Naomi knowing what happened to the Lake House feels like something that might come back later...

I think what stood out to me the most was you still made me feel a glimmer of sympathy for Naomi.

After all, all these 'giants' deep underneath that exterior lay broken people, Naomi is essentially a darker version of Amber, who feels trapped in this life by her parents desperate for some outlet or comfort or agency in her choices.

Doesn't make her right in her actions but you can feel her grasping for just about anything that can take that hurt away.

Hoping this isn't the last we'll see of her, even if its not really her story I do hope we get a glimpse at their fate, and I certainly won't complain about Victoria getting comeuppance! (I'm such a hypocrite as I excuse the two lead giants...)

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Speaking of them, welp it seems both will have a lot to mull over, though I'm not expecting some change of heart from either, it'll push Donnica's overprotectiveness into overdrive that paperwork is getting pushed through quickly I fear now...!

Part of me wonders what if Trevor, feeling no other option and knowing the risks pressed the nuclear button "Maybe things aren't working out." down the line when he feels he has no other choice left, eventually I suspect Donnica is going to be hit with a fork in the road or something similar.

As for Amber, she'll blame herself for letting Rebecca get caught and the tiny will probably take the brunt of that frustration, It'll probably take something like Amber really hurting Rebecca herself for any of it to click its actually all her fault the tiny is suffering like this.

I can see Amber accidentally 'breaking in' her in as a slave, or perhaps that is already Rebecca's response to Naomi's violence placing her at the brink of death, she starts to see no other choice but to give into Amber's demands as the only one who could possibly or would protect her despite the abuse she's given.

Say like, by next morning she's kneeling, quiet, the snark and arguments are gone, she comes across as shell-shocked and does what Amber says to the letter without a word of complaint.

And Amber is freaked out, she hates it, she really, really hates it, she feels she's lost the girl she won't admit to herself she really likes and cares for, the one thing close to a friend and she's taken it from herself.

Suddenly Rebecca may as well have just 'gone' and she's suddenly like a fish thrown out of the water helpless at her own actions, none of her mother's money can fix her own actions, she's to blame for this.

Of course, hopefully such an event if it does happen isn't truly permanent for Rebecca's well being I hope, but enough to really make Amber panic and think to herself what she's actually trying to accomplish.

Ah the tension is great, keep these chapters coming because I'm loving it.

Author's Response:

I'm glad to read that first part, despite the darker tones of the story I always try to keep the characters deeply human... well most of them anyways ;)

Definitely interesting to hypothesize on what will come of the protags and their goddesses. I think there might be something big coming up soon for one of the pairs...

Happy to see the tension boiling over is working on the page, as a writer you're never quite sure if its landing or not until someone else reads it, and I'm even happier for the insights, keep em coming man :)

More chapters to come for sure!

This was a phenomenal chapter, especially the Amber and Rebecca segments!

One thing that stuck out to me in those segments was the real reason why Amber is so rough on Rebecca most of the time. Last chapter, I thought that it was because she thinks Rebecca is better than her and can't admit it to herself, which I still think is part of it. But now, with Amber getting irritated with Rebecca even when the tiny isn't viciously verbally going after her, it seems clear to me that a lot of Amber's behavior is guided by frustration rather than anger.

Frustration at what? Why unrequited feelings, of course.

I'm not sure if Amber is fully aware of it, but she's in love with Rebecca. Her worldview when it comes to tinies and spoiled upbringing make her a bit confusing for everyone else (but especially Rebecca) to read. But Amber shows little signs once in a while that Rebecca is really important to her; it's just almost impossible for Rebecca to see it, what with the punishments and the demeaning language directed at her.

We saw the most obvious example of Amber's feelings in this chapter, though. When Amber asked Rebecca if the she wanted Amber to lick her pussy for a change, to me, it was clear that she offered this because she wanted to make Rebecca feel good. I don't want to call this a peace offering, but Amber was definitely trying to be nice to Rebecca here. But Amber doesn't deal with rejection well, and she either didn't consider or didn't care that, even if Rebecca wanted that, she was too worn out for it. Granted Amber didn't punish her for saying no, and the two of them took a nap together, which is always sweet.

But I feel like this directly led to Amber feeling agitated at Rebecca simply for looking out at the ocean and enjoying a moment to herself, not even trying to bother Amber. Amber wants to be closer to Rebecca, and the fact that she can't get there eats away at her, something she misidentifies as Rebecca annoying her and thus takes out on her.

