[Report This]Date: August 27 2024 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Encounter (Mimi)
Hey there. Just wanted to say I'm greatly enjoying the story so far. Giga giantesses strike a sweet spot for me since one of the things I love most is the scale and power difference of the giantess. Now make them goddesses and give them special abilities and it's even better! The utter hopelessness of the humans' chances for winning, the godslayer mecha being so weak it wasn't even noticed, the casual playfulness of the goddesses contrasting with how devestating their actions are to the tiny humans, all good stuff.
I've also enjoyed the bits of worldbuilding and the hints that, while the goddesses enjoy the destruction they cause, a few of them seem to have mixed feelings about it. Ignis feeling bad about revealing her true self to Mimi and wanting her to join them as a goddess makes me wonder about the whole "why do the goddesses destroy humans every 1000 years" part. Then there's the offer of turning Mimi into a goddess. It was similar with Ryan in that a goddess scorns humans but wants to keep a certain one safe.
I look forward to seeing where this story goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Giga giantesses are also my favorite so I hope I am doing the genre justice with my writing so far. The worldbuilding, plot and development of characters are all aspects that I have been thinking deeply about, which is why I am hesitant to post chapters even after finishing them(I always find a better way to convey something or deliver a scene for previous chapters while I am writing later chapters). Nevertheless, I am glad that you are also enjoying the plot/worldbuilding elements in addition to the giantess content.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2024 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)
Amazing story, you could even mage a game out of this, i loved the plot and how its very well known that we stand no chance but yet through the story the characters struggle to at least try something. The AI imaged also give a very well picture of the characters and the situation. 10/10
Author's Response:
Thank you for the support!
I'm glad that you are enjoying the plot so far. I try to incorporate a sense of mystery/suspense in the worldbuilding and plot delivery, and my biggest worry is always that the reader ends up feeling lost if I do a poor job. I hope that the story hasn't been too difficult to follow so far.
Regarding making a game out of this story, that would take a miracle since I lack any of the skills to make one, but one can always dream of what it would look like: a giga giantess goddess waifu collector/gacha sounds like a game that would instantly drain all my savings.
In the meantime, I'll just do what I can and focus on making this story as good as possible.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2024 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)
Firstly, something needs to be said on how you made me log in into my account again to write this review, as i dont usually log in on my account anymore on this site, so the fact that this is even here is surprising
but to be honest, im a big sucker for these kinds of stories, where we have immensely overpowered apponents our main character has no hope of beating, insane scales on sizes, and maybe even some corruption/saviour plot going on with the female lead mimi, its just great.
THOUGH, as i said all of that, id rate this a 8/10, i think the story is great, but i just feel like theres something missing, i dont know what that missing thing is but i do know that what it is can really bump this to a 9 for me, Really impressive stuff for your first work here on the site!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the genuine review!
I'm happy to see that you are enjoying the story so far, I'll do my best to keep improving. There are a lot of concepts and character dynamics I'm still looking to explore, so I hope that I still have something up my sleeves that will impress you. I'm still new to writing stories so any feedback is greatly appreciated!
[Report This]Date: August 25 2024 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)
An amazing story so far! Such a breath of fresh air to the Giga/ Tera Genere. Great character writing, very discriptive in all the right ways.
The pictures make a great addition to the story to help visualize the sicale of each goddess.
I wait with baited breath for each new chapter as the story unfolds! 100/10*
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your support!
I'm glad you are enjoying the character writing. I always try to put focus on the character dynamics, I'll keep doing my best to keep it interesting.
Date: August 22 2024 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)
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[Report This]Date: August 22 2024 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 0 - Prologue (Ryan)
An excellent story involving Giga/Tera :D
Looking forward to the next chapters ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support!
This is my first story and it will probably be quite long, so please bear with me.