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Reviewer: blackflashed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2026 8:10 PM Title: Shadows of Treachery

Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: Omanahan88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2024 11:00 PM Title: Shadows of Treachery

Great submission! Love the feeling of abject despair in those last couple of moments. 

Reviewer: Giganto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2024 7:40 AM Title: Shadows of Treachery

Excellent story 

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 01 2024 7:35 PM Title: Shadows of Treachery

This is a great idea, I love the premise. I always like halloween stories and shrinking but not many exist. Please consider making a sequel or prequel. I'd love to know more about the incidents 

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