Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your the title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn't help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I'm a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I'd love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord.

Discord: nebuladoodles

Email: luckiest297@gmail.com

So happy to see someone continue this story that has so much potential. Pretty much my favorite premise. 

Good work so far, but could use a bit more description on what the main character sees/smells/feels/tastes throughout the mom's day.