Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2025 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

Danielle's amused "I told you so" attitude is perfect.
Not to mention how she plays with Billie's little body... and I'm happy to see Billie get some giantess action too!

I love the time clock toy idea!
Sam and Cal's reactions were both great.

Of course, I love that Lucy got a little quicky in with her doll before having to grow her back.

Last but not least, Lucy and Michael having fun with full-sized Billie was hot.
In particular, the line "his calm tone didn’t even hint that he had humped her entire body with his dick hours earlier" was insanely hot! Once again that dissonance I was talking about!
The teasing and tension of this story are just as good as the action itself!

Amazing story! Thank you so much for writing it!
I will DEFINITELY be commissioning you! 

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2025 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

INCREDIBLE chapter!!!

The way that Billie protests as she's being played with, fighting and losing her enjoyment of it all is delicious.

The way that the customers' fondling of her is describing as this overstimulating blur is perfect as well.

Sam unable to resist tasting Billie, both an act of playing and bullying, not giving the Mini even a moment of rest, was hot.

I loved the humiliation of Billie seeing her now-giant best friend seeing her like that, combined with the tension of Peyton considering and then just barely resisting playing with her tiny friend.

The car ride home only heightened that tension! The psychological whiplash of seeing her friend back to normal size, seeing those hands that were only minutes earlier enormous and gripping her body now normal and gripping the steering wheel... intense.

Sam is such a perfect tormentor!
Also, the decision from management to have Billie just be naked is just too good.

Middle-aged lady cooing at and playing with tiny younger woman is always PEAK size content!!

Ugh, Billie's little punches trying to resist before she loses herself to the stimulation... so sweet~

Astounding installment, good sir (or madam) 

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2025 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

Starting off with a bang on this one!
Danielle's "intervention" with Billie is pure heat! Great action!

Lucy taking her own little turn is icing on the cake.

Awww Heather is so sweet.
I hope she doesn't lose respect for Billie wanting to still work as a Mini.

Another terrific installment! 

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2025 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love the way this chapter begins with Billie's coworkers chatting with her casually and with a friendly curiosity, only for that to immediately give way once again to treating like a toy as soon as she's reduced in size.

The introduction of Heather's character is perfect. She may be my favorite!
I love how in the middle of her kindness and sweetness, she still thanks Billie for being "our store Mini", as if the role is a pet/mascot instead of a kind of employee.
I can't wait to see what happens with her.

Sam's treatment of Billie is so hot. She knows exactly what she's doing, how Billie feels about it, and doesn't hide any of it.

Lucy's attitude is so perfect at the end. 

Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2025 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

Amazing 

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2025 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

This story is pretty fun so far! Very breast-focused. I love that this is all Billie’s choice to show up each day. It would be fun to see her bump into a coworker outside of work - I wonder how they’d react to her? Especially the ones that have violated her.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Yes, I find that scenario hot as well. I plan on playing that up a bit in coming chapters.

Reviewer: expenti0 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2025 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

Nice that there's a new chap.

As a small gripe, I don't like the picture that was added to the first chapter. Partly, because Billie read a bit smaller in my imagination, and not as mature, but also, because in my personal opinion, it doesn't fit quite the tone of the story. The store feels more like a well-lighted place, with a bit of a surreal bright atmosphere. The picture is more like a dungeon shot, as dark as it is. I think an anime style would fit much better to the size play. It would also make it seem a little less dark and tragic and more like crazy hentai plot. Also, the collar seems wrong, as the one you described sounded like something futuristic, and not plain chains.

Now that that's out, back to the positive. I like how she was rinsed afterward. More like you'd wash a toy, rather than a person. Just good he didn't go to flush her insides.

As always, you can be absolutely free to take up any of my ideas. Thinking them up is wholly different from reading what happens to them. So I'm more than excited about what you'd make with them.

Yeah, I think clothes add to the experience. Especially with objectification, keeping the factors for the illusion up is part of the fun. Clothes are also a form of interaction, as is changing and taking them off. Without them, there's not as much room for interaction aside from the carnal desire, which may get a bit dull if it's the same thing on repeat. If this story would just be about Billie getting groped for the Xth-time it might end up boring. It's the possibilities that are opened up that make this so exciting.

