Reviewer: Yeo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2024 12:32 PM Title: Play time and cuddles with Mom

Would definitely say it was best to redo the chapter, even if it slows things down a bit.

Not sure if you saw last my review but what do you think about Jerry randomly resizing by a few inches at random every now and then after the inital shrinking, due to a quirk of the ‘Virus’? I take it Jerry will have at the very least some enhancements to prevent death, mutation etc? 

I definitely think that you should stick with the accident/unaware/ mistakenly gone too far, tags for their inital sexual interactions to maintain that mother/son bond. On that note, ideas.

Accidentally added to the laundry and put through the washing machine.

tangled in clothes and either folded up and put away or worn. 

Josie and Jen could play a blindfolded tasting game and Jen adds Jerry to the food that s to be tasted.

Jen could be just as much, if not more of a prankster than Josie and due to her history of exposure to ‘Tinies’ is far more sexually open about using Jerry sexually and enjoys engineering ‘accidents’ between mother and son.

One such prank could have Jen tie Jerry up and put him in Josies sex toy draw, thinking it’d be funny to see Josie go for some self love only to see her own son In said draw. Not realising that Josie had a man shaped dildo in the draw or that there’d be very little lightning when the next ‘stress relief session’ happened for Josie. Jerry could be gagged/unable to speak.

if Jerry can/does shrink to a really small size at one point, what if Jen added him to a piece of Josies jewellery without telling her and Josie ended up ‘proudly’ displaying her son as an ornament on a night out, while being completely unaware of that fact.

Jen could have a less fortunate tiny of her own that she uses for her sexual pleasure, (could be a convicted criminal) said Tiny escapes and either disguises Jerry as himself or Jen just mistakes Jerry for her Tiny toy. And lends him to Josie so that now she’s aware of the existence of shrunken men, she can experience just how much pleasure they can bring.

With a trusted group of friends or people aware of Jerrys ‘condition’ they could play a game of truth or dare, and the addition of booze succeeds in the mother and son duo pushing the boundaries between them. I.e climb into Josies mouth and be treated like a suckable sweet/lolly. Give your son ‘Jerry’ a fully body boob job, etc.

some more tiny related games would be interesting.

Author's Response:

All great suggestions!! I'll definitely be implementing these in along the way. And yeah, I'm not a fan of pain and death, so Jerry will be essentially invulnerable once he's changed lol. I did see your last review, thank you, and it really confirmed what I was thinking, I definitely wasn't happy with what I'd put out. I'll for sure be taking my time going forwards.

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2024 7:25 PM Title: Things aren't that Bad with Mom around

I wonder when he shrinks

Author's Response:

Soon, I swear lol.

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2024 5:32 PM Title: Massage for Mom

Very good, giant Moms are so amazing!

Author's Response:

Appreciate it! And yes, yes they are. :)

Reviewer: Yeo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2024 1:04 PM Title: Josie and Jerry

Great start… 

I’m looking forward to this continuing, do you have an update schedule, is the plot all planned out or not yet?

The dynamic between the two is going to be really interesting to explore, (really hope Josie doesn’t go from loving Jerry like a son to not seeing him as a person but as a sex toy/slave that needs to serve her whims regardless of his feelings just because he shrunk).

It was a great idea to give Josie a mischievous personality as it really allows for her to tease and prank/use him in a playful manner when Jerry shrinks, ‘while accidentally going too far’ and not change the dynamics that much. If you add a drinking habit drunken shenanigans and bad choices would also be an option.

What do you think of adding mistaken identity to the tags as well? I.e Josie could know what Jerry is (shrunken human) but not whom he is, and uses him as such.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your thoughts! I don't have a strict schedule, but I do aim for weekly, or at least bi monthly updates, life permitting. I can promise you right now, Josie won't ever see her son as a slave! Their relationship will remain solid, not counting some other "changes" wink wink.

She does enjoy her booze, and there for sure will be some tipsy shenanigans coming up! As for mistaken identity.. I can honestly say, its not an idea that's ever occurred to me! It's interesting though, and I'll certainly be giving it some thought.