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Reviewer: maybegiant0 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2026 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2024 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 3 (Sunbathing)

Great chapter! Love the unaware inshoe. Hope to read more of that. 



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

This is a fun project for me, so if I get in the mood I'll certainly write more

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2024 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, love how she accidently got him off. Hope to see more like this



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2024 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Man, I love this! And unaware toejobs from sisters are the best! My only take on this is Cindy's name suddenly changed into "Wendy" near the end. Aside from that, everything is perfect. Will there be more?



Author's Response:

Thanks, fixed it here too. :)

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