Regarding ideas, I'd have this:

Gracy interaction: Still about being placed on the glue pole. Yet because Gracy wants the full immersion she goes further. She'd place clothes on her, the kind that can just be pulled on from above, like dresses or skirts, of course in anime style. Then maybe add typical items, like a microphone or a magical girl wand, gluing them to her hands. Then she'd glue her feet to the ground and place a wireframe around her body, where the wires would keep her head and limbs in place, but so that big people can still adjust the form. After making her take various poses, she'd find that her shouting still disturbs the illusion and therefore places an anime face mask with a gag on her. Eyes with lenses or open, so no blind play. Then she'd place her between her other figurines so nobody can tell her apart. Maybe add a wig to make the illusion perfect.

Would be fun if someone searches for her, but can't see through the setup. Of course, eventually, she'd be saved.

This one could also be used as a prize game, where people will have to figure out the mini out of the figurines (maybe having to buy the wrong guess), and most fail miserably because Billie is so damn convincing (maybe until someone notices the wetness below her pole). After all, tech shops sometimes also deal in this stuff. Maybe this one will even use a specially produced "Billie" figurine for this game.

Also, regarding the pencil idea: How about that one uses a slight drain function where it "connects" to Billie and uses the liquid via a chemical reaction to create color? This way, she'd truly become an integral part of the writing instrument and it would be essential to stimulate her properly to keep it writing.
Though, maybe giving it a squeeze or shaking it would suffice. ;)

Those ideas would also work with a Billie in uniform. I mean, they can still reveal everything, but being uniformed adds to the "employed" experience.

For the arcade idea, you may like to read "Sex Machine" by QueenNyanlathotepon deviantart (https://www.deviantart.com/queennyanlathotep/art/Sex-Machine-Shrinking-878519631). That one covers it very well, but I think the idea could've been fleshed out by "playing" more with it. Like alternating strokes, using the vibration function with impeccable timing at the perfect spot, you know, all the highscore hunting stuff.

Also, maybe one could use her directly as a mouse? I guess one would have to place conductors to her nipples for left- and right-click and to her back a laser sheet for movement. She'd probably quickly complain about the disproportional attention to lefty. Aside from the flowing electricity of course. Not sure if you got more modifications in mind for a functional mouse. Some setup to keep her straight, of course.

Hope none of these ideas go too far. Might partly be a bit much, but I also prefer it if things remain within certain limits (though, as I said, remaining uninjured and being able to go free afterward suffice for my shallow boundaries). I'm not a fan of pure torture and don't get the excitement of pain solely to cause pain. So I think your story still manages quite well in this regard (though maybe allow Billie to have her breaks once in a while).

It bothers me that I'll again have to wait for a month now, but I guess there's no greater compliment to make an author. I'll wait eagerly and like the other times keep my fingers crossed that I may see one of my suggestions in practice (though, it's your story, so no bother).

Author's Response:

Hey, thank you for the detailed reviews and ideas on this story. I really appreciate it.

Sorry the updates are so far apart, but I do them between my job, family life, etc.

Also, thanks for the critique on my story pic. I agreed and took it down. I may post another one in the near future.

Btw, if you're interested, I'd love to have you beta read my chapters before I post them. I also plan to use your mouse pad and doll display ideas in coming chapters. Really like those! Message me at the email listed on the latest chapter if you want to discuss this further. Have a great day!

Reviewer: expenti0 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2024 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

Another great chapter.

Don't worry, I don't think it's particularly dark yet. What I consider dark is if the character is completely hopeless and has lost any agenda. If there's absolutely no chance for them ever getting out of the torture, which you find quite often on this site, with mini's living in a world where they can only wait for a gruesome death or are kept against their will, with no hope to ever get a better lot in life.

Billie is in no way like this. She's still in on all this on her own terms. Also, I don't mind temporary situations. Predicaments keep things interesting and are basically the staple point of size play stories. I think you can still go quite a bit further (to be honest, my ideas went a lot further). As long as she can at the end of the day walk out of this all with all her limbs intact and her mind not forever in shambles I wouldn't consider it particularly dark (or week, or month if it's a big predicament).

Also, I'd still consider things pretty tame. Until now, things stayed at fondling, so there are still a lot of other bases to claim.

