. But could they make his package bigger? Because of they keep getting bigger he might need some help to keep them happy.



Author's Response:

Not individual parts. But... you´ve made me curious about the package part... maybe I can make a fun chapter about it. Won´t make any promises, but I hope I can get there within some chapters.

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2024 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 9

I like this story vary much. I wonder if his ability works on just a part of a person's body?



Author's Response:

It´ll be interesting if it did, but no, it won´t work separately. Mainly because his main focus, and jealousy, is on height, but the overall expansion´s a part of the magic ;D

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2024 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

Nice, I love growing Milfs and Mothers

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2024 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

Maybe he has an odd uncomfortable moment with his male colleagues too seeing him get smaller hehehe 



Author's Response:

That sounds like a cool idea! I´ll try to add it, but it´ll take a couple chapters from now... 


Thanks ;D

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2024 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 2

He should wish all milf moms grow huge and thick, over 10ft tall!



Author's Response:

Hmmm, that could be interesting...

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 04 2024 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ok this might be fun. I'm not usually into shrinking men stories. More into just tall women. So let's see what you got next. Can't wait.



Author's Response:

The shrinking gives the perception that all women are taller, but I do get what you mean

And keep an eye on this story, because it will surely get intersting ;)

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2024 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice, I like to see a growing mature mother!



Author's Response:

There will definitely be a mature woman´s growth ;D

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