[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 1:56 PM Title: Small First Steps
Not really a writer, and you came out with this banger of a story? You wrote it so well, and it flowed wonderfully from scene to the next.I hope to see more from you, because this is some high-quality stuff.
So, giant couples stories are my favorite. And here, not only did you write about giant couples, but there was an SW! A bratty SW being used as a sex toy by an older couple! Amazing! I love this premise so much, my eyes were glued reading it from beginning to end. The couple tying the girl to the giant member was so great—I can't believe how underutilized it is. And it worked so well here. I don't know if you plan on adding more to this story, but I think anything you come up with will be awesome. M/f interactions are near non-existent on this site, so if you write any scene from that front, that'd be cool!
Author's Response:
Arghhh! thank you so much!
I have to say going for that was partially inspired by your Liam character, I've never really considered couples before (its not my go to) but you really warmed me up to the possibilities, I'm a massive fan of Downsizing and this idea well it just got stuck in my head and it grew life from there.
This actually began life by accident, and was meant to be a smaller story branching off from another story I was developing but it got away from my attention a bit (bit more traditional F/M), I'm up for the occasional cruel giantess story but I do feel there's a bit of a blindspot to the more unintentionally cruel? or at least disinterested in their status/plight, the idea of just tinies as pets feels enough fuel enough there then having to physically hurt them and then contrasting that to just how normal the regular people are then making them the typical hot psychopath.
Basically make it feel natural so Clara and Henry are just.. regular people, a couple who adore each other, making them feel hopefully grounded (as far as you can in this genre) and build from there, I've a massive soft spot for the domineering older character type typically having someone who's a bit more naïve to the world, so they'll never quite take the younger seriously.
I know this story will likely go under the radar, not quite the usual reader's taste I feel but your review means the world to me so thank you again! I look forward to your future work massively.