Fantastic as always; damn, the nylons games part was so hot. It could be fun if she played this game, but with Tiny, who hates feet. 

Other than that, the development of the relationship between the two couples is so perfect. I really enjoy the fact you show the weak side of the giantess; it's really enjoyable to have a more human part. 

And the way we keep building this world is so great. I feel like I said the same thing every chapter, but you always make them better.

Another excellent chapter, and some interesting developments, especially with the job situation with Trevor and Donnica that I'm looking forward to seeing more of. 

One small suggestion of possible. Now that the amount of chapters is growing quite large, it may be beneficial to go back and add titles, and title future ones rather than the generic part one etc. I say this from the perspective of potentially wanting to come back to re-read parts of the story or revisit favorite moments, that it's going to get increasingly difficult to remember what chapter is what and which scenes are where. Titles would go a long way with that 

So the Donnica/Trevor section was a bit surprising to me. Trevor went all out with her stinky feet (you told me that you like smelly feet a lot, and I told you that I prefer feet with no smell). But then when it comes to pussy licking, Donnica suddenly mentions "job" and all the fun goes away!! :(

I declare a prejudice here, sir!

I really did like that my prediction about Donnica offering Trevor a job came true. I hope that it genuinely works out even if Donnica's co-workers are going to be a plot problem for Trevor that Donnica will have to deal with.

Then when the Amber/Rebecca section starts up, stinky feet again! However I did notice that this time the interruption during the foot scene so I guess I have to call it even. This time with Amber teasing about Trevor.

I am super glad that Rebecca defended Trevor and I don't think it was fair for Amber to say there is only one "Ride or Die". I think Rebecca can feel that way about both. In fact, I think Amber is learning that she can control Rebecca during sex stuff, but not so much Rebecca's feelings about things. Rebecca even told Amber NOT to try to get revenge for the guy who shoved her down the stairs, and this time Amber remains quiet but we all know she is planning on squishing this guy with her bare foot, and having Rebecca watch it!

Good chapter although, peeyew, it stunk! lol

So, first off its nice to see Trevor and Donnica having some actual discussion, and maybe some actual positive movement. Though only time will tell if its truly positive. I get both of them. Also well done, you have actually gotten me to care at least some what about Trevor. He can think with more than just his dick. I am impressed. Though if I were him, I would have definently put in some stipulations. I mean he knows how Donnica sees tiny people, it seems reasonable that her coworkers are probably pretty similar in their own views of tinies. And he wont have the protection of love of Donicca to protect him when she is inevitably not around. So yea, dude please get some protections for yourself.  But I give him props for actually sticking up for himself against Donnica. Also I give Donnica props for actually being willing to work with Trevor. She still wants to poses him, but she is at least willing to acknowledge his wants.  Still if this was a real world thing, I would tell Trevor to RUN. 

     So now I come to my favorite dysfunctional couple, Amber and her tiny Rebecca. This chapter answered a worry I had from the precious wonderful chapter. That worry is that Rebecca would be consumed by Amber. That in giving in to her feelings and love and desire of Amber, that she would cease to be the feisty little Rebecca that could still put Amber in her place. While she is far more loving and willing to be Ambers actual servant, she can still challenge Amber, and Amber is actually willing to reciprocate. They are defiantly in the honey moon portion of their relationship. Though I really am rooting for them to go the distance. Though I do wonder what Amber and Rebecca will do if Amber ever does find a partner.  

     That ending does raise some trepidation for those that have seemingly wronged Rebecca though. We have seen that Amber is willing to get physical in protecting Rebecca and that was against a peer, I do not think I would want to be that guy when Amber comes a calling. Also really dude grab her by the neck and push her down the stairs. WOW, I kind a of want Amber to get ahold of you.

     So I really enjoyed this chapter. Interested to see what happens next. 

So have you read by chance how to break in your pet. If you have not, I would highly recommend it. The reason I ask is casue both Donnica and Amber read like much nicer and more loving versions of teh four main antagonists of that story. Fair warning it is very long, and the updates are rare. But The author has vowed to finish it. 

