Reviews For Family heirloom
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Reviewer: artisio Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 - It's in the blood

Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: Evildictator Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2025 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Withdrawal

Blair is growing too (or at least her boobs are). Interesting! Maybe The Shadow formed a connection to her after the events of last chapter?

I liked Violet's struggle and I appreciate that she's bitchy but not evil. That character trope seems like your specialty lol (Vazquez, Ae Ri).

Keep up the good work! Always glad to see you upload



Author's Response:

Omg, I thought I responded to this earlier! 


Thank you so much for the kind words! Yeaaaaaaaah, Violet is incredibly bitchy (apparently how I like them, lmao) but not really evil. And yeah, Blair is catching some strays (which will TOTALLY come up again later)!

Reviewer: Evildictator Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2025 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Breaking apart

Really loving this story!

The interaction between Blair and Violet in this chapter was enthralling, and I love that Blair still cares about her (formerly) little roommate. Very interested to see where this goes, keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)


Yeah, Blair is ULTRA caring (sometimes to her own detriment). She's also feeling certain things but I don't want to spoil anything! 

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