Date: September 02 2026 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just wanted to say that I genuinely had a great time reading this story and I really enjoyed how much detail you put into the Keijo world and its rules
Disclaimer
This is only my personal opinion as a reader and I am not trying to interpret your characters or story in any particular way I am simply sharing what stood out to me while reading
I really enjoyed this story from beginning to end What immediately caught my attention was how well you built the world around the Keijo setting The different techniques the rules between chibis and futsū players the team based format of the East West War and even the way the characters use their different strengths against each other made the whole match feel like an actual competitive event rather than just a simple fight
I especially liked how every character had their own way of approaching the match Nozomi relies heavily on instinct and improvisation while Kazane is much more strategic and tries to use the techniques she has learned from other players Sayaka has her incredible speed while Non relies more on her durability and physical advantages Seeing those differences interact with each other made the entire match really fun to follow
Kazane was probably my favorite character in this story I really liked her strategic thinking and the way she constantly tried to adapt to situations that were completely outside her expectations Her ability to copy techniques and combine them with her own ideas made her feel very clever I also really liked the way her thoughts after the match showed that losing to Nozomi was not simply another defeat for her She was actually reflecting on what happened and comparing her experience with previous matches
My favorite scene was probably the moment when Kazane used Ass of Vajra after intentionally allowing herself to enter Nozomis mouth I genuinely did not expect her to turn what looked like a guaranteed elimination into an opportunity to counterattack That moment perfectly represented her ability to think creatively under pressure
I also really enjoyed the final part from Kazanes perspective Her thoughts about the difference between being captured by Nozomi and her previous experience with Kusakai gave the ending a surprisingly interesting character perspective It made me wonder how Kazane will continue developing as a player and whether these experiences will eventually change the way she approaches future matches
I do have two questions about the story
First Did you always imagine Kazane as someone who would struggle with unexpected changes despite being such a strong strategist Or was that something you decided to emphasize specifically through this match
Second With the East West War being a four person team battle instead of the usual battle royale format do you plan to explore more situations where the characters have to develop completely different strategies based on teamwork rather than individual strength
I also wanted to ask something about you as the author How long have you been interested in giantess and size changing stories Was there a particular story character series or moment that originally got you interested in this kind of fiction
A little bit about me as well I am a commissioned based digital artist and I work with authors on turning their stories and characters into artwork and comic style projects I honestly enjoyed your story enough that while reading it I started getting a few visual ideas based around some of the characters and scenes
If you would ever be interested in discussing something like that I would love to talk with you and share some of the ideas I had while reading We could also connect on socials if you are comfortable with that
My Discord is doodles_world
I am not trying to pressure you into anything at all I just genuinely liked your story and thought it would be fun to talk with the person who created it
It took me quite a while to read the whole story because I kept stopping to think about the characters and all the little details in the match And honestly while I was writing this review I completely lost track of time and did not even realize when my coffee went cold
I hope I get the chance to talk with you sometime and hopefully hear more about your stories and what inspired you to create this world