I'm going to start at the end here, because, first and foremost, I have to commend you on how you portrayed the sub/domme relationship here.

These relationships aren't built on anger, hate, or disgust, things that have driven both Amber and Rebecca throughout most of their time together despite them clearly having feelings for each other. They're built on love and trust. A sub gives themselves to a domme not just because they're powerful and commanding, but because they know their domme isn't going to abuse that power over them. That devotion is based on admiration and a need to serve someone you love, not fear and forced slavery.

When Rebecca goes full sub and calls herself dirt and nothing beneath Amber's feet, she's saying that because of how highly she holds Amber, not how lowly she holds herself. It's an expression of love rather than self-loathing.

And Amber, in her own way, is no less vulnerable than Rebecca here! This is well conveyed throughout the scene, with little touches like Amber's demand for Rebecca to "Say it," yet her tone firm yet edged with fragility, as if she might unravel if denied, as you so eloquently put it. This wasn't really a demand at all. It was a question. Amber was laying herself bare before Rebecca in a way that she never could before the events of this chapter, and she had to know how Rebecca truly felt in that moment.

There's no doubt in my mind that, if Rebecca had refused to say it, Amber wouldn't have taken what she wanted like before. She would have been devastated, and who knows how she would have moved forward with Rebecca afterward, but she never would have forced herself on Rebecca sexually again. This was one of those proverbial "rubber meets the road" moments, presented with an awe-inspiring sense of raw honesty, and it was beautiful.

Everything Amber did beyond this point was perfect too! When she "confirmed" what Rebecca was saying about being dirt and whatnot, she chose simpler, less insulting language, just saying that Rebecca was nothing compared to her and that she was a goddess to Rebecca. And the joy she felt during these moments was so sweet and heart-melting, especially after seeing how Amber really viewed herself all this time (more on that in a bit)! Every time Rebecca showed some form of submission, it filled Amber's heart with love, not smugness or arrogance.

I also love how the word "adoration" was used several times to describe how Amber was looking at Rebecca, and how she held Rebecca like she was "the most precious treasure in existence. This is somebody that knows exactly what Rebecca has given her and values it immensely, not taking it for granted at all. This was a loving dominance, something she was doing for the both of them rather than just for herself.

And I loved it when Amber stopped Rebecca just before the tiny could work her way inside Amber's sex, picking up a Rebecca frantic and wriggling with desire, "her voice light with laughter" as she watched how much Rebecca wanted her with "amusement and adoration" (there's that word again!). Fuck! That was a hell of a little power play, gentle and necessary though it was. The callback to the string from when Trevor got lost inside Amber was so cool, too!

Having Amber place Rebecca on her chest and covering the tiny protectively with her hand as they both fell asleep was such an endearing, heart-warming way to end the chapter, too. It shows that, while the two of them say that Rebecca is nothing compared to Amber, Amber values her little worshipper more than anything else in the world. That's what the sub/domme dynamic is all about!

And, of course, there's the whole new meaning to "I'm the slave, you're the master." This used to be something Rebecca dreaded, absolutely hated! For Amber, making Rebecca say this was a vicious way of putting Rebecca in "her place," with Amber taking smug pleasure in forcing Rebecca to express Amber's superiority to her. But here, it was liberating phrase for both of them! Rebecca wasn't put in her place; she found her place and accepted it with a full heart. And Amber didn't feel that smugness in that moment; she wasn't vicious about it at all. Instead, this was a new sensation altogether for Amber, something she had never experienced before. It wasn't about power: It was about devotion. And that made all the difference.

So now we're left with a Rebecca that is fully devoted to Amber, to the point of putting the teen well above herself, and an Amber who is thankful, appreciative, and bursting with happiness at this incredible gift Rebecca has given her. Seeing this expressed here, in such a raw, powerful form, was incredible, but I'm really interested to see how this plays out in their daily lives. If I had to guess, I'd say their interactions with each other won't appear too differently from the outside, but, to the two of them, the meaning behind their squabbles and "punishments" will be completely different. Oh, and I don't think Rebecca is going to get anywhere near as vicious toward Amber as she was before, for a lot of reasons.