As for Rebecca, I'm liking how subtle her own feelings have manifested themselves over the last few chapters. She keeps realizing that Amber is more and more like her than she ever realized. They're both into soccer. They both like to travel. They both decided young that they didn't want to get married. They both hate the boring, hollow life that Amber's currently living. She sees a lot of herself in Amber, which is why I think, even though she hits the giant pretty hard with the insults, she tries to help Amber, too. That's why the advice always resonates with Amber, too, like the college advice in this chapter. She's proud of Amber when she does stuff like earn a starting spot on the soccer team. She cares about Amber, but she, too, can't admit it.

Honestly, I think that's why her words pack so much bite when she goes after Amber. Every time Amber calls her a slave or treats her like she's a toy, it feels like a betrayal, even though Amber has always been that way. Deep down, she sees the type of person Amber could be, probably should be, and being "put in her place" by Amber cuts deeper than she's willing to let herself acknowledge.

I think a lot of this culminated in the scene where they dealt with the beach vendor. Amber's frustrations made her take that ocean view away from Amber (that "oops" when she closed her hand was hilarious, by the way; how do you even pretend to accidentally do that?). She was trying to "put Rebecca in her place" like she always claims she wants to do. But we saw in this scene that this isn't what she really wants to do to Rebecca at all.

It was pretty clear from the start of the vendor haggling over Rebecca that Amber isn't the least bit serious about trading her for the bracelet. She exaggerates her tone to make it obvious to Rebecca that she was mocking the fact that she's considered property on the island, not trying to scare her. But scare her she did. This is the first time that Amber actually succeeded in "putting Rebecca in her place."

And it felt terrible for Amber.

She felt so guilty once she saw that Rebecca wasn't defiant, the thing she kept saying was pissing her off, what she said she wanted to take away from the tiny. Instead, Rebecca was terrified at the prospect of becoming a real slave. The way this hits Amber (which is described fantastically, by the way) shows that even just scaring Rebecca, "putting her in her place," was the last thing she really wanted to do.

And I loved Amber's passion once she realized this and cut the teasing out. She was firm that there would be no deal, and she was actually disgusted when the vendor offered her two tinies (who would probably be way less resistant than Rebecca). That "Fuck off" was powerful. I kind of feel like she was upset that the vendor wanted to treat Rebecca like that. She didn't say anything like that, but that's just the vibe I got here.

Amber trying to play off her feelings by calling Rebecca a wimp, yet reassuring the tiny, in her own way, that wasn't going to go through with any deal like that, was a very Amber thing to do. She's maturing quite a bit before our eyes, but she still struggles to deal with her emotions (which makes sense; I mean, have you met her mom?!). And letting Rebecca have her view back, which helped calm Rebecca down, was a sweet way to end the segment (I love the symmetry here with starting the segment with Amber blocking the view in frustration and anger and ending it this way).

Also, I enjoyed the vendor scene calling back to the first segment, when Amber rubs in Rebecca's face that she's just considered a piece of property on the island. This was a clever little thing to slip in so early in the chapter. Oh, and that sandcastle scene? So much fun! And yeah, it's Amber being a little nasty here (although, again, this came after Rebecca's harsh words), but I sort of felt like Amber was just having fun with Rebecca, too. She just doesn't realize how Rebecca sees things at her size (kind of like keeping her locked in the drawer with the socks in the tropical heat, which, yes, could have killed Rebecca).

But maybe the most interesting tidbit in the whole chapter was Amber telling Rebecca that Donnica and she weren't always so well off. Rebecca dismissed it, but I wouldn't be stunned to learn that Donnica went through some hard times when Amber was really young. That might explain Donnica's endless pursuit of power and need to feel like she's above everybody, especially tinies. Maybe nobody helped her out when she needed it most, and that led to a hatred of weakness in her heart. That's all pure speculation on my part, but I'm willing to bet those early days come up again at some point.

Speaking of Donnica, I had a slightly different view of her in this chapter than some other people did, based on the reviews I saw for this chapter. I get why people feel like Trevor is in big trouble here and that Donnica is becoming a lost cause, but that's not how I saw her behavior this chapter. Yes, it was bad. Yes, the influence of her friends is pulling her deeper into her darker urges (although having actually killed those tinies at the restaurant a few chapters back probably made that easier, too). But there was one line here that makes me think Donnica is ultimately going to come out of this on Trevor's side rather than that of her friends:

He would had no choice but to obey. Deep down, she knew he loved it, and eventually, after enough time, he would accept it. He would come to understand that this was his role, his station in life... to serve her, to worship her.

