Date: October 26 2024 2:46 AM Title: ch. 1: Rightfully, p1
This story rocks. Even beyond the delightful storytelling and language, the highly motivated characters, and the world, the meta world building in the translators notes absolutely tickle me. Love it, hope to see much more!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! You're too kind.
I'm glad to hear people are enjoying the meta world building, it's a fun bit of spice I'm enjoying sprinking in.
Next chapter should be up in a few days!
[Report This]Date: October 15 2024 10:10 PM Title: ch. 1: Rightfully, p1
Great fantasy and adventure/ sci-fi writing here, hope you continue writing more stories. I like your inclusion of details to evoke the feelings and atmosphere of the scenes you are creating.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it.
I plan on continuing this one into a much longer story than my previous work, so stay tuned for more :)
[Report This]Date: October 15 2024 2:18 PM Title: ch. 1: Rightfully, p1
Off to an exciting start!
Sandy's attack on the town was great, showcasing the power imbalance between giants and humans with some great interactions, but that fight scene was incredible! It was really well choreographed, the actions all flowing smoothly into one another. It felt as vivid as watching a movie. I enjoy a good revenge-obsessed hero, so I'm excited to see how Mary develops. The environmental descriptions and bits of world building are intriguing.
Great stuff! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review!!
I'm happy you enjoyed the fight scene. I wasn't super confident that it was something I could write well, so it's lovely to hear. I've been growing more and more attached to Mary as the story grows in my head, and I think she's gonna turn out great. I'm glad the worldbuilding was at interesting, I can't help myself but inject it into everything I make and sometimes worry it's boring/too much.
I'm having a lot of fun writing this so expect a new chapter soonish. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: October 15 2024 11:23 AM Title: ch. 1: Rightfully, p1
oh man, I love this beginning already. Always a fan of fantasy story like this, I want to see more!
...and I see 'destruction' tag there too, nice...
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm hoping to get the next chapter written as soon as I can. It's so much fun to write.