So yeah, fucking phenomenal job showing us what a real sub/domme dynamic looks like in its purest form!

Jumping all the way back to the start, I like how the reason for Rebecca's resistance was finally verbalized. She was trying to fight those feeling deep inside her, wanting to hate Amber so bad but just not being able to do it. And holy fuck was that last insult she threw at Amber cruel. I was glad to see her realize that and apologize once she saw how badly she had actually hurt Amber. I've been saying this whole time that if she knew how profoundly her words were affecting Amber, and I felt vindicated here! Any doubt that Rebecca truly cares for Amber evaporated here, even if Rebecca still couldn't admit it quite yet.

It was also great to see Amber feeling real regret for taking out her frustrations on Rebecca in the shower. Yeah, it sounds like Rebecca was hard on her after practice too, but it was really nice to, for the first time, see Amber feel bad about punishing Rebecca after the fact. That, in and of itself, was a huge change for her.

The (kind of) three-way sex scene was incredibly hot! There's just something about a big forcing two tinies to fuck, especially when there's actually some history there between said tinies (as there was between Trevor and Rebecca), that's just enthralling. And that moment when Trevor realized that Rebecca was completely focused on Amber and vice versa when it was his dick inside her? Fucking brilliant!

Oh, and I loved the flick, too! I'm all about that casual stuff, especially when Amber was too entranced to even really think about what she was doing (not that she would be afraid to do that anyway). There was no ill intent or annoyance there. Amber just wanted Rebecca, and it seemed as though Amber's hand moved on its own to make that happen. To me, that added a deeper, more primal layer to the whole scene!

I also love the jealousy that Amber showed when she thought Trevor and Rebecca were trying to fuck. It was sweet, in it's own way, and obviously there was a level of irony there since Amber accidentally put them in that position in the first place while she was sleeping. But with Amber's mood, it makes perfect sense that she'd just assume the worst.

Trevor still trying to reason with Amber is pretty nice, too. They don't seem to get along too well on the surface, but I feel like there's some kind of respect there, something earned over time. Well, respect may be a strong word, but it seems to me that there's this odd bond between them. Amber sounds more like a typical teen around him than someone trying to dominate him, even despite calling him a worm from time to time. I don't know, this is hard to explain, but I just feel like something's there, you know?

I found Rebecca's denials in the next segment at least as funny as Trevor found them. Yeah, there might be something to the whole pheromones thing, but there's clearly so much more going on here than just that. You've done a masterful job of showing how much these two women have in common for some time now, and you've done so in such a nuanced way. So Rebecca comes off like a lovesick idiot in denial here, which is perfect! It complimented that apology I mentioned before so well, too. Oh, and Amber getting jealous at Trevor "touching" Rebecca again when he was comforting her was cute!

I'm curious if the next chapter will show us where Trevor and Donnica ran off to. That was an interesting little tidbit to note. Or maybe Amber and Donnica just needed the house to themselves for what came next ...

I started this review praising you for how well you wrote that sub/domme scene, so let me end it by praising you at least as much for how you portrayed Amber's abuse here.

First off, I had no idea that this was coming, so it blindsided me completely! I even have a character in my own story who kind of acts this way (but way worse than Amber) who has some similarities in her background, and I still didn't even suspect this. I'm both disheartened and so glad that Rebecca went through something similar so that she could recognize the signs, if that makes sense. It's terrible that this happened to her too, of course (and I wonder if that experience will come up again at some point), but at least she can use that pain to help Amber and show her how to not lose herself in the pain.