Donnica legitimately loves Trevor. Whatever else you want to say about her, this is clearly true. She's willing to forge those documents, take away his freedom, and never let him work again because she thinks he'll ultimately be happier for it. Yeah, selfishly, she wants him all to herself too, but she truly believes he'll come to love it that way.

He won't, though.

Donnica wants Trevor to be happy. She doesn't want to make him suffer like she does all the other tinies. That's key here. If Trevor becomes spiteful and bitter toward her or becomes a broken slave, it will destroy Donnica.

Like Amber with Donnica, Donnica thinks she wants to stamp out that rebellious attitude in Trevor, but she'll hate herself if she succeeds. Hell, that rebellious attitude is a part of the reason she loves him!

So it might be before they leave the island, with Trevor still being traumatized by Victoria achieving serial-killer status. It could be when they're back in the states and Donnica starts to go through with her doomed plan. It could be at some unforeseen point later in the story. But at some point, Donnica is going to recognize that something is wrong with Trevor, and I'm thoroughly convinced that this is going to turn the tide for her, at least when it comes to Trevor (I don't see her giving up on trying to enslave all tinies anytime soon or maybe ever).

I don't think I said this enough in my last review, so I'll say it again: Fuck Victoria! I do think the lead up to that vore scene (have you considered adding a vore tag to the story? This is a really good vore scene from the giantess's perspective) was really good. The backstory with Lucia, that she stole a man from Victoria in college sounded solid, and Victoria is definitely the type of person to hold a grudge. But to swerve us and have her not even care about that but instead be upset, after all these years, over some dumb joke about her chewing with her mouth open?! Jesus Christ is this woman unbearably spiteful! She's fucking evil! Yeah, her friends laughing at her eating Lucia is pretty terrible too, but they at least think she's doing this to a man-stealer. They probably wouldn't have even bothered to buy Lucia if they knew why Victoria was so mad at her. It's just so ... petty.

But again, that vore scene was so well done! You made it so suspenseful, drawing out the part before Lucia made it into Victoria's mouth rather than trying to overdescribe all the tongue movements from Victoria's perspective. And the little details, like Victoria moving her jaw slightly as she drew out Lucia's frantic efforts to escape and that exaggeratedly slow swallow, fuck! That shit was hot!

Now, if only you could catch the shrinking virus by eating tinies. Then this scene would be perfect!

Lastly, and as always, you did a masterful job here of selling the giants size, especially with the mothers. All the goddess speak hasn't gotten old for me at all yet (I never considered that to be something I was particularly into, but fuck if I'm not into it here!). Those parts are just masterfully written!

So yeah, great work! I'm so invested into seeing where you take things next with our four protagonists.

Well Victoria has really proved herself a monster. From the way she treats her daughter, to what she just did. She needs a comeuppance.

     As for amber she really needs a wake up. It’s good she realized that she wants Rebecca but now, something needs to happen for her to realize she actually gives damn.

     I don’t know if amber can ever treat rebecca As an equal, but she can come to really love her.

    I really liked both of their scenes. Both the sand castle, that was fun and creative. If you don’t mind I may steal that idea for my story. I also liked the merchant scene. It both showed the cruelness of the world and the growing feelings in amber.  I also loved that talk they had where amber told her that she might be alone for awhile. I loved that Rebecca had a realization that she and amber had at least a few things in common. 

     I love that amber does play with her tiny, after all a tiny is meant to be played with. Just she needs to learn to be playful not malicious. Help Rebecca come to have fun playing back. It’s one of the reasons I liked the sandcastle, it could have been fun for both, and an honest bonding experience.

also was wondering how long do u think this story will be.

Rebecca seems to slowly but surely getting through to Amber and maybe making her a better person for the future.

Not sure what kind of future with her mother about but a future none the less.

You know, I found that opening segment to be oddly sweet. I know that might sound odd, given the constant fighting throughout the segment, but, even though I disagree with Donnica here, I feel a lot more endeared to her than I did before (and I liked her before this, too).

