[Report This]Date: July 06 2025 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7: Many Prices to Pride
VERY violent but that's what we're here for, also the Liese and Issara "friendship"
It's still peak bro!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2025 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 5: Knowing thy Enemy
This story is excellent. Engaging characters and vivid cruel imagery. I love the budding romance and Issara’s willingness to sacrifice her own kind. Definitely looking forward to Liese destroying more tomkins!
Author's Response: I appreciate the feedback. I'm especially happy that the imagery is working well; I wasn't sure if such flourishes would work well in such a story as this, so it's very nice to get insight from another perspective.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2025 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 5: Knowing thy Enemy
Gods, this chapter was awesome, I didn't expect another one to soon but it's a pleasant surprise. I am happy that Issara and Liese are 'slightly' warning to each other. We don't know much about Liese before her family... well. But I imagine that she is only distant and cold because her family kinda just died. Maybe she was much nicer and friendly before. Though she still ate Tomkins without the malice she does now. And I can't tell if Issara is lying about the lusting of Liese, but it's a nice 'flaw' if you could call it that, to her very no funny business attitude. 5 stars!
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the kind review. I'm not sure if I can keep up the pace that I had with these last few chapters, but I do hope that I can continue to pleasantly surprise.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2025 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4: As Mountains Yearn for Sky
So peak, the raw destruction is mind blowing. It's so...primal? And Issara is very very distrustful. I hope they truly become friends but I am not that naive. Love your story :>
[Report This]Date: June 28 2025 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Wanderer and the Witch
Dude you are so awesome, I've read on this site for years and it truly is a nook of the internet where you find so many amazing authors. You, sir, are one of the best. It's all so vivid and I can truly feel all the emotions of the characters. I feel as if I'm watching a movie when reading this. I hope this novel goes for a long time!
Author's Response:
I truly appreciate the kind words, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I do my best to give some depth and description without losing sight of the fact that it is still an indulgent size story, so I'm also happy to know that I've struck a good balance therein
[Report This]Date: December 29 2024 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Wanderer and the Witch
Now this looks interesting. The "giants" and "Tinies" BOTH seeing themselves as Humans is a neat angle.