But this was fucking heartbreaking! That mantra Amber kept saying, "Nobody likes me. Nobody wants me. I just need to shut up and move on," sounds like something that was told to her. That wasn't ever stated, so maybe it's just a culmination of Amber's feelings, but the implication here is that the physical and sexual abuse weren't enough; somebody had to throw in some mental abuse for good measure. That's so fucked up. Those monsters took so much from her, and it sounds like they wanted to make sure they fucked her up as much as possible. My eyes are watering a little bit just thinking about that.

A sad aspect of this that isn't mentioned is that Donnica didn't notice any of this. I'm not even saying that to blame her. My mind goes back to Amber saying that things were rough when she was young, and I can't help but picture Donnica working so hard to pull Amber and her out of there, to give her kid everything that she deserves, but missing that deeper connection with Amber in order to get there. She was busting her ass and failing to make a real connection with these guys (If I remember right, isn't that why she decided to date Trevor: to try dating a tiny to see if it was any different than those empty relationships from before?), and she never even considered that those men would damage her daughter so deeply. She still doesn't know. I think this speaks more to the disconnect between Donnica and Amber than anything else we've seen so far (or will see, in all likelihood).

But that's pure speculation on my part, so I could be wrong on all of that. I just wanted to share it because it popped in my head while reading this.

But man, when Amber finally breaks out of her trance and "tells" Rebecca that she hates her, my heart ached even more. I love that it was noted that this was a question stated as a fact. Amber wanted so badly for Rebecca to tell her that she was wrong, and the way Amber finally let it all out after Rebecca did that was so touching.

It was a small thing, but I noticed that Rebecca thought of Amber as a child multiple times in this segment. Maybe it was unintentional, but I can't help but think this was one last effort to deny those feelings for Amber. She couldn't hate Amber anymore, so emphasize the age difference (how old is Rebecca again?). 

And the way Rebecca made Amber talk to her after it became clear that it was too much for Amber to talk to anybody else was such an awesome moment. You know, when it was noted that Amber and Rebecca talked for hours about her abuse, it was also stated that Rebecca "became the giant," with Amber being the vulnerable one for once. That's an incredible way to phrase that, and as much as I loved Rebecca before, I feel even more strongly about her now. Also, Rebecca was kind of "the giant" for most of this segment, with her fighting to cut through Amber's defenses, getting her to admit that she had been abused, and, again, making Amber talk to her about it. I'm a big fan of tinies stepping into big roles when the timing is right, and that's exactly what happened here!

Lastly, dipping back into that final segment real quick, I just wanted to say that I really appreciated you taking a second to differentiate between Amber drunkenly getting Rebecca off and the powerful moment they shared with Rebecca inside Amber's mouth here. These two scenes read differently anyway, but to have Rebecca note that was important, I think. Smut isn't always just smut. Sometimes it can reach a different level with the right build behind it, and this is a perfect example of that.

Damn! This chapter was fucking amazing and well worth its length! I don't think any of us can reasonable expect every chapter to hit these emotional highs (so don't worry about that), but I'm really excited to see what you've got for us next!

I have really grown to like the story. The latest chapter was the best one yet and the reason why I enjoy these story. Can’t wait to see how this story progress. 

This chapter is fantastic, by far one of the best. The development of Amber, first of all, is incredibly good; you start with the cliché of the teenage girl and end up with a complex woman with many secrets.
Then, the parallel between Amber and Rebecca is perfect; it creates such a difficult situation for Rebecca, where she can either destroy Amber with the weaknesses she knows so well or help her get better. I love the fact that she uses both approaches but, in the end, always tries to help Amber improve.
The trauma part of this chapter is really powerful; I really love reading it. It's so true, and I feel connected to it, even if it's far less severe than what you describe in this chapter.
And to conclude, the idea of the tiny people becoming more and more attracted to the giantess is incredible. Like an invisible force whos even stronger that their own will. 

Author's Response:

Happy to hear you say that it was one of the best chapters, it was obviously a very important chapter and needed to land perfectly, judging by the comments I think I came close to the mark :)

Thanks for the review man, I feel like you’ve been here from nearly the beginning, I love having you along for the ride.