One thing I love about this story is the complexity of its characters. There have been so many times so far that a character (read Amber and Donnica) has said one thing but meant something entirely different. I feel like almost everything Donnica said to Trevor in that segment was her disguising her true feelings. In fact, Trevor flat out tells us this in the narrative, when he notes that he sees the worry in Donnica's eyes after she tells him that he will be watched at all times and that he "can't be trusted alone." This makes sense, as the "trust" issue isn't that Donnica thinks Trevor is trying to "escape" her or somehow screw her over but rather that she "can't trust" him to be safe on his own. She says some harsh things to him here, but those stern words are coming from a place of concern, not spite, hate, or disgust.

To me, it seems obvious that the same is true of most of what she says in the second fight of the segment. The first thing she brings up after telling him that she won't let him take the new job is that she won't allow him out of the house during the day. She's not there during the day, so why is it a big deal that he stays there when she herself is working? Again, I think this is a safety issue. She's mostly respected Trevor's autonomy so far (as annoying as she finds it), as we saw when he told her he was searching for a new house to fill his lot. But at the start of this chapter, as noted above, we saw her put her foot down and be firm when it came to his safety. And given all the things she has gotten away with when it comes to tinies, I can see why she'd be concerned that another giant might take him from her or even just kill him if they get the right opportunity. So he needs to stay in her house, where it's safe. It's so obvious to her.

Then there's Donnica referring to Trevor as a slave and telling him that she owns him, as well as her getting indignant when he says that he needs meaningful work. She suggests that he can worship her while she's working as he's looking for meaningful things to do and gets mad when he tries to explain that a job is different. This all sounds pretty arrogant and bad on her part, but, in its own way, I think it's pretty sweet. Given what we've seen of their relationship so far, a lot of the more derogatory meaning behind these words is kind of removed. In my mind, all of this is just her way of saying that she wants him with her always, even in the literal sense. She doesn't want to be separated from him, and the fact that he would "insult" that notion by claiming that he needs to work upset her more than he can understand right now.

The thing about Donnica is that she doesn't seem to know how to express herself around the people she loves. We've seen this a few times with her interactions with Amber, maybe most clearly when we couldn't even hear her side of that call with Amber about soccer not going so well. Donnica cares deeply about her daughter, just as she does Trevor, but, unless she's pushed to the emotional brink, the power attorney just can't convey her real feelings to them. She's used to making demands and having them met almost immediately. Even her own friends are afraid of her (we'll get to that in a minute). Donnica is used to bullying her way into getting what she wants. She doesn't know any other way to approach things like this, and she damn sure doesn't know how to respond when it doesn't work.

We see that as she gets more and more frustrated as Trevor doesn't give in and agree with her. Honestly, she doesn't even need him to when you think about it. She's gotten away with so much with tinies, and she's sharing his registration, so she's holding all the cards. She could just laugh off his complaints and show him that he's a slave by sticking him somewhere he doesn't like and just going about her business. But she can't do that, because Trevor isn't actually a slave to her, no matter how much she tells him (or herself) otherwise. His opinion matters to her, and she wants him to be happy. She just wants him to accept that she's always right and to give her what she wants, too. Unfortunately for her, that's not how relationships work.

So Donnica tries threatening and intimidating Trevor into making an apology for daring to defy her. When that doesn't work, she tries to woo him into it by tempting him with her ass, telling him that licking her anus will be taken as an apology and getting even more upset when he refuses to do it. She knows he loves it, yet he won't do it because he won't give into her. That's so frustrating to her that it starts to bring her to tears. She's so upset that he can't just give her this. Why can't he just go with her on this?

Ironically, the stubbornness that kept these tactics from working are part of what attracts her to him, and I almost think part of her would have been disappointed if she had been able to scare him into submission.

So Donnica decides that she needs to "punish" Trevor. And how does she do that? By making him sleep in her slipper. That's right, the guy with the foot fetish who's totally comfortable sleeping inside her asshole is being "punished" by being "forced" to sleep in her slipper. Clearly this is no punishment at all, given his love of her feet. And, in fact, the very next segment makes clear that this was usually something nice that she did for him and that he "reluctantly enjoyed" the smell, even if it did "feel like a prison" this time. The real punishment for both of them is their anger at one another, but that wasn't intentionally given to them by the other: That's just how they feel in that moment.

Also, I thought it was super cute that she gave him the hand towels to use as a blanket despite her anger. There's something about being considerate when enraged that's just really funny to me.

