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Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2025 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10

Nice and steamy chapter, pun intended in this case. I was wondering whether or not things would get more adult-rated with a literal sex scene in the shower, given that Eloise and Asher are a couple and all. Also curious if there'll be a scene where Asher watches Eloise literally grow right in front of him, maybe when they're in bed together or out in public. It would be quite amusing to watch Eloise burst out of her clothes in the second hypothetical, groaning and complaining all the while about "stupid tiny clothing" or something along those lines, given her personality and whatnot.

I put a review on Giantess City during an earlier chapter about how tall Eloise is going to be at the end of this story, and you replied that she'll be more than 15 feet as the story progresses. Curious to see what her final height ends up being and whether or not the growth might potentially be reversed, either fully or partially. Otherwise, Eloise is gonna need effectively bigger EVERYTHING (housing, clothes, food servings, etc.) for her to live somewhat comfortably and conveniently.

Anyways, good stuff overall!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2025 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great update thank you.

Reviewer: Rain3890 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2025 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

gotta Feel bad for the poor people that work at the mansion that has to deal with a super sized brat LMAO


great chapter



Author's Response: Thanks Rain!  And lol I agree with you :D

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2025 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2025 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well some the brat is definitely coming out.

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2025 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

Just read the last two chapters. I think the story is going great keep it up.

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2024 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good!
Can't wait for the next chapter of Aaron story and the world of growing women

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2024 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

Good chapter. Let see how's the new Dynamics work for them.

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2024 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

Very good



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, eve!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2024 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good stuff so far. Keep it up 

Reviewer: LenioTG Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great start, thank you for sharing! I hope she won't get too tall to unrealistic heights, it's looking good so far!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

I like it so far ☺️ 

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2024 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

I like it so far ☺️ 

Reviewer: Ten11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2024 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, you didn’t mince words here. This was a great start. Good introductions, several seeds planted, and even a little bit of action. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: repaidon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2024 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really like the premise and how insecure Asher is and how assertive Eloise is (and she is only gonna get more dominant). I think this dynamic will be exacerbated as time goes on. I'd also love to see them compare muscle and Eloise beating Asher at physical tasks with ease, much to Asher's dismay.


Good start so far. Looking forward to it!

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