I do have a request but if you don’t want to that’s fine. For many chapters now Rebecca having association with ambers ass has been punishment, 

Well could you write a scene where Rebecca is willing to submit to ambers ass and all that entails. also you teased about Rebecca having a golden shower, would you be willing to write that. If not I understand fully.

However I guess such things must wait till we see just how solid this new relationship truly is.

 So I can not express how much I loved that domination and submission scene. That was art as far I am concerned. And in my mind speaks to the core foundation of size play. The sheer domination and power of being big, and sheer powerlessness and submission of being a tiny before a giant. It’s why in my mind a big needs a tiny and vice versa.

Wow, I am speechless.

Wow! I expected Naomi to get her hands on Rebecca before the end of the trip, but I didn't expect Trevor to be involved, let alone a fucking massacre like that! 

When Naomi interrupted Amber fucking Rebecca a few chapters back, asking who Amber was talking to, I was sure Naomi would put Rebecca's life in danger and that Amber would swoop in and save her. That scene stood out too much to be nothing special. I'm sure that Rebecca knew Amber had a tiny with her then and that this is how she knew to look for Rebecca (although, to be fair, she could have just found Rebecca on the couch after Amber passed out).

I do have to respectfully, yet emphatically disagree with my good friend breatclimber, though. I can't blame anybody for having sympathy for Naomi (I do), and she's not like the other three bratty teens at all! Her reasons for doing what she did were entirely different from her peers.

First, I think you have to look at the abuse she suffers at the hands of her mother. Victoria hitting her is clearly not a recent development. Who knows how long violence has been such a prominent part of Naomi's life. But beyond that, you have to think about why Victoria is hitting her. She doesn't see Naomi as a daughter or even as a person, really. Naomi is a prop to Victoria, a living doll, just an extension of herself. She's not worried about Naomi's goth phase because she thinks it's a bad influence or some shit like that.

No, she hates Naomi's goth look and behavior because she's embarrassed by it. Think about that. There's no love in that relationship. In a lot of ways, Victoria treats Naomi like a tiny, trying to control her like property. The only difference is that Naomi isn't tiny and can therefore kind of fight back.

Also, Victoria's feelings on tinies in general are well known to Naomi. Her bratty "You do it. Why can't I?" questions are immature, yes, but they're also not wrong. If Victoria is doing it, how can she not expect Naomi to follow her example.

And I still say the only reason Victoria even wanted custody of Naomi was to take her away from her father, just to be a petty bitch. Naomi has been denied what, based on what little we know about him, seems like a decent parent because her monster of mother wanted him to suffer and is willing to make Naomi suffer to do so. So she has no good adult influences in her life and is oppressed by extreme authority.

Then we have Tempest Midnight, the role model. Looking at how terrible Victoria is, it only makes sense that Naomi would look elsewhere to learn how to live her life. Ironically, it's Victoria's own miserable lifestyle that has driven her daughter to become something she hates. But Tempest Midnight isn't some harmless goth influencer. No, she talks about exuding power by squishing tinies. Take power back from the adults in your life by dominating the tiny ones and showing the their place, which is a stain on her foot, apparently.

This is the only outlet that Naomi knows to take back some semblance of control in a life where all of it has been stripped from her, even at age 18. That's why she revels in it so much. That's why she embraces the goddess talk. And that's why she's temporarily lost in the illusion in almost trance-like state, desperate to crush Trevor by the end of it, consequences be damned!

This is a kid that needs help. Clearly. Her spoiled, bratty nature has nothing to do with what she did to those slaves. That was something much deeper and much more disturbing.

I mean, if access was the only thing separating Naomi from the other teens, then why didn't Amber squish Rebecca when she first brought the tiny home? Only Trevor knew she was there, and Amber could have just not told him and then no one would have known. She could have squished Rebecca for fun at any time with no consequences, yet she never did. That's because, despite her bratty nature and lust for power and dominance (a lot of which she probably got from her mother), Amber isn't really a bad kid deep down.