But Donnica's real problem here is that, while (as I've said before) Trevor accepts her for who she is, she really hasn't completely done the same for him yet. He has a good reason for wanting this job, yet she has no interest in really listening to it. She just wants him to do what she wants. She also gets frustrated at that same stubborn attitude that she sometimes loves, meaning she hasn't fully accepted the good with the bad when it comes to him yet. Whether or not she gets there will determine if Trevor is able to get that job (or another one like it if Donnica can't reverse what she did) and most likely the course of the relationship overall.

One last thing on that opening segment. I thought it was a good move to briefly note that intimate segment in the shower between Donnica and Trevor. It shows that, despite everything, they're still very much in love, but, at the same time, writing a detailed smut scene in between the two fights would have felt really awkward. I think this light touch was a great way to handle it. It really read the room, so to speak.

Man, all that Victoria stuff was intense! That shit built up to the point that, at the start of the chapter's final segment, I was legitimately concerned that she might do something truly terrible to Trevor. That seething anger of hers reaching a boiling point, all the humiliations she put Trevor through, and the general way she treats tinies all had me feeling like bad things were in store for our hero. So excellent work building that tension! It was straight-up palpable by the end of the second-to-last segment, when she turned her attention back to Trevor.

But I loved how Trevor reacted in that moment. He spent most of the chapter thinking that Victoria would mostly listen to him the way that Donnica does, and he didn't really adjust to Victoria's radically different treatment of him. But, when he really thought she was going to do something to him, something serious, he didn't whine or beg; he was defiant without even saying a word. Despite his exhaustion and fear, he wasn't going to give her what she wanted. And even Victoria recognized that. After spending most of the chapter trying to show Trevor that he's not really a man, she acknowledged (to herself) that he actually was, and it turned her on in a way that she hadn't been in years. He separated himself from her husband, and that made her want to break him even more.

But she can't, because she's still sober enough to remember that Trevor is Donnica's and that Donnica would destroy her if she went too far with him. Hell, she even realized that she "flirted" with that line with what she already did. Unknown to her, though, I think Donnica would think she already crossed it with that stunt in the pool, as Donnica does think that Victoria is beneath her little man, and seeing her make him swim between her smelly feet to make him feel less than that probably wouldn't sit well with her.

What Victoria did with those slaves, though? Fucking hot! She did in one with her asshole, one with her clit, and one with her foot, giving herself two powerful orgasms along the way. And the way she held eye contact with Trevor both when going into the shower and as she squished that last tiny was incredible! From a fetish standpoint, I loved this! From a narrative standpoint, I'm curious and concerned about Trevor's mental state after witnessing a murder before his eyes and hearing two more just before that.

All of that stuff should make it very interesting the next time we see Donnica and Trevor together. I don't know if we're going to see that as she comes back from town or if we'll jump ahead by then, but either way, Trevor's likely going to be in a weird, distant place, and I'm really curious how Donnica reacts to that, assuming she's calmed down enough to notice and doesn't try to avoid him or something.

And hopefully, Victoria gets what the fuck is coming to her.

I don't always feel that way when reading stories on this site. In fact, part of the fun is truly not knowing if the worst people will suffer for their crimes and even sometimes not wanting them to suffer (I already said that I like Donnica despite the terrible things she's done, so I'm actually not pulling for her to get her just desserts). It's weird how that works sometimes. But not in Victoria's case. Fuck her. Anybody who hates their husband because he's not miserable enough and she can't drag him down to her level is just disgusting, although that little tidbit explained so much about her.

And don't even get me started on her parenting. What a fucking monster. Naomi actually wasn't too bad this chapter when it came to Trevor (or, at least, she wasn't nearly as bad as I thought she would be the next time she got her hands on a tiny), but I can see why she's as fucked up as she is. Victoria did nothing but scream at her and even physically abused her a couple times. That's so fucked up. Then there's that "I don't care what you want" line. It seems clear to me that the only reason Victoria has custody of Naomi is to keep her ex-husband from having her, which would probably make both Naomi and her dad happy. And Victoria can't have that. Because fuck her!

Yeah, fuck her! Did I say that already? Well, I'll say it again, fuck her!

But I want to clarify that me feeling this way about Victoria is a good thing. You created a truly despicable character that draws a strong emotional response out of me, and that's really the goal of writing, isn't it? So good work, and, you know, fuck her.