Personally, I hope we'll soon go back to her wearing clothes. If she's naked right at the start, there's little way to go from there. Also, they make a lot of the charm. Outfits are a part of doll play after all. The uniform added a lot to her role as a sexualized toy. You know, instead of real clothes, they could now have her wear real cheap plastic doll clothes instead, to save costs. The kind that gets mass-produced for dolls. It adds to the figurine play, as you seldom keep dolls naked. (Yet they may have small cutouts at certain spots.)

I'd say, I'd like to see Billie in bigger predicaments revolving around her size. I'm sure we'll soon see more intense things than fondling. I'm here for Billie's predicaments and this story does a great job at promising some that aren't quite common and will hopefully be intense.

I'm all in with seeing the different approaches of her co-workers. Especially Gracie. Sam seems pretty straightforward, so I guess things will stay at quick direct bodily interactions with her. Gracie gives me the impression as if she'd love to collect her for real. Lucy could be interesting too. She doesn't seem to have much agenda yet, but I'm sure one could find her doing a lot to Billie, if it means promoting sales while at the same time doing stuff to Billie. She seems like the kind to invent "exciting" marketing initiatives. Such as a living sex machine arcade. Bind Billie to an arcade machine that stimulates her and see which customer breaks the highscore based on her climax. Would be fun to get some highscore hunters, who'll try to "break her" with the perfect game method.
I'm also waiting for Heather's return, who may add a lot more, once she awakens her darker fantasies regarding having a living doll. I dare say she has a lot of equipment at home that can be repurposed. (Though, she's currently out. So I'm curious how she's going to get reintroduced.)

To be honest, I'm pretty curious if there's anything other than the stuff that already happened one could do regarding size play, based on the fact that Billie has big boobs. Couldn't quite figure out anything that would repurpose them. (Maybe using them as a mousepad? Might work for an IT store, but I think she's not the right size for that.)

So let's see what's going to happen next!

The next chapter can't come soon enough!

Author's Response:

I suppose the interaction has been pretty tame overall. The latest chapter goes a bit more graphic, but still no violence or torture. That's not my thing.

Yes, I'm planning to focus more on the different approaches of her coworkers in this second half of the story. There will be lots of interactions with both male and female giants.

I know you like Billie with clothes, but, going forward, I don't think her coworkers will let her keep them on for very long once she shrinks!

You've given me some more ideas I might steal. The sex arcade machine is brilliant, and I love the idea of using her mini jugs as a mousepad!

Thanks again for leaving a review. Hope you enjoy the latest chapter.

Reviewer: pvt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2024 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Is there any way Heather returns as a rescuer/kidnapper but believing it’s for Billie’s own good?   It can lead up to the escape hatch in the back that leads to heathers purse, to be taken to her home, get a sign statement that trader moes is completely abusing its mini employees?   An sometime in the night they cheers over wine or gives over to letting her drink with her, and leads to heather passed out to billie summoning courage to explore Heather, but slipping under her clothes to feel her fit sculpt abs, thighs, breast, nipples, to eventually crawl on heathers crotch to play with.   This will entice the slumbering giantess to indirectly without knowingly use Billie as a sex toy.

Author's Response:

That is a fun idea. Don't worry, I still have plans for Heather

Reviewer: expenti0 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2024 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Waited long for this one (had to create a new account, because my password is lost and the site doesn't send a new one).

The idea with the tape was nice. Size-specified bondage is one of the kinds of shenanigans that actually make the size relevant.

I have a good feeling about the next chapters, especially as the characters slowly start to become more unhinged. Until now, it has been rather tame, with only fondling.

Now it feels like there might be more to come and each character might have its own thing in store.
Heather, for example, might be closeted, but that could end up worse if she has tiny doll toys or even a tiny male doll to play roughly with Billie.
Or maybe those doll equipment, like a horse that has "inserts" so the doll won't come off.
Though, if the pen idea is still a thing, she might finally get to write that long report she's been stalling. As long as she doesn't have nervous pen habits. ;)

On another note, our MC really should have a lawyer take a look at that contract because I'm pretty sure it's not completely legal.

By the way, is there any form of schedule, or at least a rough estimate to tell if it would make sense to look for updates during the next weeks?

Author's Response:

Those are all tantalizing ideas. I might steal some of them. :)

Sorry for the long wait between updates, but I think I've rearranged my schedule so I can update more frequently.