Neither are Abigail and Chloe, who were so innocent and cute in their domination of Trevor that an extra paragraph had to be added to make sure we knew that they did what they did because of their privilege and ignorance to a world that doesn't bend to their will because of their wealth and size. Honestly, they were so gentle and sweet, even while drunk, that I wouldn't have even thought of that if it hadn't been outright stated after everything was done. I mean, Trevor never actually told them no and kind of seemed more willing than not to smell their feet and lick their pussies. Hell, who knows how long it would have taken them to build up the courage to bring it up if Trevor hadn't got tired of waiting and wanted to get it over with. It was even noted how gentle Chloe was in lowering him inside her panties and that Abigail actually tried to fish him out of her pussy before passing out (I found this scene super adorable, by the way, in case you couldn't tell).

I just can't see how you can compare that behavior to anything Naomi did in this chapter. Access has nothing to do with why Naomi behaved so differently from the other three.

In fact, I'm pulling for the opposite of breatclimber's hope: I want Victoria to shrink and be at Naomi's mercy. That just seems so much more poetic and just to me.

But this was also a huge chapter for Amber!

I kind of feel like her view toward tinies (or at least Trevor) is starting to shift. Yeah, she called him a worm and said he was gross when Chloe asked if he was her dad, but when he told her the feeling was mutual, she didn't feel the urge to put him in his place. This could just be a sign of the "put in their place" excuse really serving to cover deeper feeling that she has for Rebecca, and I do think that's part of it, but there was a time when she would want to punish Trevor for defying her. Now, while she did think about those past acts of dominance, she had no desire to do anything to him being rude to her now.

More significantly, she seemed legitimately worried for Trevor when Naomi almost killed him. She yelled at Naomi to stop, and she didn't move toward Naomi because she was worried that a sudden move would get Trevor killed. To be fair, maybe this was just her caring about her mom and knowing she would be devastated if anything happened to Trevor. But I don't think we've really seen that out of Amber when it comes to her mom. There's love there on both sides, but that relationship is definitely strained. So I lean more toward Amber worrying about Trevor as a person more than as a slave her mom would be sad to lose. Who knows, maybe that new feeling that she came to understand when she saw Rebecca in danger actually helped her see the humanity in all tinies and this will be a turning point in how she treats them from now on.

I'm not ready to go quite that far in my speculation yet, but I feel like these things are signs that she could be trending that way, potentially setting her up for a confrontation with Donnica in the future.

Backtracking, though, drunk Amber going after Rebecca was a fun scene. I love how she thought she wanted to dominate Rebecca, then convinced herself that she was going to dominate Rebecca with pleasure! This is what she wanted to do to Rebecca, give Rebecca really, last chapter, when she felt that sting of rejection after Rebecca turned her down on the beach. She wants to make Rebecca feel good, to show Rebecca her love, but she can't admit that to herself, let alone Rebecca. So it takes her getting drunk to go through with it, and she has to tell herself that this is a way to "dominate" Rebecca. The passion in Amber's eyes as she does this and the way she giggled once she finished indicate more a sense of giddiness than a feeling of power and dominance. She was happy that Rebecca enjoyed herself so much.

And fuck did Rebecca enjoy herself. I'm so glad that she relented and merely convinced herself that this wouldn't work. If this had been a rape scene, it would have read very differently. But Rebecca wanted this, even if she, too, couldn't admit it to herself. Yeah, she said it wouldn't work, but she also read up on the subject and kind of knew that it would. She can say she didn't believe it all she wants, but she had to know that it at least could have worked. So, once that reveal had been made, I became thoroughly convinced that Rebecca wanted Amber to get her off, to give her the orgasm(s) of her life, but she couldn't admit it to herself. So she had to doubt the effectiveness of Amber's tongue, lips, and mouth.

But, jumping ahead now, when Amber saw Rebecca in danger, that feeling of protectiveness, the fear that someone might take her Rebecca away from her, was such a powerful moment. Her tackling Naomi and fighting her so intensely punctuated the scene so well. And of course Naomi fights dirty with that thumb to the eye.