Lastly, I suddenly have a lot of sympathy for Naomi, despite her murderous intent with tinies. Again, I have a feeling that something's coming with her that's going to be pretty bad, but, if I'm write about that, putting this stuff into the story before that adds a delicious layer of complication to whatever it is she's about to do, and I absolutely love that! I now know her a lot more about her motivations, and that should really add something to anything she does moving forward.

So yeah, great chapter, even without including the ever-popular Amber-Rebecca dynamic! Given that it sounds like you wrote a lot of this out well in advance and, reading some of your responses to reviews, you might have been a little surprised at just how much the readers are getting into that arc, I imagine you may have been a little concerned about that by the time you got to this point. But you nailed this, and having a Trevor-centric chapter reminds us of just how interesting he is as a character, too!

The goddess, the allmight figure, is one of both nurture and destruction, and Amber and Donnica are living embodiements of these aspects… or maybe it’s more accurate to say they strive to be, to become Trevor and Rebecca’s whole world. This strive is more apparent in Amber’s case because the tiny one is more mature, smarter, more her own self than the owner. This battle to be his own self is also the dynamic of Trevor and Donnica – she has full control over Amber, but fears losing Trevor in every corner because he is already an adult man despite being tiny. Trevor on the other hand wants freedom but is, at the same time, terrified by it. This nurturing and destructive aspects became clear to me when comparing Amber and Donnica with Victoria, which embodies only destruction. She is a destructive force not only for tinies but also for her family. And the irony is that, this 100% destructive force maybe introducing us to a new dynamic between Naomi and Trevor - that of father and daughter – in which Naomi will start striving to take the mother's place in Trevor’s life.

All these complex psychological interpretations are highlighted by the great writen size and feet scenes, the story feels natural. Simply a great use of the blurry lines between desire, lust, power, love and family for development. The world isn’t monotone, the main and side characters aren’t one dimensional. I can only thank you for all the thought, the hard work, for writing and sharing with us.

P.S.: Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

My Trevor certainly caused a lot of mischief today.

I hope Rebecca is more well behaved in future installments to give these nice women a break.

Rebecca finally accepting her place warms the heart.

Also looking forward to more Naomi now.

The job thing with Trevor is really interesting.

I think Donnica's reaction to Trevor almost drowning is a bad sign for him regarding that talk. Donnica respects Trevor enough to not force him to do what she wants, but she also loves him deeply. She let him out by himself at the pool, then he almost died. Now she's not allowing him out there on his own again. So while she can't bring herself to force Trevor to do what she wants selfishly, she will force him to not do things that she thinks are dangerous, and I think, even aside from her obviously not wanting him to leave her house or work in general, there are some safety concerns with going out into the world to work like it seems like Trevor is about to do.

So this will obviously be a fight, and I'm really curious to see where that goes. Donnica's going to be tested here, and I think she's going to fail, at least initially. I think she's going to metaphorically put her foot down (she wouldn't do that literally to Trevor), but I don't think Trevor is going to stand for that. Ultimately, though, I think Trevor's stubbornness is going to win out, and he'll get her onboard with this. I have a few thoughts about how this might come about (which I won't mention in case I happen to be right), but the big thing is that Trevor is going to let her know that he's fighting so that he can feel like he's worth something for a change. I think, surprisingly, this is going to resonate with Donnica, who thinks all tinies are worthless (except Trevor). I think, in the end, she's going to respect that, especially if the proper sequence of events happens to help him drive that point home. She doesn't want him to feel that way, and she doesn't think he's worthless like she does everyone else.

I also thought it was really revealing that Donnica noted in the narrative that she placed Trevor above her friends (although they don't really seem like close friends anymore, do they?). We saw this before, when Donnica remembered putting Anabel in her place for daring to take shit about Trevor. Honestly, I don't think Donnica just thinks she's better than tinies. I think that she thinks that she's better than everyone, and that manifests itself more clearly with tinies because it's easier to fuck with them. Also, Trevor gave her that goddess-level confidence way back in chapter two, so I think that plays a role in why she more openly thinks that way about tinies than other normal-sized people. But, to me, she clearly does feel the same way about her "peers."

Which is why I think, based on the way Donnica stared down Victoria after she "saved" Trevor (Donnica obviously knew something more was going on there), that at least Victoria is going to be way worse off at the end of this trip than she is right now. Maybe the same could go for Olivia and Katherine as well, depending on if they get a little bold with Trevor. There's more than one way to ruin someone's life than squishing them. That's all I'm saying.

Amber and Rebecca keep getting more and more interesting as this story progresses.

First and foremost, anytime you hear somebody, real or fictional, say something like, "You're not better than me," that's about as clear a sign that the person saying it thinks the person they're talking to is better than them as you could possibly get. And it was clear to me throughout this chapter that Amber does think Rebecca is better than her, and she hates it. She thinks so highly of Rebecca that every hateful word the tiny speaks to her cuts into her soul, even if she'll never let Rebecca know it.

To me, that's the reason why Amber resorts to such cruel punishments. It's not about putting an ignorant tiny her place, no matter how many times she says it is. It's about lashing out against how hurtful Rebecca is to her. That and, in the case of the drawer punishment, Amber not understanding how deadly that could have been (in her first segment, Amber downplayed how bad the heat was, calling Rebecca's complaint about it "nonsense). Again, Rebecca wields enormous power over Amber, and she doesn't even know it.

As for why Rebecca is being so hurtful, I think that, deep down, Rebecca really does care about Amber, and all this slave treatment stings that much more as a result. So Amber gets the only weapon Rebecca has to fight back and make Amber feel some of the pain that Rebecca is feeling: Rebecca's words. Those words are the only thing that allows Rebecca to have any degree of control in her new world at all, even if that control is limited to Amber's emotions. Still, I don't think she realizes just how personal Amber takes her words, because I think she wouldn't attack her quite so viciously if she knew how much emotional pain things like her body shaming tactic put Amber through. She just knows that it upsets Amber, and she likes being able to fight back somehow.

So, ironically enough, I feel like if Amber had it in her to show a little weakness in front of Rebecca, the insults would probably stop and things would be better for the both of them. I don't see Amber doing that, though.

So why do I think that Rebecca really has feelings for Amber? That sex scene. Any doubt I had about that went away after that scene. Rebecca can tell herself that she has to do this all she wants, pretending that Amber will make her answer The Question and worship her pussy, but that's clearly not true. When she told Amber that she was never going to escape these trips and that her life would never amount to more than this, Rebecca stayed calm, no matter how pissed Amber got. There was no fear there. No concern for what would happen. Rebecca seemed damn near tranquil when faced with an angry giant struggling to keep her rage in check.

But put Rebecca in front of a giant vagina and now she's afraid of pissing Amber off? I'm not buying it. Rebecca is telling herself what she needs to in order to justify to herself why she's doing this. The truth is that she wants to pleasure Amber. No matter how many times Amber makes her do this, there's no way she'd let herself get so good at it if she didn't like it on some level. She knew just where to lick and how to bite, as well as the time to abandon clit and go deeper inside, where she also knew just what to do. These are the actions of a willing tiny. There's no doubt in my mind.

That's why Rebecca becomes overwhelmed by the sight and scent of Amber's pussy, why she subjects herself to saying what Amber wants to hear, that she's the slave and that Amber is the master. It's what she has to say to get what she wants. Amber was right all those times she told Rebecca that Rebecca loves it. And Amber exerts a degree of control with the carrot that she can never get out of the stick. But Amber let's her anger get the better of her and punishes Rebecca for her defiance (which I think at least a part of Amber respects). It wasn't until that anger melted away that Amber decided to fuck Rebecca, which gave her exactly what she wanted: someone who is better than her calling her master.

Also, Amber clearly loves Rebecca in there because she cares for Rebecca, even if her fucked up worldview makes it hard for either Rebecca or us to realize it. But I think that's why Amber put Rebecca on her stomach to sleep with her in what was a really tender moment amid all that emotional turmoil preceding it.

Oh, and I love that Amber hates all the other stuck up kids too. That little interaction with Naomi at Amber's door was interesting. As was that last segment with Naomi. At first glance, that seems like this scene was put in just for a bit of crush action, but if you're going to do with Naomi what I think you're going to do, then I think this segment might be a nice bit of foreshadowing as far as the main plot is concerned.

So yeah, once again I really enjoyed this chapter, and I was happy to see it come early even, even if I didn't get around to reading it for a bit. Excellent work as always, and I'm eager to see what our girls' and Trevor's time on Azurea Isle has in store for them in the chapter(s) ahead.