But I like how you didn't show us what happened next between Amber and Rebecca. Of course, I also hate that you didn't show us what happened next between Amber and Rebecca. The question of how Rebecca and Amber feel about each other now and what they'll do next is almost maddening. Will things go back to how they were, and if they do, will either of them change at all? Or will they finally acknowledge what's been growing between them all this time? Will Amber start being more openly caring toward Rebecca? Will Rebecca feel grateful or maybe even be loving toward Amber? Will she at least stop being so vicious with her insults?

There's so much anticipation built here after everything that happened in this chapter, and I think it was smart to save it for the next one (or whenever else we see these two again if the next chapter is a strictly Trevor and Donnica one). Give that shit space to breathe on its own and certainly don't rush it in the backend of a chapter like this one!

Donnica's behavior throughout the chapter is so interesting to me. One of the things that stuck out the most was her use of the word "agenda." It confused Trevor, but I think I get it.

Donnica is a true believer. Victoria just loves making everyone miserable and tinies are easy targets. Olivia and Katherine simply enjoy being above the tinies and having them service their giant feet. But Donnica? She absolutely believes all of her own hype about giants being superior beings to the tinies. To her, Trevor talking about witnessing three murders is him trying to promote a pro-tiny agenda, because giants, goddesses, have the divine right to do what they want with tinies in her head. That's an absolute truth to her, which I think frames her actions a little bit differently than the other giantesses we've seen thus far.

Of course, there's some major cognitive dissonance there when it comes to Trevor, who she views as above even her own friends and fellow goddesses. But that's part of what makes Donnica so interesting. Trevor can cut through even her most devout beliefs, which is why we've seen some moments where her superior air is broken and she becomes just a woman in love, like at the end of this chapter, for example.

But man, when Donnica entered the room and took control after Naomi's massacre, that was crazy. Donnica commanded more respect from Naomi than Victoria does. And Donnica fucking hit Naomi, and Victoria didn't say shit about it! Hell, she wanted Naomi to apologize to Donnica! As a parent myself, that reaction is just so alien to me, but Donnica is so dominant, so in control, that no one even questions that shit.

I saw one reviewer call Donnica a giantess among the giantesses. I think that's a great way to put it. I keep saying that Donnica actually views herself being above everyone, not just the tinies, even if she doesn't fully realize it. This was a great example of that.

Donnica's heartfelt talk with Trevor at the end of the chapter is why I love her so much. She got wrapped up in her friends' way of thinking and her anger at her fight with Trevor, but, when it matters most, she remembered how she really feels and showed him her true self, the one buried under all that ambition and need to control. It was so sweet, especially that line about how she's "going to fucking listen now" as she prepared to go beat some Victoria bitch ass.

It was also great to see Donnica confirm her real reasons for killing that job opportunity. She only wants to love and protect him and give him everything he wants. She's in love, and she's worried about him. She wants to spoil him. She has the money to do that, too. She just doesn't understand why this was so important to him. She doesn't get that this was about reclaiming a small part of what he lost when he shrank, about being productive in society for once. I think that in this setting, she actually might have been receptive to that.

The make up between them was so great, and it made me feel content. Of course, that paragraph about resentment at the very end is a little unsettling. That's likely to lead to some bad shit between the two of them down the road, although it doesn't necessarily have to (but it probably will).

However, I feel like Trevor now shares responsibility for whatever comes of this. He had Donnica's ear, the real Donnica. This was his chance to explain why this was important and nip this problem in the bud, so that if another opportunity arose in the future, they'd be ready for it. At the very least, he could been at peace instead of feeling any form of resentment. But he didn't do that. Yeah, I agree that it was noble of him to put her feelings first and bury that shit to keep from adding to her guilt and fears. But this was a conversation they needed to have. If shit goes south with this relationship because of this, he'll have no one to blame but himself beyond this point.

But yeah, another fucking amazing chapter here! You paid off a lot of build here, while still building in other areas. I'm so excited to see where the story goes next!